Topic started by j (@ 164.100.220.157) on Tue Jun 25 06:28:37 .
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Kaalaiyil neeum Maalayil naanum
oruvar pinney oruvar

Nadupagalilum iravilum
mattum uravaduvoom

Kariya iravil enai naan
tholaithu viduvathal
nee iruppathillai en nizhale

Responses:

• From: FlowerGuy (@ 202.95.127.5) on: Wed Jul 3 13:21:35
  
  neengal nizhaludan pesuvathu rasikkumpadiyaaga ullathu j.
  innum sattru neram pesiyirukkalaam.
  surukkamaaga mudithu vitteergale?
  
  
• From: shakthi (@ bangdp-33-17.mantraonline.com) on: Wed Jul 3 14:30:22
  
  Azhagaaana comment flowerguy!
  
  :)
  
  
• From: j (@ 164.100.220.157) on: Thu Jul 4 00:27:04
  
  Hellow Flowerguy enmele enna kobam ungalukku,
  
  Inga koluthura veiyelula inthalavukku pesiyathe
  athigam.
  
  Thank u
  
  
• From: FlowerGuy (@ 202.95.127.5) on: Thu Jul 4 00:49:51
  
  nizhaludan neengal pesa pesa-kavithai valarum.
  kavithai valarndhaal - engalukku inimaiyaaga irukkume endru appadi sonnen...mattrapadi
  ungal meethu kobam kidaiyaathu...
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ bangdp-35-156.mantraonline.com) on: Thu Jul 4 02:56:10
  
  j,
  
  I would love to give a lil harsh and blunt comment on this poem.
  
  Sorry bout it. plz dont be hurt.
  
  But...
  
  Ur poem leaves the reader an incomplete feeling.
  
  :)
  
  be sportive and cheers!
  
  
• From: Kajan (@ wc05.ym.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com) on: Thu Jul 4 04:04:23
  
  "Kariya iravil enai naan
  tholaithu viduvathal
  nee iruppathillai en nizhale "
  
  very good.
  
  neekatha ninaivukalum Nizhal kal than
  
  
• From: j (@ 164.100.220.157) on: Fri Jul 5 05:45:36
  
  Thanks all friends.
  
  Flowerguy. I have comment on ur work in a joking mood.
  
  Shakthi. I will try to keep ur words.
  
  Kanjan. Eneke theriyammal ennudaye kavithaiyil
  azhan kandukondeergale. Thanks
  
  
• From: sundari (@ 203.106.77.233) on: Fri Jul 5 10:57:26
  
  yelia arumaiyana varigal
  kavithai siriataga irunthalum
  atan karu sintikka vaika kudiyathu
  nizhal yellorum yepothum yengeyum kanalam
  anal um ponra kavinyaral maddume atanai unarthu
  pirarukku unarta mudium.
  so nice, well done !
  
  
• From: Kajan (@ wc05.ym.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com) on: Fri Jul 5 12:41:02
  
  azhan.... what does that mean ? It's very difficult 2 understand.
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ bangdp-34-84.mantraonline.com) on: Sat Jul 6 03:13:10
  
  kajan,
  
  he meant
  
  Aaazham
  
  Depth
  
  
• From: kajan (@ wc05.ym.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com) on: Sat Jul 6 16:10:18
  
  thx shakthi
  
  
• From: j (@ 164.100.220.157) on: Mon Jul 8 00:33:53
  
  Sundari - Thankq
  
  Shakthi - Thanks for ur reply to Kajan. I meant
  the same thing but spelled wrongly. Again Thx
  
  

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