Topic started by Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on Wed Sep 24 04:26:39 .
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¯ý
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enakkE enakkAy varuvAyA?
oru n-AL maddum tharuvAyA?
kanavukaL pakira,
poyyAy kOpikka,
n-ijamAy saNdaiyida..

pidiththa pAdal kEddapadi,
kUddamillA 'pallavanil'
rakasiyamAy kaN pArththu
n-eduthUram payaNikka,

n-isapthamAna n-aduiravil
n-ilavoLiyin thanimaiyilE
thuyilinRi, vidiyum varai
kaNakku muthal kavithai varai
ezuththu muthal ezussi varai
pesikkaLiththu,
pEsissaliththu,

n-athiyOram kaikOrthu n-adakka
vekun-Eram manathAra sirikka
kaissuddu samaikkaiyil
kEliyAy kokkarikka

pirikaiyilE, maRupadiyum..
kaNpArAthu, vAypEsAthu
n-inaivukaL maddumE suman-thu
maunamAy senRuvida..

sinEkithanE
enakkE enakkAy varuvAyA?
oru n-AL maddum tharuvAyA?

---
un
shakthi.

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• From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Thu Sep 25 12:41:13 EDT 2003
  
  huh!
  
  what a comment! !!!!
  
  "enna sola? theriyavillai"
  
  thx anyway whatever u meant..I have never been so happy....someone is dumb struck lookin at my kirukkal,...lol
  
  hey btw, if u dont like it plz feel free to say..i am open to criticism kkkkkkkk?
  
  ...
  phew.....
  and i thougth 's' and surathi are same!!!!
  
  
• From: Surathi (@ cache7-5.ruh.isu.net.sa) on: Fri Sep 26 01:14:36 EDT 2003
  
  Shakti,
  
  1) Surathi is 'S'.. obviously.
  2) Nalla kavithai. UngaL kavithaiyil iruntha sila pizaikagalai thiruththa, it didn't take me longer than 60 secs. (I copied, pasted and corrected). So, don't thank. You may take these extra 60 secs to spell-check everytime you post a nice one like this.
  3) about 'enna solla theriyavillai' :- leave it as an unsolved mystery.
  4) 'Nadhiyoram' irukkum idangalil, 'Pallavan' kidaiyathu. 'Pallavan' irukkum ooril 'Nadhiyoram' kidaiyathu. 'Kadaloram' enru sollalama?
  
  Just being mischievous.. Carry on, please.
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Fri Sep 26 03:23:44 EDT 2003
  
  surathi,
  
  "You may take these extra 60 secs to spell-check everytime you post a nice one like this.
  "<<
  
  yeah.. would do that!
  
  regarding nathiyOram and pallavan....
  
  avanga rendu pErum, neduthooram 'pallavan' lai travel paNNitu, angErunthu trainlai pOi, appuram nathiyOram kai kOrthu nadakkaraanga!
  
  yaarukku kadal venum.........anga thanimai thavira bakki ellllam irukku! suNdal vikkaRavanga vEra appO appO pesa vidaaama thondaravu.......
  
  KIDDIN..THX ANYWAY
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Fri Sep 26 03:25:25 EDT 2003
  
  nathiyOram and pallavan.......
  
  ¦À¡ÕðÀ¢¨Æ¨Â ÍðÊ ¸¡ðÊÔûÇ£÷¸§Ç¡?
  
  
  
  
  
• From: S (@ cache8-5.ruh.isu.net.sa) on: Fri Sep 26 04:01:39 EDT 2003
  
  Yes.. now, i get the idea.. "nedum thooram payanikka.." appadinnu vere kavidhaiyileye ezuthiteenga. pizai ethuvum illai.. (but, travel-leye oru naal poyidumey!.. Just kidding..)
  
  
  
• From: malligai (@ 0-1pool58-170.nas22.thornton1.co.us.da.qwest.net) on: Fri Sep 26 10:58:13 EDT 2003
  
  SHAKTHI,
  
  i just listened to the song
  
  "ondraa rendaa aasaighal..elaam solavey
  oor naal pothuma.."
  in the movies 'kaaka kaaka'...i was reminded of this kavithai of urs immediately...listen to it if u get a chance :)
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Fri Sep 26 11:56:21 EDT 2003
  
  malligai........
  
  I JUST LOVE THAT SONG...AND I SING IT TOO
  
  :)
  
  
• From: malligai (@ 0-1pool89-132.nas33.thornton1.co.us.da.qwest.net) on: Fri Sep 26 13:00:15 EDT 2003
  
  Shakthi,
  
  oo you do??..wow..wish we had a mic in this forum...that is by bombay jaishree right?
  
  
• From: kurankatti (@ sf-proxy2.montgomery.com) on: Fri Sep 26 13:02:24 EDT 2003
  
  >>À¢Êò¾ À¡¼ø §¸ð¼ÀÊ,
  Üð¼Á¢øÄ¡ 'ÀøÄÅÉ¢ø'
  øº¢ÂÁ¡ö ¸ñ À¡÷òÐ
  ¦¿ÎàÃõ À½¢ì¸,
  
  ¿¾¢§Â¡Ãõ ¨¸§¸¡÷Ð ¿¼ì¸ .....
  <<<
  ¿£í¸ ¦º¡øÖ¸¢ýÈ þ¼õ
  âó¾ÁøÄ¢ìÌõ Àì¸ò¾¢Ä¾¡ý þÕìÌ....
  
  
• From: kurankatti (@ sf-proxy2.montgomery.com) on: Fri Sep 26 13:13:54 EDT 2003
  
  ú¢¸ º¢§É¸¢¾ÛìÌ!
  øº¢Â º¢§É¸¢¾ÛìÌ!
  ´Õ ¿¡Ù측¸Å¡,
  ´ü¨Èì ¸¡Ä¢ø ¾Åõ ?
  
  º¢ýÉïº¢Ú ¬¨º¸û ¿õ¨Á
  ÁÉ¢¾É¡ö «¨¼Â¡Çõ ¸¡ð¼,
  «¾ý ¦ÅÇ¢ôÀ¡Î ¯í¸¨Ç
  ¸Å¢»Ã¡ö «¨¼Â¡Çõ ¸¡ðθ¢ÈÐ.
  
  ¿øÄ ¸Å¢¨¾, À¡Ã¡ðθû!
  
  
• From: sori-Observer (@ cvg-65-27-251-73.cinci.rr.com) on: Fri Sep 26 13:34:59 EDT 2003
  
  "¿£í¸ ¦º¡øÖ¸¢ýÈ þ¼õ
  âó¾ÁøÄ¢ìÌõ Àì¸ò¾¢Ä¾¡ý þÕìÌ...."
  
  âó¾ÁøÄ¢-yile oru poNNu pinnaale
  Naan pOyi vanthEnE ava pudavai nallaallai.
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Mon Sep 29 06:43:36 EDT 2003
  
  nandri Kurankatti,
  
  "´Õ ¿¡Ù측¸Å¡,
  ´ü¨Èì ¸¡Ä¢ø ¾Åõ ? "<<<
  
  chinna chinna aasaigaLil periya periya kanavu! lol
  
  whats that place near poonthamalli?
  
  s.o,
  
  lol
  
  
• From: shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Mon Sep 29 06:44:45 EDT 2003
  
  yeah malligai,
  
  THATS BOMBAY JAYSHREEEEEEE!
  
  and she is the one who also sang...
  
  Vaseeegaraaa...but anyway i feel this song..(ondra rendaa aasaigal) and vaseegara, rings the same base tune!
  
  
• From: malligai (@ 0-1pool59-123.nas22.thornton1.co.us.da.qwest.net) on: Wed Oct 1 15:38:16 EDT 2003
  
  heyy, if u like these two songs, i bet u like 'vaseegara..' too, right?
  
  
• From: malligai (@ 0-1pool59-123.nas22.thornton1.co.us.da.qwest.net) on: Wed Oct 1 15:42:32 EDT 2003
  
  OOPPSS....i meant "alagiya asuraa..."
  
  
• From: ete (@ ppp-200-2-61.bng.vsnl.net.in) on: Fri Oct 3 10:58:38 EDT 2003
  
  ¸Å¢¨¾ ±øÄ¡õ ¿øÄ¡ì ¸£Ðí§¸¡ ¬É¡ À¡Õí§¸¡ ±ôÀ À¡ò¾¡Öõ «ö¾¢ì¸¢Û ¸£È Á¡¾¢Ã¢ §À¡Âõ ±ö¾¢È£í§¸¡..... ±ò¾¢É¢ ¿¡Ç¢ì¸¢ þó¾ Á¡¾¢Ã¢ ±í¸¨Ç «Â ¨Å츧À¡È£í¸§Ç¡ ¦¾Ã¢Ä£í§¸¡ ...
  
  
  ¬É¡ ¦º¡ø§ÈÛí§¸¡ ¸Å¢¨¾ ÁðÎõ àû ¼ì¸Õí§¸¡ù
  
  
  
  «ýÒ¼ý
  ±øÄõ ¦¾Ã¢ó¾ ±øÄôÀý
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Sat Oct 4 03:07:59 EDT 2003
  
  malligai,
  
  yeah i basically like base voice in female singers!
  
  I feel it sounds naturual, rather than shrill shriekings!
  
  'azhagiya asura...." i heard couple of words or first 2 lines only...sounds okei..........unless i hear the full song i cant comment.
  
  I GIVE IMPORTANCE TO lyrics, music, AND VOICE in that order respectively
  
  :)
  
  ete,
  
  "¬É¡ À¡Õí§¸¡ ±ôÀ À¡ò¾¡Öõ «ö¾¢ì¸¢Û ¸£È Á¡¾¢Ã¢ §À¡Âõ ±ö¾¢È£í§¸¡..... "<<
  
  ete,!
  
  poem azuratha, sirikutha nnu en kavalai? ithulai azugai illai...verum kanavu mattumE...kanavellam kandalE azugaiya!? nalla kathaiya irukke!!!!!!
  
  mudinja kooda serndu azunga, illaiya padikaadeenga!
  ethanai nallaikku aza vekka poren? theriyavillai!
  
  IF U FEEL I CRY IN MY POEMS, PLZ SKIPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP MY POEMS
  
  and thx for appreciation
  
  no offense meant
  shakthi
  
  
• From: Surathi (@ cache8-5.ruh.isu.net.sa) on: Sat Oct 4 05:21:15 EDT 2003
  
  Shakti..
  
  U must be more receptive to views. Á¢¸ô ¦Àâ À¢¨Æ ÒâóРŢðË÷¸û, §¾¡Æ¢.. The words "no offense meant.." added at last do not justify it. I hope you will understand.
  
  
• From: akil (@ acbb6f07.ipt.aol.com) on: Sat Oct 4 06:44:15 EDT 2003
  
  i liked the kavithai very much.. there is a natural flow.
  
  ´Õ ¦Àñ½¢ý À¡÷¨Å ÀǢθ¢ýÈÐ.
  
  i felt the same way as mr. krish.
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Sat Oct 4 07:28:24 EDT 2003
  
  thx akil....
  
  surathi,
  
  i am sorry and i agree, if anyone else ...I MEAN ANNNYONE ELSE ECCEPT ETE had said that, i woudl have grinned and said, i will try to write happy ones etc.
  
  ete, happens to be my close friend...and my rakhi brother........(sorry ete, for personalising this) so just out of the feeling i have the right to shout at him, i shouted.......
  
  ETE,
  
  SORRIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE AND PLZ COME BACK TO READ MORE AND MROE AND SCOLD ME IF I WRITE UNHAPPY ONES
  
  :p :)
  
  
• From: Surathi (@ cache10-5.ruh.isu.net.sa) on: Sat Oct 4 08:03:19 EDT 2003
  
  Shakti, I didn't know it. In that case, surely Ete would understand.
  
  
• From: Kajan (@ wc09.wlfdle.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com) on: Sat Oct 4 16:52:58 EDT 2003
  
  >if anyone else ...I MEAN ....>
  
  Shakthi,
  Didn' I say before ? if so I am writing now.
  
  some of your work always so sokam . for some of them I din't give a comment. Just my comments.
  
  By the way what happened to our kavithai group ?
  
  
• From: suresh,SURESH KUMAR(SEK.MEN.SKUDAI,JOHOR) (@ cjb-r3-b35.time.net.my) on: Sun Oct 5 01:28:47 EDT 2003
  
  I LOVE YOU SAI DHARSHNEE
  
  FROM,SURESH KUMAR
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Sun Oct 5 08:41:23 EDT 2003
  
  "From: suresh,SURESH KUMAR(SEK.MEN.SKUDAI,JOHOR) (@ cjb-r3-b35.time.net.my) on: Sun Oct 5 01:28:47 EDT 2003
  
  
  I LOVE YOU SAI DHARSHNEE
  
  FROM,SURESH KUMAR
  
  
  "<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<
  
  WHAT IS THISSS???
  PLZ READ THE THREAD BEFORE U POST ANYTHING....
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Mon Oct 6 06:04:46 EDT 2003
  
  kajan,
  
  :) sorry kajan, I shall try not to write too much sOgam.
  
  I know u dont comment on any sad love poems...lol unless its tooo good to comment oblivious of the theme.
  
  kavithai group,
  
  I guess no one is posting! why dont u post some of urs?
  
  :)
  
  regards,
  shakthi
  
  
  
  
• From: Kajan (@ wc09.wlfdle.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com) on: Tue Oct 7 16:50:39 EDT 2003
  
  >I shall try not to write too much sOgam. >
  
  u have different thoughts , u can execute them. try ur best.
  
  meantime I got a doubt , can I write on the subject of sokam , pirivu etc .
  I have to test myself oneday wherther I can write. main problem, lot of people complained that they couldn't understand whay i write.
  atleast, for this topic I have to go for simple nadai.
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Wed Oct 8 13:10:39 EDT 2003
  
  thx kajan
  
  would try..
  
  KAJAN
  FOR WRITING SAD POEMS U NEED TO CONVEY THE MESSEGE TO THE READER.........SHOULD GO DEEP WITHIN.......SHOULD KNOCK AT THEIR HEART...FOR THAT UR STYLE SHOULD 'COME DOWN' TO THE READER'S STANDARD..
  
  
  

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