Topic started by pal on Tue Sep 21 14:23:34 .
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Hi friends!

Thanks for a good response to my earlier story which made me to write further. Since this story takes place outside India some of the dialogues or in English(with tamil script). Hope you find this interesting.


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'�İ�‘ ƒÏ™� µÅÌ°‘.'
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'ƒÏ™�. ‡î™�ª¥ÉÅ ƒÏ™�.'
'ºª, ‰ şùÜ µ‘ª ÷“ò ƒª'
'ˆÅÀ‘. ‡î™�ª¥ ‚̤Ÿ ¦—Ìø ƒÏ™�ÖÒ.'
'‚À‘Å. ƒÏ™�'.
'º‘´±Æ‘. ‡›�ÅÀ‘ş× —œ‘ÖÓª¥‘›�. ‡î™�ª¥ ƒÏ™�'.
'‹ş�. ‰ şÆÅ ş�‘Ç› —µã. —Òª'ø »şã ¨À‘ÑşÌ‘'.

'�ÅÀ‘ ‡î™� ‚̤Ÿ �ÒÑ ¦—Ìø ş×®ÅÀ‘'
'ƒÖÒ¥‘. …î™� ƒ¹° À¤œè —�ãò �İ�‘ ƒÏ™�Å. ƒ°¿ şº‘ª¨™�êÆ‘?'
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‡¨´³¿ şº‘ª¨™—�‘è. ƒÖÒòî‘ �ÅÀ‘Ú™� ş�‘ºÅ ×ÏÅ'.
'ÿ°‘şî —œ‘òî. ‡î™�ª¥ ƒÏ™�òñ. ƒ¿º ƒÖşÒ›�şé'.
'�¿º Ø€ãÆ‘ª¨™�¢ —œ‘òşîò.'
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ş�‘»¿º‘Ñ. …î™� �ݹ€° ×ãÑ™� —°ÍÆØÖ€Ò ‡òº‘Ñ.

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×¹°Ú¥ò ‡±Ñ Ùª¦Ö ŠÏ °ÁİÑ ×�¿º³Å, º‘̱™� ³€«Æ‘� ŠÏ ş°‘Ş �€À¹°³Å Á�ÚÅ µòé‘� ƒÏ¹°³. µÅÌ°‘ �—ÀÍ™�‘ØÖ »é¹°×è. �×è �ÅÀ‘ÚÅ �¿º‘ÚÅ ƒ›� ×¹³ ºÒ ‚¯¨�è ‚Çíì. µÅÌ°‘ °ÁŞÖ şºŸ×³ Á�™ �€éÚ. �×æÅ º‘̱ÉÅ Á� Ø€ÌØşÒşÆ ş°‘Ş�ã‘ÇîÑ. �×è ‚›�Ò´±Ö şºœ, ƒ×è °ÁŞÖ şºœ, º‘Ñ™�Å ‡ÖşÒ‘Ï™�Å ş×¦™€�Æ‘�ÚÅ, Øşµ‘°À‘�ÚÅ ƒÏ™�Å. ƒÏ×ÏÅ ŠÏ×€Ì ŠÏ×Ñ ‡ä±Ö ½Í¹³ —�‘¯¥îÑ. ‚î‘Ö ŠşÌ ŠÏ �€é. �×è Ø°Å Ø°À‘� —º‘Å€À�è €×´±Ï¿º³Å, ‚€¥�è �¬×³Å º‘̱™� �€éÆ‘� ƒÏ¹°³. µ‘ÃÅ ½±°‘� ˆ³Å ב›�Ò‘—Àòé‘Ö, µÅ ÀîÅ �¹° Ø€Ò€Æ µ‘íº°‘Ö —ºÏ™�¿ º‘Ñ™�é³.

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'ƒ³ ÙÌ µ‘¢� ƒ×›� ŠşÌ »èãÆ şº‘Ï™� �ñ¿»¢œ‘›�'
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'—×è€ã'.
'µÅÌ°‘ Ùª¦Ò'.
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'…î™� ‡¹° �ÒÑ »¦™�Å'.
'�¿º‘ ‡î™�ª¥ ¶€éÆ �ÒÑÒ �‘Ñ ƒÏ™�¿º‘'.

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'‡ò'
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—œ‘Öé‘¿º‘'.
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'œÍ. ÿ ³–›�. µ‘€ã™� ø˜Ö şº‘�®Å.'

º‘̱ ³–›� ‚ÌÅ»´°‘è. �«‘ÚÅ œ‘¿»ª¨ ˆş°‘ ş×€ÒÇÖ Äâ�, ş°ò—À‘Ş ºª¨¿ º‘ב€¥€ÆÉÅ,
�°í�´ ş°‘°‘î ¢ª€¥€ÆÉÅ ‡¨´°‘è.
�‘€ÒÇÖ º‘̱™� ºª¨¿ º‘ב€¥ÉÅ, œª€¥ÉÅ À‘ª¦ ت¥‘è.
ºèä™� —œÖÒ µÅÌ°‘ÚÅ ×Ì,

'€ù! º‘̱'
'€ù! µÅÌ°‘'
'€À ¥‘¦ —œª, ù’ ØÖ —�ª Á ‡ ÁÖÓïÆÅ º‘Ñ» Œº‘Ñ €À ºÑ´ş¥'.
'‡›�¿º‘ Ù̵‘¢�™� ½³ ¦—Ìø ב›�´ °‘şÌòñ —œ‘òî‘›�'.
'ù• ƒø Ù̵‘¢�'
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şœ. ŠÏ �ݹ€°Ç¥Å Ø€ãÆ‘ª¥‘ ˆş°‘ —œ‘ÖÒ �³ ‡Üşã‘ —ºÍœ‘Ǩ¢Ÿ. �×è ‡òîÀ‘ ş�èØ ‡ÖÒ‘Å ş�™�é‘. ŠÏ —º‘Ë —œ‘òî‘, �° À€é™� Šòº³ —º‘Ë —œ‘ÖÒ ş×¯¦ ƒÏ™�. ƒï ¶€éÆ µÖÒ ØõÆÅ —œ‘òî‘ �™�ÌÅ �´³™�ב.

À±ÆÅ, º‘̱€Æ¿ ºèäÇÖ ƒÏ¹³ ˜ª¦ ×Ì —œòé‘è. ºèäÇÖ ƒÏ¹³ �ݹ€°�è ƒÌ¯¨Å ‹¦ ×¹°î.
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'—Æø ‚¯¦. ‡ÜÍŠò —÷ª °ª õ“ ƒø ° şÀ‘øª ¿—̪¦Æøª �Ñè'.
'œÍ. ב›�. ƒòï™� µ‘ò …›�æ™� ƒò—î‘Ï Ù̵‘¢� �€° —œ‘Öşéò'.
'�ÅÀ‘ …›�æ™�Å Ù̵‘¢� �€° —°ÍÉÀ‘'.

�ݹ€° şÀÒ ‡ò �¯ş« ºª¨¨¢şœ. ş×é Æ‘Ñ Æ‘Ñ �¯® şº‘ª¥‘›�şã‘. Ùª¨™�¿ şº‘Ë �ݹ€°™� °€Ò™� Ÿ´±¿ şº‘¥®Å.

Responses:

• From: rags (@ ariel.sun.com) on: Wed Sep 22 19:44:22
  
  Hello Pal
  Very simple...Good though.
  But america vandhalum marapachi bommai kathai puthu vitham.
  
  
  
  
  
• From: ravi SUNdaram (@ 192.149.1.168) on: Thu Sep 23 09:05:52
  
  Very good one pal. Agree with you both in style and content.
  
  
• From: pal (@ 208.227.135.231) on: Fri Sep 24 10:18:08
  
  rags,SUN
  
  thanks for the comments.
  
  
• From: Venky (@ inehou-pxy02.compaq.com) on: Fri Sep 24 13:59:42
  
  pal. good one. kuzhandhaigal mentality-yum periyavargal mentality-aiyum nanraaga chiththarithirukkireergal ! I liked the Barbie and Veera naachi comparison. Since I am not experienced with the attitude of handling children, your approach sounds very convincing !!
  Continue the good work ...
  
  
• From: Ramji (@ 205.177.170.101) on: Sat Sep 25 07:59:25
  
  Pal:
  
  Your story has the simplicity of a Marappaachchi. Keep it up.
  
  
• From: vAsan (@ core10d48.dynamic-dialup.toad.net) on: Sat Sep 25 19:08:03
  
  
  
  …›�è �€° º¦™� µòé‘� ƒÏ™�é³. ƒÆÖº‘î, ‡ä€ÀÆ‘î µ€¥.
  º¦™�Å şº‘³ ÙÌ µ‘¢�ÉÅ º‘̱ÉÅ Àî±Ö �ì�ì —œË�é‘Ñ�è.
  
  בⴳ™�è. º‘Ì‘ª¨™�è.
  
  בœò
  
  
  
• From: Bharathi (@ 203.197.128.50) on: Mon Sep 27 13:09:45
  
  pal !!!
  kalakkittIngga pOngga !!!
  nIngga enkitta, nAnthAn heroine-nu sonnathum
  marappAchiya thAn solRInggaLOnnu ninaichEn (hee hee) !!!
  
  
• From: thanh (@ ) on: Thu Jan 16 06:11:41
  
  hihowareyou
  
  
• From: tvnbvt (@ ) on: Wed Mar 10 10:12:59
  
  dasgtrsa@@@@Q$q36456875UYTFHJLS7A89D6320E89023DJFWGHJCXHZKL;JVIODSYHSAUF
  
  

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