vaazkaiyil Or kanavu
Topic started by jeeva (@ lan-202-144-73-10.maa.sify.net) on Fri Mar 14 01:46:30 .
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aadum bommai aadum
manamum adhu pOla aadum
koodum sOgam koodum pala
kanavugal onRu sErum nEram
kanavugal thavarillai thaan
vaazvenRu sonnathu thavaRu
vaazkaiyil OrkanavenRaal
vazvE magizvaagum
kanavil oru vaazkkai enRaal
vaazvE vegu tholaivaagum
vaazkaiyil Or kanavaa
kanavil Or vazkkaiyaa
mudivu nammidam thaan
yOsiththu seythidungal
Responses:
- From: Hariharan (@ 61.11.81.25)
on: Mon Mar 31 06:29:36
Good.
- From: Jeeva (@ 203.200.61.1)
on: Mon Mar 31 09:01:30
nanRi hariharan,
anbudan
jeeva ( Iyappan )
- From: Vani (@ cpe0080c6f8642d-cm012059934377.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com)
on: Mon Mar 31 10:09:15
jeeva/iyappan:
Nice one- I like the last para where you reverse the words with double entendre-repitition to good effect here. Also the opening lines-aadum bommai aadum very catchy..
- From: Iyappan (@ 203.200.61.1)
on: Tue Apr 1 01:13:17
vani,
nanRi ungalin vimarsanaththukku,
anbudan iyappan
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