Topic started by "kavitai" (@ cache5-1.ruh.isu.net.sa) on Wed Jul 24 14:32:28 .
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engal sandatihal ungalil yArukkum
onrum siya villai
erundum emmai En parittuhch-selherErhal

ungalin pArvaikkul nAngal
ahppaduvataiyE verukkinrOme

sinthikka ungalukku edayam
elladhu erukkalAm
atanAl sirikkum engalai
En sitaittu salherErhal

nAngal malarntatu ellAm
ungal kUntalhalai taluvawalla
engal vAsam tAn engalin viludhuhal

vanduhali alittu "Iyarhal" Akki
kalyAnam saidhu kolhinrOm
athanAl tAnE engalukku sandhatihal
perakkinrana
erundhum entha vanduhalidam ulla
karunaiyAvadhu ungalidam ellaiyA..?

kadavulukku arhchanai saiya
nAngal tAn kidaitthOma..?
ellai kadavul tAn kettAra..?
ovvoru nAlum pUjaikku pOhum
pUkkali pArtthu pulahAngithm
adaihirErhalE….
vAdi saruhAi Ahum pOdu
kadavulum kUda kavalaip paduvadai
arivErA…?

vellai pUkkalAi amaithi tandhOm
manjal malarhalAi mahilchci tandhOm
uDhA pUkkalAi uvahai kodutthOm
sevappu rOjAkkalAi anpai sonnOm
En kalar kanavuhalil
ungali midhakka vittOm
appadi erundhum engal udalhalai kOrthu
mArpugalil mAlaiyAi aniya ungalAl eppadi mudindhadhU..?!!

kadhalai nAngal madhikkirOm
AnAl kelli eduttha otrai rOjavil tAn
ungal kAdhal vAla vEndum enrAl
kadalai nAngal sapikkirOme

O… manithamE…!!!!
vAlthukkUra nEngal thUvih senra pUkkal
ungal kAladiel nasungippOvatai kUda
ariyAmal nEngal….????!!!

Responses:

• From: FlowerGuy (@ 202.95.127.5) on: Sun Jul 28 01:07:17
  
  "pookalukkellaam siragu mulaithathu...endhan thottathil...." :-)
  
  malargalin manathai madhikkum ungalukku mudhalil oru "salute"...
  
  kavithaiyin rhythm-kaaga,sariyaana vaarthai kidaikaamal..sila neram sindhanaigal sidhaindhu vidum.
  rhyme pattri kavalai padaamal ezhuthivitteergal........sindhanaigal nalla irukku..
  
  poovai parithu,pottu azhithu
  udankattai moodathanam-
  oru vazhiyai nindru pochu.
  
  sedi kodiyin poo parithu
  thaavarangalai vidhavaiyaakkum
  pazhakkam ozhiyum naal ethuvo??
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ bangdp-36-226.mantraonline.com) on: Sun Jul 28 05:34:19
  
  kavithai,
  
  With great respect to ur views! and congrats on a wonderful poem!!!
  
  Sorry to say,
  I differ from ur view.
  
  
  Pookalai midikka vendam. Madhikka seivadil enna tavaru?
  
  Kadavullukku arpaniyungal,
  ungalaiyo alladu veedugaliyo alangariyungal
  
  kaalile pottu midikka vendam
  padukkaiyil pottu nugara vendam
  
  pookal chediyil vittu vittalum madindu danE pogam?
  maalaikkul?
  
  
  
  
  
• From: "kavitai" (@ cache5-1.ruh.isu.net.sa) on: Mon Jul 29 13:13:26
  
  Dear FlowerGuy
  
  nanrihal... nanrihal...nanrihal...
  ungalin vimarsanattukku Ayeram nanrihal
  
  <<< thaavarangalai vidhavaiyaakkum
  pazhakkam ozhiyum naal ethuvo??">>>>
  
  ungal kAttiruppu kUda oru suhamAi..
  
  nanrihal nanrihal
  
  
  
  Thanks Shakthi
  ungalin manappurvamAna pArattutalkalukku
  
  ungalin pArvaien kOnattilirundum
  oru kavitai uruppetrukkondirukkeradu
  perasavam Ahattum anuppi vaikkinrAne
  
  mEndum nanrihaludan
  
  "kavitai"
  
  
  
  
• From: Thurihai (@ cache7-1.ruh.isu.net.sa) on: Fri Aug 9 13:14:05
  
  kavitai
  
  what a wonderful poem
  
  I have to say somthing abt ur poem
  
  naan endha pakkattukku pudiyavan
  enru mudhan mudhlaaha
  engu kavitaihalaal veelvi saium kavigarhalin padaippuhalai kannuruhinraan
  
  how grade poems are hr...!!!
  
  kavitai
  
  thaangalin kavitaiyai paartha poodhu enakku kavikko Abdur Rahman eludiya "maram enpadhu uyar tinai" ennum
  kavitai padittha ninaivugal meendukondana
  
  edhayam ulla manitharhalaal mattum thhaan alahai atharikka mudihiradhu
  kavitai
  andha alhokkE aadaaramai amaindha malarkalai neesikka terindha ungal manadukkul enadu mudhal vanakkam
  
  "vanduhali alittu "Iyarhal" Akki
  kalyAnam saidhu kolhinrOm
  athanAl tAnE engalukku sandhatihal
  perakkinrana
  erundhum entha vanduhalidam ulla
  karunaiyAvadhu ungalidam ellaiyA..?"
  
  ungaladhu endha warihalai padikkum poodhu nammil sila manidharhal avasiyam vetkittukkolla thaan veendum
  eduvee ungal kavithai teediya yadhaarttham ena ninaikkinreen
  
  "O… manithamE…!!!!
  vAlthukkUra nEngal thUvih senra pUkkal
  ungal kAladiel nasungippOvatai kUda
  ariyAmal nEngal….????!!!"
  
  Real verses..! what a fantastic views…!! Excellent kavithai
  
  varnaggaludan
  
  Thurihai
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
• From: kurankaatti (@ sf-proxy2.montgomery.com) on: Fri Aug 9 16:21:44
  
  azhakaana kavithai dhaan, aanaal....
  ithu pOl arisiyum, kOthumaiyum kavithai paatinaal ennavaakum ?
  
  kavithai varikaL aRumai, paaraattukaL!
  
  
• From: "kavithai" (@ cache5-1.ruh.isu.net.sa) on: Sat Aug 10 13:18:51
  
  Nanri Thurihai
  mudhan mudhalil manra maiyattil nulaindirukkum ungalai mikka anbudan varavEtkinrEn
  Adu enna "Thurihai" neengal oru OviyarA ?
  
  matrum ungal IP(@ cache7-1.ruh.isu.net.sa)I feel it is from my place?? It's mean u r wary near to me. However I forward to u my address and contact# to ur yahoo mail - virumbin thodarpu kollalAm
  
  yes Thurihai unmaiel ek kavitaiyai pUkkalin paarvai koonatthilirundhu eludhavE muyattchi saitEEn avvalavu thaan
  
  neengal solvadhu poola en kavitai maa perum sindhanai vaadium kavigarumaana kavikko Abdur Rahman eludiya "maram enpadhu uyar tinai" ennum kavitaikku aruhil kooda enadhu kavithai erukka mudiyAdhu enpadhuvE enadhu thaAlmaiyAna apipirAyam
  
  kalai unarvudan ungal rasanaiyai velippaduttiyamaikku nanrihal
  
  Kuran sir
  
  enna solreenga sir
  
  <<<
  
  pasi tEErum...??! pattini tEErum..?
  En sir arisich sAdamum kOthumai rottium enna kasakkuma ? LOL
  
  nanri kuran ungalin paaraattukaL!
  utchahatthai tharuhinrana
  
  enrum anpudan
  
  "kavithai
  
  enrum anpudan
  
  "kavitai"
  
  
• From: FlowerGuy (@ 202.95.127.5) on: Sun Aug 11 02:41:20
  
  arisiyum,kothumaiyum paadiyathai..kettirundhaal..
  
  kaattraiyum,neeraiyum nambi mirugangal vaazhndhirukkalaam.
  koncham muyarchi seithu..than unavai thaane thayaarithirukkalaam.
  unavukkaaga innoru uyirai kollaamal poyirukkalaam.
  mirungangal thondraamale kooda irundhirukkalaam.
  
  "better evolution" nadanthirukkalaam... :-)
  
  
• From: Elangoo (@ 202.187.80.126) on: Sun Aug 11 04:05:47
  
  Pookalai mathithu kavi padiya arumai kavinyanukku enathu muthanna paaratukkal. Sethiri vilunthu pookalum vaasumudaiyathu endru kooriya anbin perisudare vaalka vaalumudan..
  
  Endrum anbudan...Elangoo
  
  
• From: "kavithai" (@ cache5-1.ruh.isu.net.sa) on: Mon Aug 12 13:57:58
  
  Nanri FG
  
  "arisiyum,kothumaiyum paadiyathai..kettirundhaal.."
  
  nalla sindhanai
  
  Thx Elangoo
  manadhai niraittha vaalthukkal ennum eludha
  thuunduhiradhu ennai ungal varihal
  
  nanri nanri
  
  enrum anbudan
  
  "kavithai"
  
  

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