Topic started by Shakthi (@ ppp-178.blr.eth.net) on Thu Jan 9 02:44:39 .
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En Kanna,

ennulE paravasam
minsaaram painda unarvu,

unnai thaan kandena?
un ninaivin inbamE
Sarkaraiyaai inikiradE.
un arugamaikku
en arugadai undO?

Vendaam ivvulagamum
adanai saarnda vedanaigalum
Varuvaya ennai muthamida?

Edhu ennai nesikka seidadu
Vedhanaigala? Vedhangala?
Bhayama? inbam tedum suyanalama?

nam uravin peyar
Kaadhala? Bhakthiya?
irandum illa Gnanama?
nee yaar endru pudhir mattum
vidupadave illaiye!

neeye naan endraal
inda pirivu pOliya?

TEdugiren
unnai ennulE
alladu.....
ennai ennulEye.

Gnanamai enakku vidai kodu

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Shakthiyai tedum Shakthi

Responses:

• From: IYappan (@ lan-202-144-73-10.maa.sify.net) on: Thu Jan 9 10:01:11
  
  nalla thedal...
  
  "WARNING"
  
  thedatheergal tholainthu poveergal
  
  anbudan iyappan
  
  
  
• From: critics (@ h216-170-142-235.dsl.tds.net) on: Thu Jan 9 16:12:37
  
  Message nallaa irunthaalum 'poetic sense' illai. better try to write it nice next time.
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ ppp-9.blr.eth.net) on: Fri Jan 10 11:40:44
  
  "thedatheergal tholainthu poveergal "<<<<
  
  so many have said that iyappan. Yet the quest n curiousity knows no bounds.....
  
  critics,
  
  I would try to write better. thx.
  
  
• From: karthik (@ 203.199.211.130) on: Thu Jan 16 02:09:58
  
  Excellent sahakthi . iam new to this forum ..
  one day i hope to write this kinds of poems . with u people help ..
  
  Thanks
  karthik
  
  
• From: priya (@ 212.85.13.180) on: Thu Jan 16 06:52:38
  
  hi
  nice thedal
  keep on theding
  bye
  take care
  by
  priya
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Mon Jan 20 03:33:25
  
  thx priya,
  
  I will keep theding, i will find it too (hopefully)
  
  karthick,
  
  thx karthick
  i wish u best,
  I am sure u would write better!
  
  
  

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