Topic started by j (@ 164.100.220.157) on Mon Jun 10 02:44:40 .
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Pory onru vaithen avalukku
Vaithathil sikkiyaven naane
sikkalil viduvithavel avale
viduvithavel sikkiyathi arivala

Responses:

• From: Shakthi (@ bangdp-34-122.mantraonline.com) on: Mon Jun 10 23:53:49
  
  hmm....SikkuvadE manida iyalbu.
  Inda sikkalil sikkaamal irupar vegu silare.
  (Buddisaligal endru kooralama?)
  
  Oh yeah sikkiyavarkku inbamaaana sikkal. Viduvithu kolla viruppamillamal
  vazhkaiyai sikkalakki kolvaargal.
  
  j,
  Short n sweet. I could find traces of humour in ur poem. Good poem
  
  
• From: j (@ 164.100.220.157) on: Tue Jun 11 00:07:23
  
  Thank u Shakthi, Ungal vimarisanam illamal
  kavithai ezhutha eyalavillai.
  
  Very Very Thank u.
  
  

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