Topic started by veenaapponavan (@ 202.142.66.64) on Tue Oct 15 11:28:12 .
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Mazhaippenn SiriththaaL
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Yedharkko azhudhu kondirundha
chinnap pennin yedhirae poai,
yen mookkil kattai viralai vaiththu
naakkai veliyae neettinaen.
Udanae siriththaaL,
kanneraith thudaikkaamal;
Mazhaiyum peidhu kondu
veyilum adiththa maadhiri.

(c) veenaapponavan@yahoo.com

Responses:

• From: Shakthi (@ bangdp-35-178.mantraonline.com) on: Tue Oct 15 13:37:11
  
  azhagana karpanai
  valamaaana sindanai
  romba creative.
  
  Mr.Veena ( i feel pretty embarassed to call ur full name)
  
  ur imagination, creativity, messege etc are too good.
  
  ur poetic sense can be improved
  
  
• From: veenaapponavan (@ 202.142.66.195) on: Tue Oct 15 21:50:25
  
  Hi Shakthi,
  
  Thanks for your appreciation. Can you please elaborate on your comment (ur poetic sense can be improved)?
  
  Thanks,
  vp
  
  
• From: FlowerGuy (@ 203.126.142.232) on: Thu Oct 24 06:24:14
  
  beautiful imagination.
  idhu pondra chinna chinna vishayangal
  vaazhkkaikku suvai serkkirathu.
  
  idhu pondra rasanaiyulla kavithaigal
  padippavar idhazgalai punnagaikka vaikkirathu.
  
  this will be one of my favorite poems in this forumhub.
  Thanks V.P for sharing such a beautiful imagination.
  
  
• From: iyappan (@ 203.200.61.1) on: Thu Oct 24 10:50:01
  
  hI VP
  
  >>Can you please elaborate on your comment << i share the same view of shakthi.
  fine..
  first, the poem is looking like a urai nadai. it should be little poetic way..
  neenga yaru kittayO rendu varila sonnathai kavithaiyaay nalanju varila ezuthuna madhiri ( i mean one to one conversion mathiri )
  GOOD One.. BUT Definitly you can improve it.
  
  Regards
  Iyappan
  
  
  

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