Topic started by flowerguy (@ balance1.baplc.com) on Tue Sep 2 08:42:31 .
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Tidel Park Reception, Chennai.
100 Crore Software Project.
kidaikkumaa? kidaikaatha? endRu
sattru nErathil therindhu vidum.

9:AM endru sonnaargal.
nEram ippozuthu 8:45.
varapOgum Client-ukkaaga-
vaasal paarthu kaathirundhom.

valathu pakkam oru M.Tech nirka,
idathu pakkam oru M.B.A nirka,
iruvarukkum naduvil naan,
amaidhiyaaga nindrirunthEn.

meesaiyum thaadiyum mazhithuvittu,
tie-yum , blazor-um anindhapadi,
kodukka pOgum presentation-ai
manasukkul othigai paarthEn.

U.S/U.K Collaboration enbathaal,
sadhaam hussain-ai thitta vendum.
nadandhu mudintha sandai anaithum,
nanmaikendrE solla vendum.

Architecture,Algorithm endru-
mudintha varai kuzhappa vendum.
Cost-Effective Solution endru-
vaai kizhiya pEsa vendum.

ithai pOndRa vishayangaL pala-
idharku munbu seithirundhaalum,
nooru kOdi project enbathaal,
manasukkul melliya udhaRal.

siRiya thavaRu nigazhndhaalum,
mattRa Company-kku sendruvidum.
ninaithathu pOl nadanthuvittaal,
paaraatukkaL vandhu kuviyum.

Fund,Overhead,Profit margin,
Increment,Promotion,Holiday endru,
manasukkul sila kanakkugaL pOttu-
vaanathil paRakka thodangivitten.

8:49 a.m,
8:51 a.m,
8:53 a.m,
8:55 a.m.

kadikaarathai paarthukondu,
kaditha nagathai thuppivittu,
kaditham kodutha kaadhalan pol,
aavaludan kaathirundhEn.

vangaaLa virikuda kaattru-
vandhu mugathai varudi sella-
alai alaiyaai....vidham vidhamaai....
aluvalagam vandhavargalai ...paartha pozuthu....

manjal cotton pudavai anindhu-
malligaip poo soodi kondu-
maniyam selvan Oviyam pol-
mangaiyoruthi nadanthu vandhaaL.

enakkulle aayiram minnal...
enakkulle kOdi kuzhappam...

pattaampoochi nenjil parakka...
paravasathaal thullinEn.
ennaiyum ariyaamal-
punnagai ondrai sindhinEN.

oru nodithaan.
ore nodithaan.
avaLum ennai paarthuvittu,
melithaaga punnagaithaaL.

pala varushangaL pazhaginaalum-
palarai iraivan pirippathundu.

sila jOdigalai-
sila nodigalil-
iraivan sErthum vaippathundu.

'puNNaakku' software project.
'pudalangaai' foreign client.

en edhirkaalam ennavendru-
theLivaaga purindhu kondEn.
ennavaLai thurathi kondu-
egiRi kudhitu OdugindREn.


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NOTE: Modified from the short-story 'Love at First Sight' by Jeffrey Archer
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Responses:

• From: malligai (@ 0-1pool88-1.nas33.thornton1.co.us.da.qwest.net) on: Tue Sep 2 18:46:38 EDT 2003
  
  Flowerguy,
  
  kathai/kavithai nala iruku...kindles interest...
  
  ana a very stupid decision by the hero...for all he knows, she could be married, in love with someone else etc...he put his future and the others' in his office in jeopardy, just for nothing...
  
  
• From: flowerguy (@ balance1.baplc.com) on: Wed Sep 3 08:01:59 EDT 2003
  
  malligai,
  today..all smart organisations are process-oriented, nothing is person-dependent.
  even if somebody suddenly disappears...nothing is going to stop the show....and the process continues..
  
  kalyaanamaana punnagai, kalyaanamaagatha punnagai, kalyaanamaagi divorce aana punnagai,
  ippadi pala vidha punnagaigal irukku malligai.
  vizhigaLai, punnagaiyai vechu sulabamaa kandu-pidichiduvom.
  'it's a boy thing'....sonnaa ungalukku puriyaathu.
  
  i think, you are more interested in that client-presentation,company and company's profit..
  but the hero is more interested in deciding his life partner....
  
  hey..i'm not trying to justify whatever i am scribbling...but i am tired of these practical people
  who always deviate from the main theme...and worry about surrounding issues...
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Wed Sep 3 08:32:43 EDT 2003
  
  "hey..i'm not trying to justify whatever i am scribbling...but i am tired of these practical people
  who always deviate from the main theme...and worry about surrounding issues... "<<<<<<<
  
  :))
  
  I AM NOT GONNA COMMENT...(i second malligai's comment though)
  
  "'it's a boy thing'....sonnaa ungalukku puriyaathu."<<<
  
  NAH...we know women, ladies, girls...sometimes not=so=old ...youngish=old (forget english) women... who are married, would give u a dazzling, bright smile, just to portray their postive b right frame of mind....
  
  and IT SOMETIMES IS WRONGLY TAKEN BY SO CALLED BOYS as a shy=smile! of women who is not married!
  
  Generalization is impossible!
  
  person to person punnahai maarupadum
  
  nooooooooooooo i am not deviating from main theme...sheesh these practical ppl are waste to be here in poem thread.......
  
  here i run
  
  byeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
  
  :))
  
  
• From: malligai (@ 0-1pool59-68.nas22.thornton1.co.us.da.qwest.net) on: Thu Sep 4 13:58:11 EDT 2003
  
  Flowerguy,
  
  "i think, you are more interested in that client-presentation,company and company's profit..
  but the hero is more interested in deciding his life partner.... "
  
  --heyy, when i started reading ur kavithai, there was kind of a 'built-up' expectation...i was so curious to know what was about to happen to the '100 crore project'...and u finished it abruptly with the guy, holding such a responsible position, running behind a girl just bcos she smiled at him...mm thats very childish...
  
  'puNNaakku' software project.
  'pudalangaai' foreign client.
  
  ---even these lines are..
  
  I dint write this to offend ur writing in anyway..but just to say that we expect 'more and better' from an experienced writer like u..
  
  
• From: muthu selvan (@ lan-202-144-74-152.sify.net) on: Sun Sep 14 09:08:21 EDT 2003
  
  yuyuyu
  
  
• From: muthu (@ lan-202-144-74-152.sify.net) on: Sun Sep 14 09:25:52 EDT 2003
  
  hai
  
  
• From: Kajan (@ wc09.ym.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com) on: Sun Sep 14 20:44:13 EDT 2003
  
  youngsters get attracted by opposite sex.when they define it as love then it shows thier immaturity.
  
  
  FG,
  it happened before some years ( in my university life )
  
  there r guys behind a girl. she always smiling at all. - ( still it is puthir for some of our batchmates whether she did to tease guys ). she interested in friend of mine. She rejected her. it hasn'tknown to others. what I want to tellwe can not define everything from instant activity - like throwing smile at guy. it could go in different ways.
  
  Just my opinion. not any critics on ur poe
  
  
• From: Kajan (@ wc09.ym.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com) on: Sun Sep 14 20:45:54 EDT 2003
  
  >She rejected her>
  
  oh what a nasty meaning by my mistake...
  
  read as
  he rejected her.
  
  
• From: manidhan (@ tmpnat1.honeywell.com) on: Wed Sep 17 13:48:55 EDT 2003
  
  Dhool flowerguy!
  
  Idhu karpanaya, illai nijama? -- endru therindhu koola miga aaval enakku!
  
  
• From: jeeva (@ 219.93.186.18) on: Sat Sep 27 01:15:25 EDT 2003
  
  romba nalla irukku aana kadisila antha project pudalangganu pesirukka koodathu enna athu oru kadasikattathula teva illatha visayam....enna avannuku kadhal vanthurutchi so no need to talk about the job...........
  
  
• From: Govin (@ 203.129.195.100) on: Sat Sep 27 04:06:37 EDT 2003
  
  FG,
  the kavithai is good. ¾¨ÄôÒ Áɾ¢ø þÕó¾¾É¡ø, ÀÊìÌõ §À¡§¾ ÓÊÅ¢ø þôÀÊ ±¾¡ÅÐ ¬Ìõ ±ýÚ ±¾¢÷À¡÷ôÒ þÕó¾Ð. À¡Åõ 100 cr project! ¬É¡ø, "¸ñ¼Ðõ ¸¡¾Ä¢ø" þýÚ ±ò¾¨É §ÀÕìÌ ¿õÀ¢ì¨¸ ¯ûÇÐ?
  
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