Topic started by Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on Fri Aug 29 13:29:48 .
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You squeezed my heart,
dripping red..
dripping blood.
amidst my death,
I coloured a rose,
red rose..
symbol of love
symbol of purity
blood rose,
red and dead.
Just for you!....

The essense of my heart!

Responses:

• From: Sheik (@ 167.218.253.230) on: Fri Aug 29 17:09:38 EDT 2003
  
  Hmmmm,
  
  Very nice. Very touchy. Kalakkureenga Sakthi. Enakku poraamaiyaa irukku. Ungalaala English and Tamil rendu mozhiyilaiyum kavidhai ezhutha mudiyuthu. Nallaa irukku. Vaazhtthukkal and thodarungal ungal paniyai.
  
  Natpudan
  Sheik
  
  
• From: Kajan (@ cpe0050ba1669c3-cm014110219722.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com) on: Fri Aug 29 17:24:45 EDT 2003
  
  I strongly beleive that poems with feelings like this can be written under severe experience in the past or presence. I think the poet had such one and now is suffering by its memories. Am I correct ?
  
  
• From: Push (@ 61.1.205.242) on: Sat Aug 30 02:50:55 EDT 2003
  
  
  red,blood,death..........(colorful essense)
  
  red rose ..(ithuku atuthu ethavathu unda [...])
  symbol of love (eppadi)
  
  
  
  never fall in love
  you'll see it doesnt pay
  although it cause borken hearts,
  it happens everyday
  everytrime you see him
  your heart begins to dance
  your whole life revolves around him
  there's nothin like romance
  ou wounder where he's at nigh
  you wounder if he's rue
  one minute.......
  you are so happy,
  the next you'll be blue
  love is fine
  but the price you pay is so vey high
  if i had a choice between love and DEATH
  I WOULD RATHER DIE
  SO WHEN I SAY
  "DONT FALL IN LOVE M
  YOU'LL BE HURT BEFORE
  YOU'RE THROUGH
  YOU SEE MY FRIEND
  I OUGHT TO KNOW...
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Sat Aug 30 03:04:11 EDT 2003
  
  "red rose ..(ithuku atuthu ethavathu unda [...])
  symbol of love (eppadi)
  "<<
  
  adhukku aduthu daan
  symbol of love and purity
  
  generally in love language
  red rose is given to person u love
  and symbolises love
  
  yellow rose is for friendship
  symbolises friendship
  
  sheik, kajan, push, thx
  
  push,
  
  that piece of poem was nice.
  
  kajan,
  
  :))
  
  adadadadadadadadaaaaaaaaaa!
  
  ungaloda romba tollaiya pochu!
  
  :))
  
  Kajan, if one writes so mething it NEED NOT be his or her experience kajan!!!!
  
  plzzzzzzz1
  
  phew! when will this guy understand!??
  
  (jokinggggggg okei)
  
  anyway i will take it as a compliment, that it sounded so real
  
  :)
  
  sheik,
  
  unga kavidaigalin ezhil, sorprayogam, nayam ellarukum varuma?
  
  I dont call my poetries poetries
  Its just cluster of decorative words. U guys do much better work than me
  
  anyway, sheik
  
  Epdi tamizh and english lai ezhudareenga
  
  adanalai daan rendulaiyum great aaga illai
  
  jack of master, master of none!
  
  lol
  
  
• From: IYappan (@ lan-202-144-73-12.maa.sify.net) on: Sat Aug 30 09:36:54 EDT 2003
  
  anbin shakthi
  kajan solvathil unmai irukkavE seygirathu.
  
  anbudan
  iyappan
  
  
• From: malligai (@ 0-1pool59-202.nas22.thornton1.co.us.da.qwest.net) on: Mon Sep 1 01:56:50 EDT 2003
  
  "You squeezed my heart,
  dripping red..
  dripping blood.
  amidst my death, "
  
  Shakthi, this is like watching a horror movie (no offense pa)...ithanai kodumaiyaana kaadhaluku kavithai thevaiyaa??
  
  
• From: Kajan (@ cpe0050ba1669c3-cm014110219722.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com) on: Mon Sep 1 02:07:51 EDT 2003
  
  >ithanai kodumaiyaana kaadhaluku kavithai thevaiyaa?? >
  
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  >phew! when will this guy understand!?? >
  very sorry friend. I got ur point.
  
  >I dont call my poetries poetries >
  it looks like my statement, i used to call my one as kiRukkal
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Tue Sep 2 08:06:52 EDT 2003
  
  like rightly kajan said,
  
  kaadhal is not kodumai
  
  kaadhalin pirivO
  alladu adu pirinda vidamO kodumai
  
  
  pirivin kodumai
  paravayillai
  piriyum vidam,
  idamaaai irundaal
  
  
• From: malligai (@ 0-1pool88-1.nas33.thornton1.co.us.da.qwest.net) on: Tue Sep 2 19:05:05 EDT 2003
  
  
  "pirivin kodumai
  paravayillai
  piriyum vidam,
  idamaaai irundaal"
  
  --- pirivu kodumaina, epadi piriyum vidhathil idam irukka mudiyum??...i think it is 'kodumai' anyway..
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Thu Sep 4 12:43:09 EDT 2003
  
  malligai,
  
  kovapattu piriyardu (misunderstanding)
  
  adulai vara pirivu, aaradhu, romba naalaikku reddddddddddddddd colourlai bright aaga irukkum
  
  sari pona poradu...namba pirinju sandoshama vazhalam apdeenu compromise panni piriyardu, konjam sumaar red
  
  lol
  
  (mudinja joke aaga edutukonga...joke maadiri illainna ennai tittadeenga)
  
  
• From: tiruttakkan (@ nhpc.nic.in) on: Thu Sep 4 23:10:01 EDT 2003
  
  hi shak,
  
  m..hoom.i am not grading this time .u 've n't made a mark.
  
  anyway...
  
  tiruttakkan
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Fri Sep 5 05:25:00 EDT 2003
  
  tk,
  
  i have become like a nervous student before a teacher
  
  hehe
  
  would try to do better tk, thx
  
  ( and wont post more threads for my poems lol)
  
  
• From: rajini (@ ppp-219-65-128-78.bng.vsnl.net.in) on: Fri Sep 5 08:04:08 EDT 2003
  
  Fantastic shakthi nenja nakitinga(heheheh)
  
  
• From: ellaam therintha ellappan (@ 203.200.61.1) on: Sat Sep 6 05:01:01 EDT 2003
  
  shakthi,
  
  rajini solvathaithai ellam serious aa edutthukkaathinga,... i think avanga college basaila pEsuraanga pOla... paavam college vittu veliya varalai... veliya vaangappOi.... vanthu ulagaththai paarunga...
  
  rajini
  
  joke panRathaa nenachchi comment panni irukkinga... adhu unmaiyila sariyaannu yOsichchi paarunga....
  
  dontyou thing ppl like you have some basic ethics?? athai follow panna vENdaamaa ??
  
  ellaam therintha ellappan
  
  

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