Topic started by Venky Narayanan on Thu Sep 30 18:02:55 .
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Responses:

• From: rags (@ ariel.sun.com) on: Thu Sep 30 18:36:50
  
  Venky adengappa ninachen aaana udansunu...
  flow was good.
  
  Evlo veergandho ...indha veerasami kanavoda niruthittan sila per paithiyama alayaranu kelvi patten... :-)
  
  
• From: ravi SUNdaram (@ 192.149.1.168) on: Fri Oct 1 09:39:08
  
  Venky, Super.
  ---ippadikku suryakanth :-)
  
  
• From: pae (@ globalb25.citicorp.com) on: Fri Oct 1 09:41:33
  
  SUN: ))))
  
  Venky: It's a good title.
  
  
• From: rajaG (@ daecfp02.sprint.com) on: Fri Oct 1 09:52:34
  
  Venky,
  
  pOna dhadava 'thaayai minji....' ezhudhina pOdhu oru silarOda nija vazhkkaiyaiyE describe seiyyara maadhiri irundhadhu. idhu next step aa? indha dhadava ungaLoda experience aiyE kadhaiyaa ezhudhittELaa?:-)
  
  
• From: Vignesh (@ 1cust165.tnt1.hou1.da.uu.net) on: Fri Oct 1 11:29:16
  
  Tamil flow seems to be pretty good eventhough it depicts your personal thoughts(as our friends claim here......)
  
  
• From: Bharathi (@ 203.197.128.63) on: Fri Oct 1 12:41:39
  
  venky,
  un pErai mattum mAththi "vIrAsAmi" AkittiyE ?
  bEsh bEsh...nalla idea :-)))
  
  
  
• From: ganesh raghu (@ 18.houston-06-07rs.tx.dial-access.att.net) on: Fri Oct 1 16:29:25
  
  Venky,
  
  "Evvalavu Peroda Pagal Kanavu Aishu!"
  "Indha Kanavu Vera Yarukkum Meipada Koodadhu, Ennai thavira. Ishu!! Nee Enake Enakka"
  
  Very nice description of fancy thoughts. Kanavu thane! Marilyn Munrovai kooda Padukkai Araikku Azhaikkalam!
  
  One more feather in your cap. Keep up the good work!
  
  
  
  
  
• From: Venky Narayanan (@ inehou-pxy06.compaq.com) on: Tue Oct 5 10:35:35
  
  Thank you all for your nice comments...
  
  ...and it is certainly not a chapter from my autobiography !!!
  
  
• From: sabarinathan (@ 202.9.145.2) on: Tue Nov 16 02:12:08
  
  kadhai nalla irukku...aana pazhaya panithan...
  paravaille..sari en kanavu eppooo meipadum?
  
  
• From: Rekha (@ 12.raleigh-03-04rs16rt.nc.dial-access.att.net) on: Tue Nov 16 10:20:35
  
  The short story, due to its theme, and a subtle touch of humour/sarcasm, is engaging.
  Well done Venky!!
  
  
  
• From: kumar Nagarajan (@ unknown-31-159.ama-assn.org) on: Mon Nov 22 12:14:47
  
  Was really good. Way to go buddy. Develop Ur own style. It was resembling more of the short stories which comes in Kumudham. Thanks for taking us all near Isu. Hum! endru thanium intha ........
  
  
• From: Ranga (@ lang1ts4.ca.us.prserv.net) on: Sat Dec 11 12:45:54
  
  Thaths,
  Usually stories have a starting,middle and an end. Your story ends as soon as it started. The dream idea is also cliche'd. You could have build up incidents for the middle. Nice idea would be to try writing the same story with 'nagaasu' (gimmicks).
  
  

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