Topic started by krish (@ 203.200.30.4) on Tue Nov 4 09:30:13 EST 2003.
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idho indha otrai
rojavai,
unaku parisalikiren

Idhu en manam.
Idhan idhazhgal
udhirnthu pogalam,
en vaazhkai pola.

Aaanal en ninaivugal
idhan vaasam pola,
unnil nilaithu irukum
endra kanavudan....

Responses:

• From: malligai (@ 0-1pool59-162.nas22.thornton1.co.us.da.qwest.net) on: Wed Nov 5 01:05:22 EST 2003
  
  very nice krish!!
  
  
• From: Shakthipriya (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Thu Nov 6 05:39:21 EST 2003
  
  elimaiyaai, unarchigaLai, kavithaiyaai vadithuLLeergaL.
  
  
  romba ithama irukku.
  
  Very soft, subtle love
  
  
• From: krish (@ 203.200.30.4) on: Thu Nov 6 09:51:33 EST 2003
  
  hai mailligai,
  
  thank you so much for being the first person to give ur comments...its encouraging mailligai...ungal comments ungal peyar polave vaasam veesugirathu
  
  
• From: krish (@ 203.200.30.4) on: Thu Nov 6 09:53:04 EST 2003
  
  shaktipriya,
  ungal comments oru azhagiya kavidhai vadivil varugirathil magizhchi kolgiren. ungal comments enaku oru challenge aaga ulladhu...innum idhai vida sirandha oru kavidhai uruvaka muyarchikiren...adhu varai ....
  
  
  
• From: shylaja (@ 203-195-196-66.now-india.net.in) on: Tue Nov 11 06:42:00 EST 2003
  
  krish......one week melaa oorla illa.so ippothan inga kavidhaikal ellame padikkiren adhula 1st unga kavidhaiyana idhu..really good...naalukku naal unga kaivannam merukerukirathu vaazthukkal1 anbudan..shy
  
  
• From: krish (@ 203.200.30.4) on: Tue Nov 11 09:45:58 EST 2003
  
  hai shylaja
  uchi kulira vechuteengale...i have to get into this forum in full swing after 24th..till then just enjoy reading other poetries...any how thank you so much for your feedback shylu
  
  
• From: Fathima Riswana (@ proxy2.wow.lk) on: Wed Nov 12 03:30:17 EST 2003
  
  Hello Krish,
  Allahana varihal
  Iyoo.......enakku kavithai elutha theriyathe....
  Innum thodaravum......
  Anpudan
  Riswana
  
  

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