Topic started by Shakthi Shridhar (@ bangdp-36-209.mantraonline.com) on Tue Aug 13 15:50:08 .
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Yaaro ennai tottu paarkiraargal
NinaivE illada Ninaivu

Edo sabdangal, meendum nisabdam
Marundugal! Maathiraigal! Visaaripugal!

Nizhalai ninaivugalil aadum uruvangal
Enakkai kavalai padum janmangal

Naatkal sella sella
mella mella
uyirtezhunden

Ini todarum,
Ennakaai kavalai pattavargalin,
kindal pechu, poramai ennangal ..
sandarpa vaadangal
EllamE todarum!

Marubadiyum Edo namaichal
Adada vandu vitadu Kaichal

Uravugalin, nanbargalin,
azhagiya mugathai kaana
IdO sendru kondirukiren

meendum............

Responses:

• From: prema (@ 164.100.220.157) on: Wed Aug 14 00:32:34
  
  Yes, ur directly hits the centre of Human Behaviour
  
  
• From: Iyappan (@ lan-202-144-73-10.maa.sify.net) on: Wed Aug 14 01:21:58
  
  Shakthi.
  
  Good poem. savukkadi maathiri, adhe samayam yatharthamaana kavithai ...
  
  Good one.
  
  Iyappan
  
  
• From: "kavithai" (@ cache5-1.ruh.isu.net.sa) on: Wed Aug 14 03:33:45
  
  Dear Shakthi Shridhar
  
  oru manidhanin melliya unarvugalil thaakkappadum
  siru siru vilaivuhalai yadhaartthin pakkamirundhu
  solla varuhireergal
  
  nalla karu, alagiya kavithai
  
  enrum anpudan
  
  "kavithai"
  
  
• From: ec (@ bryant.rz-berlin.mpg.de) on: Wed Aug 14 07:16:27
  
  Shakti, vegu uNmayaana aazh mana uNarvugaLin prathipalippu ungaL kavithai! thodarattum ungaL kavippayaNam!
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ bangdp-35-170.mantraonline.com) on: Wed Aug 14 08:13:46
  
  Prema,
  thx
  Iyappan,
  thank you
  Kavidai,
  Nandri
  Ec,
  thanks
  
  :)
  
  U all encourage me to write more.
  I will try n improve !
  
  
• From: FlowerGuy (@ 202.95.127.5) on: Mon Aug 19 08:18:10
  
  arumaiyaana kavithai...arumaiyaana mudivu...
  manithargal ethanai suyanalamaanavargal enbathai nandraaga solliviteergal shakthi.
  
  "Naatkal sella sella
  uyirtezhunden mella mella"
  ippadi maattri amaithu - kavithaiyin azhagukku azhagu serkkalaam endru ninaikkiren.
  
  Also... your "nandriyurai" was very creative... :-)
  thx,thank you,Nandri,thanks - endru vidha vidhamaaga nandri sonnathu rasikkumpadiyaa irukku.
  
  sondham..bandham marandhu....inaiyamo-allathu-veru edhileyo addict-aagi...
  udambai keduthu kollum nanbargal.. indha kavithai padithaavathu thirunthuvaargalaa???
  
  
• From: kurankaatti (@ sf-proxy4.montgomery.com) on: Tue Aug 27 15:36:59
  
  manitha nEyaththaik kaaNa ippati oru kONamaa? viyakka vaikkirathu unkaL kavithai.
  
  
• From: m (@ melchior.city.unisa.edu.au) on: Tue Aug 27 21:53:49
  
  Wonderful Kavithai.
  Keep writing Shakthi.All the best:-)
  
  
• From: Thaya. (@ toronto-ppp3537608.sympatico.ca) on: Wed Aug 28 15:32:35
  
  "Ninaive illaatha ninaivu"
  
  "Naatkal sella sella
  mella mella
  uyirtezhunden"
  
  Kavithai nayam...
  
  but........
  Ini todarum,
  Ennakaai kavalai pattavargalin,
  kindal pechu, poramai ennangal ..
  sandarpa vaadangal
  EllamE todarum!
  
  took me two reading to see the thin line of the other side of the meaning.
  may be the arrangements of the lines...
  
  after all....I'm Amazed.
  
  Prema said it better.
  
  
• From: chella (@ 202.187.80.126) on: Sun Sep 22 02:58:12
  
  shakthi,
  kavithai porul theduvathurkku eluthuvatha illai pogal theda eluthuvatha illai mana atthmavukkaga eluthuvatha? ungal kavithaikku en valtthukkal..........
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ bangdp-34-76.mantraonline.com) on: Sun Sep 22 15:35:46
  
  Ms/Mr. Chella,
  
  "kavithai porul theduvathurkku eluthuvatha illai pogal theda eluthuvatha illai mana atthmavukkaga eluthuvatha? "<<<<<
  
  Adu avaravargal ennangalai, kurikolgalai poruthadu.
  
  Aatmavukkaga mattume Ezhudinaal, diaryil ezhudi, veetil kooda vaithu kollalam.
  
  Porul thedum muyarchiyil, aatma thriptiyudan, ezhudum pozhudu, pugazh varuvado, vaaaramar povado.....nigazhalam.
  
  Anda pugazhai etru kollum pakkuvamum vendum. Vaarada pozhudu, manam konamal, nambikkai ezhakkamal irukum pakkuvamum vendum.
  
  Thangal vimarsanatukku siram taazhnda nandri
  
  
• From: chella (@ 202.187.80.126) on: Mon Sep 23 00:33:47
  
  thanks for ur respon...........
  
  
• From: Thaya. (@ toronto-ppp3537473.sympatico.ca) on: Wed Sep 25 19:57:45
  
  Hmmm....
  Paakkaliyaa?illa,paakkaamalaa??
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ bangdp-36-223.mantraonline.com) on: Thu Sep 26 05:09:21
  
  Thaya,
  
  "Hmmm....
  Paakkaliyaa?illa,paakkaamalaa??"<<<<<
  
  Sorry could not get u!!!???
  
  Unfortunately by the time, u come online and furnish the explanation, i would have lost my curiousity.
  
  lol
  Shakthi
  
  
• From: Thaya. (@ toronto-ppp3537629.sympatico.ca) on: Fri Sep 27 16:35:53
  
  yeah true.
  I thought you would say some thing for my coment.(the first one) that's all.
  
  sorry i couldn't come often as i wanted.:(
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ bangdp-36-215.mantraonline.com) on: Sat Sep 28 12:50:53
  
  Thaya,
  
  thxxxxxxxxxx
  
  After all you are one of the regular critic/admier of my poems. Its just I missed typin thx to u.
  
  :)
  
  
  
• From: Manivannan (@ 202.9.150.69) on: Wed Oct 16 23:16:09
  
  arumaiyana kavithai - manathai thottuvittathu-angu thangivittathu .Great work Shakthi. Keep it up!
  
  
• From: Skanthavelu Nadarajah (@ edtntnt2-port-253.dial.telus.net) on: Thu Oct 17 06:49:59
  
  Shakthi,
  I found a nice Sri Karunamayi discussion forum hub in the AmmaNews site. If you wish, I will provide you the url of that site as well as AmmaNews. You are also welcome to log into those sites. I am logged on as "skanthan". I will still FH hereafter too, Shakthi. Anyways, I am happy to see you again. Jai Karunamayi!
  
  :))
  
  Regards,
  Skanthavelu Nadarajah
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ bangdp-34-76.mantraonline.com) on: Thu Oct 17 13:26:21
  
  Manivanna,
  
  thx for the encouraging words.
  
  skanthavelu,
  
  kool ! gimme the url. I may not post but I shall be happy to read infos at such sites.
  
  
• From: Skanthavelu Nadarajah (@ edtntnt13-port-451.dial.telus.net) on: Fri Oct 18 00:09:01
  
  Shakthi,
  Here are the urls.
  
  Ammas American website.
  http://www.karunamayi.org/karuna2.htm
  
  AmmaNews
  http://www.karunamayi.org/ammanews/html/
  
  Ammas Forum at Karunamayi.org
  http://www.karunamayi.org/dev/BB
  
  I hope you enjoy them. Jai Karunamayi!
  
  

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