Topic started by shylaja (@ 203-195-196-66.now-india.net.in) on Fri Aug 1 00:37:38 .
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vidiyaathe irave
kanavil en kaadhali.


neruppilaamal pugai
urukum panikkatti

punnagaikku oththigai
porumaiyudan sollitharukiraar
pukaippada kalainjar.

thendralukkum
saamaram veesiyathu
ennavalin dhuppatta

Responses:

• From: sori-Observer (@ cvg-65-27-251-73.cinci.rr.com) on: Fri Aug 1 10:32:47 EDT 2003
  
  Pidikkavillai.
  
  
• From: Sheik (@ 167.218.158.81) on: Fri Aug 1 10:52:52 EDT 2003
  
  enakkum thaan, but eatho ok
  
  
• From: Ramadas (@ dclient217-162-112-172.hispeed.ch) on: Fri Aug 1 11:44:19 EDT 2003
  
  Shylaja
  The main characteristic of haikkoo should be that the second line must be surprising and it must give an ironical twist to the idea in the first line. This is lacking in your couplets!
  
  
• From: aRivili (@ cache9-5.ruh.isu.net.sa) on: Sat Aug 2 08:20:44 EDT 2003
  
  idhu hikoo endru avargal sonnadhu perhaps a mismatch, in respect of 1, 3 and 4. 2 is somewhat a hikoo (there is a contrast).. but if you take it as pudhu kavidhai, these are fine.. especially, the no. 4.
  
  
• From: Kajan (@ cpe0050ba1669c3-cm014110219722.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com) on: Sun Aug 3 01:15:54 EDT 2003
  
  haikkoo must be in two or three lines.
  As Ramadas said , there should be a surpraise in the last line.
  
  here is an example of Moridague's haikoo written in Tamil by 'kavikko' Aptul Rahuman,
  
  uthirnthu veezhntha malar
  kiLaikkuth thirumpukiRathu
  O ! vaNNaththup poochchi.
  
  in Tamil
  §Á¡Ã¢¼¡§¸Â¢ý †öÜ ´ý¨È ¾Á¢Æ¢Ä¢ø ¸Å¢§¸¡ «ôÐø ÃÌÁ¡ý À¢ýÅÕÁ¡Ú ÜÚ¸¢È¡÷:
  
  ¯¾¢÷óРŢØó¾ ÁÄ÷
  ¸¢¨ÄìÌò ¾¢ÕõÒ¸¢ÈÐ.
  µ ! Åñ½òÐô â.
  
  
• From: ¸ƒý (@ cpe0050ba1669c3-cm014110219722.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com) on: Sun Aug 3 01:17:46 EDT 2003
  
  ¾¢Õò¾õ :..¸¢¨ÄìÌò... ±ýÀ¨¾ ...¸¢¨ÇìÌò...±É Å¡º¢ì¸×õ
  
  
• From: Roshan (@ 203.115.13.90) on: Tue Aug 5 07:40:40 EDT 2003
  
  Kajan, thanks for that lovely haiku!
  
  
• From: Iyappan (@ 203.200.61.1) on: Fri Aug 22 13:47:48 EDT 2003
  
  haiku oru azuththam irukkanum, sattenRu padippavargalai paathikkanum
  
  >>vidiyaathe irave
  kanavil en kaadhali. >thendralukkum
  saamaram veesiyathu
  ennavalin dhuppatta >punnagaikku oththigai
  porumaiyudan sollitharukiraar
  pukaippada kalainjar.>>
  
  solla varum seythi ??
  
  
• From: Iyappan (@ 203.200.61.1) on: Fri Aug 22 13:50:22 EDT 2003
  
  haiku oru azuththam irukkanum, sattenRu padippavargalai paathikkanum
  
  >>vidiyaathe irave
  kanavil en kaadhali. >thendralukkum
  saamaram veesiyathu
  ennavalin dhuppatta >punnagaikku oththigai
  porumaiyudan sollitharukiraar
  pukaippada kalainjar.>>
  
  solla varum seythi ??
  and kajan
  mentioned kavithai is good
  
  
  
  any way haiku kavithaigalukku saRRu kitta varukiRathu pOla irunthaalum ivaigal haiku kavithaigalin varisaiyil sErathu
  
  anbudan
  iyappan
  
  
• From: iyappan (@ 203.200.61.1) on: Fri Aug 22 13:51:48 EDT 2003
  
  sorry some lines mising i dont know why
  
  iyappan
  
  
• From: Kajan (@ cpe0050ba1669c3-cm014110219722.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com) on: Fri Aug 22 23:25:14 EDT 2003
  
  iyappan,
  
  u will miss the comments two quoted statements if u use the sign for quoting.
  
  
• From: Kajan (@ cpe0050ba1669c3-cm014110219722.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com) on: Sat Aug 23 00:33:23 EDT 2003
  
  iyappan,
  
  u will miss the comments written between two quoted statements if u use the sign of > at start and end of quoted statements.
  
  
• From: malligai (@ 0-1pool88-240.nas33.thornton1.co.us.da.qwest.net) on: Sun Aug 24 02:29:23 EDT 2003
  
  Shylaja,
  
  'neruppilaamal pugai
  urukum panikkatti '
  
  --this is nice
  
  
• From: aRivili (@ cache8-5.ruh.isu.net.sa) on: Sun Aug 24 03:28:42 EDT 2003
  
  adhaaney, ivangalaa oru rule vachukittu, moonu line irukkanum, moonavadhu line muranpadanumnu solli, idhu hikoo illengaranga.. ituley muran irukku.. kutty hikoonnu yen naam vachukka koodathu? anyway, nallarukkuthanaey.
  
  
• From: evano_oruthan (@ 202.56.254.194) on: Sun Aug 24 04:16:43 EDT 2003
  
  kavidhai nantru...
  especially "neruppilaamal pugai urukum panikkatti "
  
  aanaal haikoo endru oppukolla mudiyaathu.
  
  
• From: aRivili (@ cache10-5.ruh.isu.net.sa) on: Sun Aug 24 08:19:27 EDT 2003
  
  hi friends, chumma seendi paarthen nam nakkeerarkalai.. periyavargal mannikkanum.
  
  

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