Lost soul
Topic started by Shakthi (@ 202.56.251.99) on Thu Mar 14 13:40:48 .
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I wait for you eternally,
Carrying the torch of tommorrow,
to find you somewhere..., some day....
I wait for you, sobbing,
tears weighing my heart,
seeking your shoulders, in dismay.
I wait for you, to share,
the blues and smiles of life's way.
I wait, for your traces, your smile.
Today I lost, my battle.
Tommorrow, by dawn yet again,
I would wait for you,
endlessly!
Responses:
- From: Nila (@ 212.137.31.10)
on: Fri Mar 15 12:17:16
Good one...
- From: Shakthi (@ bangdp-35-150.mantraonline.com)
on: Fri Mar 15 13:56:21
thx nila
- From: Thaya (@ toronto-ppp274648.sympatico.ca)
on: Fri Mar 15 17:33:32
Nice!
- From: kurankaatti (@ spxychi1.bankofamerica.com)
on: Fri Mar 15 20:04:23
Good one.
- From: malar (@ 203.106.154.245)
on: Sat Mar 16 12:13:00
your dream will come true one day .
trust in god.
- From: Shakthi (@ 202.56.251.15)
on: Sat Mar 16 12:24:16
malar lol
thats a poem...
shhh..be quiet...to be frank..thx anyway!
:-))
- From: fridge (@ netcache7.is.co.za)
on: Fri Mar 22 02:55:15
good one, the longing is described beautifully,
Tommorrow, by dawn "yet" again,
I would wait for you,"
The "yet" here suggests an almost resigned sigh to the waiting and longing that tommorrow will bring, Nicely ties in with the mood of the of the poem.
- From: Shakthi (@ bangdp-38-121.mantraonline.com)
on: Fri Mar 22 13:15:42
:-)
thx fridge
- From: Magda - from South Africa (@ ctb-cache3-vif0.saix.net)
on: Sun Mar 24 14:25:45
this was beautiful
- From: Shakthi (@ bangdp-39-133.mantraonline.com)
on: Mon Mar 25 00:08:59
thx for ur response
ms. magda from south africa
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