Topic started by azhagu (@ 61.11.73.167) on Wed May 22 07:51:07 .
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kadhalippadhu easy than kadhaliyidam sollumvarai
kadhalippadhu sugam dan kadhali nam arukil irukkum varai
kadalippadhu sorgam dan kadhali nammidam pesikkondirukkum varai
kadalippadhu pudikkum dan kadhali nammidam mattum pesikkondirukkum varai
kadaliyidam sollamaleye aval arukin irunthukonde.........
kadalippadu inbamthan kadali nammaippatriye ninaikkum varai

en kadhalai avalidam sollammale nan avaludan valthuvarukiren
avalidam sollappovathillai en kadalai
avalukku theriyum en kadhalin aalam
avalukku theriyum en manadhin nesama
avalukku theriyum en thiyagam
avalukku theriyum enathu sollatha kadhal
avalukku theriyum enella asaivukalum
avalukkumattum theriyum en ella ninaivukalum
avalukku mattum theriyum en uyir avalal than iyankukirathenru
avalukku theriyum en natkal aval ninaivudane kazhikirathenru.
avalukku theriyum en ellam aval than enru.

Responses:

• From: avalukku (@ 210.186.64.96) on: Sun Jun 2 09:40:21
  
  eva ava!!!!!thalai vazhikkuthu.
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ bangdp-35-185.mantraonline.com) on: Sun Jun 2 13:11:10
  
  Contradictory!
  
  "avalukkumattum theriyum en ella ninaivukalum
  avalukku mattum theriyum en uyir avalal than iyankukirathenru
  avalukku theriyum en natkal aval ninaivudane kazhikirathenru.
  avalukku theriyum en ellam aval than enru. "<<<<
  
  
  
  Ivlo confidence irukku apram solla vendiyadu dane???
  
  "kadhalippadhu easy than kadhaliyidam sollumvarai "<<<<<
  
  so ivlo confidence irudum kadhal solradu kashtam?
  ??
  
  Kadhalil aazham irupadai enni kondu, kozhaitanatai moodi maraikum ennangal!
  
  
  Oru tiraipada paadal kaadil vizhugiradu.......
  
  "Enveetu tothatu poovellam ketuppaaar.....
  Sollada kaadhal ellam sorgatil seradu!""
  
  Kavidai as such (leaving the contradictory theme)
  is Nice
  
  
• From: Maha (@ brk-22-76.tm.net.my) on: Thu Jun 13 22:08:41
  
  Dear, Azhagu
  How can you write a poems such like this?
  Kadhalippadhu easy yah!!! em!!!
  
  
• From: Iyappan (@ lan-202-144-73-10.maa.sify.net) on: Fri Jun 14 02:14:46
  
  
  Avalukku theriyum naan kadhalippadhu
  enakkum theriyum aval kadhalippadhu
  iruvarum orunalum sonnadhillai
  indru varai nanbargalai
  engayo ieu thisaiyil
  --
  Iyappan
  --
  
  
• From: Maha (@ brk-22-76.tm.net.my) on: Fri Jun 14 03:17:51
  
  Dear, Iyappan
  It's really nice, short and brave
  Even all your poems is very nice.
  IMPROVE YOURSELF !!!
  
  
• From: iyappan (@ lan-202-144-73-10.maa.sify.net) on: Fri Jun 14 05:25:03
  
  thanks maha ..
  --
  Iyappan
  --
  
  
• From: iyappan (@ lan-202-144-73-10.maa.sify.net) on: Fri Jun 14 05:30:10
  
  Maha
  >>IMPROVE YOURSELF !!! <<
  Sure .. i will .. but
  if you give comments where i am going wrong in my poems .. definitly i can correct my self ..
  I expect your comments on my poems..
  
  THanks
  Iyappan
  
  
• From: shakthi (@ bangdp-34-120.mantraonline.com) on: Fri Jun 14 06:21:46
  
  Iyyappan,
  
  Ur poem is touchy.
  Good one
  
  
• From: latha (@ 61.11.73.167) on: Sat Jun 15 06:08:26
  
  wov superb azhagu......
  really great
  this poem is reflect my self......
  congrates.
  
  
• From: Iyappan (@ lan-202-144-73-10.maa.sify.net) on: Sat Jun 15 11:15:30
  
  >>Ur poem is touchy.
  Good one<<
  
  
  THanks shakthi..
  
  __
  Iyappan
  --
  
  
• From: Vaanmathi .A (@ 203.200.47.237) on: Sat Jun 15 13:22:49
  
  Sollaamal thavippathu Sugam,
  antha sugaththai ivviru kavithaikalilum unarkiraen,
  
  Mika Nantru! Continue pannunga Azhagu & Iya(ppa)n.
  
  by
  Endrum thodarum Natpudan
  Ungal Vaan.
  
  
  
• From: Maha (@ 203.106.185.81) on: Mon Jun 17 07:00:27
  
  Dear, Iyappan
  I'm not so good in writing poems but i like to
  read & think of it. Of course i will give my comments on each of your poems.
  Expecting more poems like this from you.
  Seriyah !!!
  
  
  
• From: azhagu (@ 61.11.73.167) on: Tue Jun 18 07:28:35
  
  Thanks a lot Vaanmathi ,maha,iyappan, latha and all friends..
  
  
• From: Iyappan (@ lan-202-144-73-10.maa.sify.net) on: Tue Jun 18 09:00:54
  
  Maha..
  Sure I will try to give my level best.
  Thank you for your encouraging words.
  Iyappan
  
  

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