VAASAMAANAA SWASAM
Topic started by AGALYAN (@ 61.11.83.176) on Tue Nov 25 01:08:29 EST 2003.
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Kaalaiyil koonthalil pookalukku vaasam
maalaiyil kuppaiyil mudigirathu avatrin swasam;
ennavalae,
unnil mattumae en niranthara vaasam!-nee
vanthuvidu, illaiyael nindruvidum en swasam!
Responses:
- From: AGALYAN (@ 61.11.83.176)
on: Tue Nov 25 06:57:09 EST 2003
THAEDI THOLIPPOEM VAA!
yaazhisai-
valayaa moongilil thulaigalaaga isai!!
Nila-
karutha megathil velli oeliyaai velicham!
Penn-
oeruyiril oeraaryiram uyirgal ulavum atchaya paathram!
Kann-
chinnachiriya uruvam; athanullae ivvulagam!
Mann-
irukkaiyil nammakku adakkamaai;pogayil atharkkul naam adakkammai!
Kalvi-
muthal poetta muthaleetirkku endrumae laabamaai!
Manaivi-
parivendraal irandaam ammavaai;pirivendraal muthal thunbamaai!
Illaram-
vaaznthuvittaal vetri;veezhnthuvittaal vetti!
Natpu-
unarnthaal karpu; uthaithaal veruppu!
Karpu-
paarthaal neruppu; pagaithaal seruppu!
Velai-
kidaithaal mudiyum vaelvi;illaiyaei thodarum thoelvi!
Maranam-
endrumae azhaiyaa virunthaali! unavai kaettpathu illai veru uyirai mattumae!!!
murangal vaazhkkaiyaa; illai vaazhkaiyil murangalaa.....
Thaedi kondae.............
- From: surya (@ 61.11.79.100)
on: Wed Nov 26 05:58:39 EST 2003
Nanbaa,
nalla kavidhai, thaedi tholaippoem vaa!. vazhkaiyin
athanai saraamsangalaiyum azhaagaai prathipalikkirathu!!
keep it up!!
Natpudan,
surya
- From: Vani (@ cpe0080c6f8642d-cm012059934377.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com)
on: Thu Nov 27 09:43:43 EST 2003
Hey... I really like yur style-rhyme patterns (ethukai)- nalla osai in the following lines..
"chinnachiriya uruvam; athanullae ivvulagam!
unarnthaal karpu; uthaithaal veruppu!
paarthaal neruppu; pagaithaal seruppu! "
VaazhthugaL agalyanE!
- From: AGALYAN (@ 61.11.79.169)
on: Sun Nov 30 23:47:26 EST 2003
Vani,
ungalin vimarsanathukku ennatra nandrigal!!
ungalin vimarsanathai nandriyodu endrum ethirnoekkum,
Agalyan
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