Topic started by flowerguy (@ balance2.baplc.com) on Fri Jul 25 17:08:32 .
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muttrupulliyum vaikkaamal,
mudivuraiyum padikkaamal,
thalaivanai thavikkavittu,
tholaindhu pona kaadhaliye...

ullathil irukkum unadhu-
uruvathai neeki vittu,
pudhiyadhoru pennodu-
payanam seyya pogindren.

maavilai thoranangal...manjal,kungumam,sandhanangal.
maalaigal maattrida....naal kurikkum prohidhargal.

vedkapada theriyaamal...vEdikkai paarthu nindravaLai,
en meethu thallivittu...vedithu sirikkum uravinargal.

pugaipadangal eduppatharkku..kural kodutha maru nimidam,
punnagai mugangalodu...ennai nerungum snegithargal.

60 vayadhu kuzhandhaigalo...amaidhiyaaga amarndhirukka,
6 vayadhu kuzhandhaigalo...ingum angum Odinaargal.

kaatchigal anaithume...
ennai suttri nadanthaalum,
endha vidha unarvumindri...
nadai pinam pol naanirundhEn.

vaanathu thevathaiye-
vaasalil unnai paarthavudan,
sidhaindhu pona endhan kaadhal-
siragadithu parakkuthadi.

sivappu vanna udai anindhu,
mirandu pona vizhigalodu,
nadappavattrai purindhukondu-
ragasiyamaai azhugindraai.

udaindhu..norungi..thugalgalaagi-
unakkul unnai pudhaikkindraai.

puriyaadha pudhire nee-
pudhaithellaam pothumadi.
poo pondra un manathai-
vadhaithellaam pothumadi.

nichayam seidha pudhu pennai-
veesi vittu naan varuven.
achadhai thoovum uravugalai-
veesi vittu naan varuven.

thaduthu niruthum natpugalai-
thooki yerindhu naan varuven.
appa,amma,sondham,bandham,
anaithum udhari naan varuven.

uyir kidaitha pinam ondru-
unai kandu sirikkuthe...
yezhu nilai kaadhalile -idhu
aaRaam nilai kaadhaliye.

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NOTE: Adapted from a scene from the movie "uyire".
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Responses:

• From: iyappan (@ 203.200.61.1) on: Mon Jul 28 08:34:42 EDT 2003
  
  mmmm..... flower guy kavithai nalla thaan irukkuthu .... aanaalum vazakkamana flowerguy kavithaila irukkiRa ethuvO missing....
  
  anbudan
  iyappan
  
  
• From: JEYANTHI MEERA (@ 202.185.32.191) on: Tue Aug 19 22:51:10 EDT 2003
  
  YENNAI PATHETHUM UN NEENDE NAAL URAVUGALAI TOOKKIYERIYUM NEE
  
  NAALAI YENNAIYUM VEESE MATAI YENRU YENNE NICCAYAM ?
  APPADINNU UNNGE KADHALI KETTA YENNE SIR SOLVINGGE?
  ANYWAY NICE VARIGEL
  
  
• From: haran (@ 213.42.2.8) on: Sat Aug 23 04:46:44 EDT 2003
  
  uRuthi illaap peNNai nambi
  uRavugaLai uthaRich chenRaal
  iRudhi naaL arukil enRu
  enkO padiththa ninaivu inRu.
  
  
• From: JEYANTHI MEERA (@ 202.185.32.191) on: Mon Aug 25 21:48:25 EDT 2003
  
  hi haran
  super engge padithirggal? athukkunu penggal ellam appadi illai thane?
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Wed Aug 27 07:17:46 EDT 2003
  
  "sivappu vanna udai anindhu,
  mirandu pona vizhigalodu,
  nadappavattrai purindhukondu-
  ragasiyamaai azhugindraai.
  
  udaindhu..norungi..thugalgalaagi-
  unakkul unnai pudhaikkindraai.
  
  puriyaadha pudhire nee-
  pudhaithellaam pothumadi.
  poo pondra un manathai-
  vadhaithellaam pothumadi.
  "<<<<<<<<<
  
  vaaazhndu paartha unarvugaL!
  sila vishayangaL unarvugaL, ezhuthai taaandi vadikka iyalaaa soga geethangaL
  
  "vedkapada theriyaamal...vEdikkai paarthu nindravaLai,
  en meethu thallivittu...vedithu sirikkum uravinargal. "<<<<<<<<
  
  adhu eppadi, nichiyam aana udanai, vekkam varuma?
  I hate arranged marriages and their teasings for the same. How can so meone feel shy with some unknown person just because he is gonna tie 'thali'
  
  CRAP!
  
  (not kavidhai, the concept of shyness in arranged marriages!)
  
  "thaduthu niruthum natpugalai-
  thooki yerindhu naan varuven.
  appa,amma,sondham,bandham,
  anaithum udhari naan varuven.
  "<<<<<<<,
  
  ithanai naaal enna pannenga
  nichayadartham aana piragu
  poveengala?
  
  appo andha ponnu ( nichiyam aana ponnu) enna pannuva
  
  romba late sir neenga.....
  
  GREAT KAVIDHAI
  
  EXPECTING MORE
  
  very touchy in a crux
  
  
• From: flowerguy (@ balance1.baplc.com) on: Tue Sep 2 08:38:40 EDT 2003
  
  iyappan,
  what is missing in this poem? missing any 'punch' ?
  however...'edhuvo' missing endra ungalin ubayogamaana vimarsanathukku mikka nandri :-)
  
  jeyanthi meera,
  ungalin 'edakku-madakkaana' kElvikku....badhil solla theriyaamal vizhikkiren.
  
  haran,
  jeyanthi-meera ungalaiyum sila 'edakku-madakkaana' kElvigal kEttu irukkaanga.
  therindhaal vidai sollungaL.
  
  shakthi,
  thanks for the detailed post-mortem.
  thiraipadathai paarthapozuthu...
  nichiyam aana ponnu enna paanuva?
  amma,appavukku enna aachu?....aattukutti,naaikutti enna aachu,
  LIC policy enna aachu?
  idhai pondra arivu-poorvamaana kElvigal edhuvum enakku varavEyillai.
  my entire focus was on the hero, heroine and their love.
  
  is that the difference between 'emotional thinking' and 'practical thinking'?
  
  
• From: malligai (@ 0-1pool88-1.nas33.thornton1.co.us.da.qwest.net) on: Tue Sep 2 18:55:56 EDT 2003
  
  "How can so meone feel shy with some unknown person just because he is gonna tie 'thali' "
  
  ---haha...typical Shakthi!!!
  
  
• From: anand (@ 61.6.65.26) on: Tue Sep 2 21:14:29 EDT 2003
  
  Malligayin varigalil enakkum oru udanpaadu.
  endraalum
  Kavithai suvai.
  anbudan
  anand
  
  
• From: JEYANTHI MEERA (@ 202.185.32.191) on: Thu Sep 4 21:53:00 EDT 2003
  
  BATHIL SOLLE MUYATHETAI PATRI SOLLATHINGGE(MULIKIRINGGELA?
  
  
• From: tiruttakkan (@ nhpc.nic.in) on: Thu Sep 4 23:30:35 EDT 2003
  
  hi,
  
  i've made arecent entry into this forum .i have not read ur earlier poems .
  this one --40 madhippeNkaL.
  enna missingaa?
  oru kuzhappam irukkiRadhu kavidhaiyilE! uyiraana kaadhalaich cholla vandhadhu pOlavum irukku.teermaanikka muDiyaadha tiNDaaTTAm cholla vandhadhu pOlavum irukku.
  appuRam ...kaRpanaidhaanenRaalum ...andha nichchayamaana peNNukkuch cheyya ninaikkkum andha drOham(?)...
  pOdhumaa?
  
  arranged marriages meedhu avarukku vandhuLLa veRuppu chondha chamaachaaram.vaadham valuvillai.
  
  tiruttakkan
  
  

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