Feelings
Topic started by littlepoetess (@ 202.9.171.191) on Thu May 23 13:54:44 .
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An expression of the thoughts in my mind
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- From: littlepoetess (@ 202.9.171.191)
on: Thu May 23 13:57:30
Unexpected
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In these many years of life,
Many things have happened to me,
Some expected ones,
Many unexpected ones,
And You come in the second category,
Till now, I have never even dreamt or imagined that I would meet you,
But it all happened, all of a sudden,
On one fine day,
Leaving me thunderstruck till this moment !
- From: Thaya (@ blossom.tpl.toronto.on.ca)
on: Thu May 23 14:13:25
good feeling and it's the begining for a poem.
keep writing your mind like that.
good luck.
- From: littlepoetess (@ 202.9.171.72)
on: Fri May 24 12:24:15
Everything
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Some 18 years back, my life started,
As a little daughter to my Mother,
As years rolled by,
I met many people,
Went to many places,
Came across different atmospheres,
Met with some of the worst situations that could happen to anyone,
But I survived all by God's grace. . .
As years rolled by,
I managed to become
Somebody to many people,
A friend to some,
Also a foe to two or three,
A person special to a very few,
On the whole I managed to mean "something" to many people,
But when will I become "everything" to Someone ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
- From: Thinker (@ bangdp-35-138.mantraonline.com)
on: Fri May 31 21:00:04
Good thoughts.
verses split in 2 to 3 lines does not make a poem.
Good prose!
"But when will I become "everything" to Someone ? ? ? ? ? ? ? "<<<<<<<
lilpoetess,
its nice for fantasy, but noone is indispensible that u become, EVERYTHING TO SOMEONE!
Self is prominent, that comes first. REst are next.
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