Topic started by Oru Thamizhan (@ 66-188-91-109.mad.wi.charter.com) on Fri Jun 7 22:50:50 .
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KanipPoRi Kaalaththilum
Kavidhai Nayam
ALLi tharum Azhagu Nilaa!
EazhaigaLin ViLakku!!

Natpudan
Oru Thamizhan

Responses:

• From: Vaanmathi .A (@ 202.140.148.179) on: Fri Jun 7 23:54:42
  
  Thamil,
  Kavithai Simply Superb!
  
  
• From: deepa (@ 202.9.149.28) on: Sat Jun 8 01:38:24
  
  Nalla irukku, umadhu peyar polave!
  
  Thodarungal Tamizh.
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ bangdp-34-99.mantraonline.com) on: Sat Jun 8 02:20:29
  
  Tamizhan,
  
  I may not be as strong in my kavidai as others. But I feel, this kavidai does not steal one's heart.
  
  Reasons.
  
  1. Nilavu patri koorum pozhudu, ingu kanipori patri villakam tevai illai. (Unless it helps ur kavidai in some way)
  
  2. Kanipori - nila ...(Kaaalam maaaridinum ) endra karuthai kooravarum neengal, ingu kaiyanda vidam 'not too good. (vazhakkamaaana tamzihan enga???)
  
  "KanipPoRi Kaalaththilum
  Kavidhai Nayam "<<<<
  
  KaaalathiLUM??? En kanipori kalam vanda nila kavidai nayam ezhandu viduma enna?
  
  Ivaaru nilavai patri koori varum neengal, tideerendru Ezhaigal patri orE karunai kondu Odugireergal.
  
  Oru Thodarchi illai kavidaiyil
  
  Sorry ! May be others would find it good. I just said my point of view.
  
  
  
• From: Govin (@ 203.129.195.100) on: Sat Jun 8 05:41:13
  
  mmmm... agrees to shakthi (for a change) :-))
  
  Thamizhan, naalu varikaLum naangu thanithani kavithaigal pola irukku! ninga 4 avithai ezhuthi paper ellam kizhichi pottutu, apram pickup panni eduththa thundukalil irunthu piranthatho intha kavithai??? Maelum ezhuthingal....
  
  
• From: Vaanmathi .A (@ 202.140.148.179) on: Sun Jun 9 00:26:53
  
  Shakthi,
  >>>> 1. Nilavu patri koorum pozhudu, ingu kanipori patri villakam tevai illai. <<<<
  Ithilenna thavaru entru theriyavillai. kaadhalil thodanki computer varai Ellamae maarikondu thaan irukkirathu computeril evvalavo maatrangal, athil mattumaa indru penkal koodaththaan maripponoom paetchil, nadaiyil, pazhakka vazhakkathil, adaivarai indru eththanaiyoo maatrangal, nammil mattumalla anaithilum.
  Ithanai maatrangalukku naduvil antrilirunthu indru varai maaraamal iruppavaikalil nilavum ontru.
  Ithanai matrankalakku nadivilum endrum maaraamal >>> Kavidhai Nayam ALLi tharum Azhagu Nilaa!. <<<
  Eththanai maatrangal vanthaalum innum Ezhaikal entra vaarthaiyum Ezhaikalum irukkathaan seikiraarkal enpathai maranthidaatha >>> EazhaigaLin ViLakku <<< intha nila.
  
  Neengal sonna karuthil >>> Oru Thodarchi illai kavidaiyil <<< enpathu mattumae unmaiyaaka irukkalaam endru ninaikiraen.
  
  Eninum "Kavithai Super, Nice, Nallaa irukku" endru pugalnthu mattumae ezhuthuvathai thavirthu
  manathil patta karuththai velippataiyaaka kooriya ungal approuch enakku mikavum pidithullathu.
  
  Velipadaiyaana ungal responsai varaVaerkiraen.
  
  by
  Endrum thodarum Natpudan
  Ungal Vaanmathi
  
  
• From: Vaanmathi .A (@ 202.140.148.179) on: Sun Jun 9 00:33:57
  
  adaivarai = aadaivarai
  
  
• From: Oru Thamizhan (@ 66-188-91-109.mad.wi.charter.com) on: Sun Jun 9 02:16:48
  
  Vaanmathi, Deepa, Shakthi and Govind anaivarukkum en NanRigal pala.
  
  Ithu oru Hikoo kavidhai muyaRchiyaagavey naan eduththaen.
  
  Hikoo kavidhaigal moonru varigalil ezhuthappadum. Muthal irandu varigal thodarbudaiyathaai irukkum. kadaisi vari matttum thodarchi illaathathu pola irukkum. aanaal antha kadaisi vari thaan. kavidhaikku niraivu tharum. ippo eduthtu kaattaaga nan padiththa hikoo kavidhaigalil onRai solgren kelungal...
  
  "Salavai Sattaikkul
  Salladai Buniyan.
  Vaazhkkai!"
  
  ippo intha kavidhaila naama enna paarkkirom. muthal irandu varigalil ulla thodarchi moonraavathu varigalil therigiRathaa? illai. aaanaal, intha kavidhaiyin poRulaip paarungal.
  
  "Vaazhkkai enbathu eppadi irukkirathu enraal... Veliye salavai seytha sattai pola palich chenrum ullae aayiram VOttaigal kondathaaga irukkiRathu" enRu kavingar solgiRaar.
  
  Ippadi thaan kavidhaiyil ori thodarchi illaamal kavidhai muzhumai peRumaa enRu muyaRchi seythen. Naan inga enna sollavanthen enRaal...
  "inRum kooda, intha naveena KaNipoRi kaalaththilum kooda sila allathu pala Eazhigalin ViLakkaay iruppathu intha nilaa thaan"
  
  MElum naan inga solla vanthathu VEronru enna venraal.
  "KanippoRi kaalaththilum kavidhai Nayam Alli tharum Azhagu Nilaa"... what i try to mean here is in this busy period... manithargal enthirangalaay aagi vitta intha kaala kattathilum kooda... nilavai paarhthaal nammaal oru kavidhai ezhutha sila nayangalai (kulirchi, magizhchi, OLirchi) ponran nayangalai namakku thanthu oru kavidhaiya ezhutha thoondugiRathu allavaa? athai thaan naan kuRippida muyanRen.
  
  May be, I might have failed in my trial, but will success one day with your opinions.
  
  "Vaarrpugalil varuththamillai - Varunthinaal Valarchiyillai"
  
  Natpudan
  Oru Thamizhan (Born to Win) lol
  
  
  
  
• From: Vaanmathi .A (@ 202.140.148.179) on: Sun Jun 9 13:57:59
  
  Sorry
  
  
• From: Oru Thamizhan (@ 66-188-91-109.mad.wi.charter.com) on: Sun Jun 9 14:13:38
  
  Vaan...
  
  Edhukkaaga Sorry sonnenga nu puriyala. Edhukkaaga irunthaalum Sorry KEkka VEndiya avasiyam illai.
  
  Natpudan
  Kalai Mugilan
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ 202.56.248.64) on: Sun Jun 9 15:07:24
  
  Vaanmathi,
  thx.
  
  Thamizhan,
  
  I dont criticise any kavidai, where the poet, I feel does not take criticism in
  its spirit, or where the poet is generally a not-so-good a poet (like me)
  
  U have wonderful capacity and imagination to give good poems. Hence this criticism
  which I know u would welcome, and be a sport.
  
  "Thangathai suttal than melum Milirum"
  
  anyway....
  
  To be frank, naan inda comment ezhudiya udanEyE, veru oru kOnathil, kavidaiyai
  padithu paarthen. Sathiyamaaai purindadu. Avasara pattu ezhudivittenO endru
  tondriyadu.
  
  The crux u meant was.....(How I understood)
  
  Inda naveena yugathilum, niraiya per computer, virtual reality endru engO
  poi kondirukum inda kaalathilum....
  
  Ezhaigalukku mattum vidivu illai. Valarchi illa avargal vaazhivil indrum
  veLicham taruvadu..nila..mattume.
  
  Ingu 'kavidai nayam' varuvadaaal neengal koorum karuthu edukka villai. i.e.
  not impressing a person. Adaavadu Nilaavin azhagO alladu Kavidai nayamo ingu
  oru Porutttalla!
  
  ""what i try to mean here is in this busy period... manithargal enthirangalaay aagi
  vitta intha kaala kattathilum kooda... nilavai paarhthaal nammaal oru
  kavidhai ezhutha"<<<<<<<<<<<
  
  Inda meaning kku ide maadiri vera kavidai ezhudunga. Rendaiyum combine paNNi
  oru todarchi illamal poivittadu.
  
  I would like it in the following version...
  
  KanipPoRi Kaalaththilum,
  Ezhil kundraa NilavE
  EazhaigaLin ViLakku!!
  
  Ippo I feel the meaning is conveyed better. I dont intend hurting u. Sorry for
  re-writing ur poem. Just my thought which I wrote. thx.
  
  Crux,
  
  Kavidai porul nandru,
  Nayam nandru,
  Kaiyanda vidam...
  Innum Terchi pera vendum.
  
  :-)
  
  viraivil niraiya haikoo ezhuda pogum tamizharaai ungalai paarka virumbugiren.
  (Cause u are Born To Win :-)) Right?
  
  
• From: Ram (@ 63.161.26.234) on: Sun Jun 9 18:56:39
  
  Shakthi,
  "I appreciate ur honesty" nu naan sonna Ice,Jalathosham nu solveenga...ithe Vaanmathi sonna thanks aa?....ithu enna nyayamo???
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ bangdp-36-252.mantraonline.com) on: Mon Jun 10 02:11:44
  
  Ram,
  
  Naan thx sonnadu vaanmathiyin Villakathukku!
  
  anyway since u said it...
  
  ram and vaanmathi,
  thx for appreciating my honesty!
  
  (sheesh so embarassing...)
  :-)
  
  
• From: Ram (@ 63.161.26.234) on: Mon Jun 10 02:58:51
  
  Shakthi,
  It was nice to know that my posting embarassed u....Made my day;-)
  
  

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