Topic started by Gautham (@ 203.145.184.218) on Mon Oct 11 21:16:47 EDT 2004.
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pala veettu saappaattai
palavaaraaga kalanthu
pala naalaaga saappitta
yenga theru raappichai
inru tharmaaspathiriyil!
kirukkuppaya mavan...
naethu mathiyaanam
high schoolula
sathonavu saappittaanaam!

Responses:

• From: anbu (@ 203.145.184.218) on: Mon Oct 11 21:38:23 EDT 2004
  
  romba nallaa irukku...sathunavu yevloo moosamaaga irukkirathu yenpathai unarthiya vitham arumai!..intha kavithayil samooga unmayum kalanthu irukkirathu!!..ithu poonra kavithaigal niraya yeluthungal...vilippunarvu yaerppaduthungal!
  vazhthukkal!
  
  
• From: Gautham (@ 203.145.184.218) on: Mon Oct 11 21:41:40 EDT 2004
  
  nanri anbu!
  pthuvayil sathunavu saappittu niraya maanavargal kavalaikkidamaaga iruntha seithi kaetta poluthu thaan intha kavithayai yeluthinaen...ithu yentha kaalathirkkum poruntha kuudiyathu thaan yenpathu sathunavu saappittu kulanthaigal padum avasthayai naam thinamum seithi thaalgalil padikkum pothu purihirathu!!!
  
  
• From: Vasantha (@ 203.145.184.218) on: Mon Oct 11 21:58:01 EDT 2004
  
  hi gautham,
  this verse also fine!
  Ur way of presentation in ur verse is something different & intresting!....keep it up!...
  vesantha
  
  
• From: Gautham (@ 203.145.184.218) on: Mon Oct 11 21:59:21 EDT 2004
  
  hi vasantha,
  thank u for ur continuous response for my verses!...ur response within ur busy work, make me to write more & more!
  Gautham
  
  
• From: puvana (@ cache1.curtin.edu.au) on: Tue Oct 12 00:10:21 EDT 2004
  
  gautham, wat can i say? amazing! keep it up fren..
  
  
• From: Sridharan (@ dsl-tn-247.246.247.61.touchtelindia.net) on: Tue Oct 12 01:18:41 EDT 2004
  
  Dear Gautham,
  Superb!! keep it up!! Your golden words are disturbing my heart.......
  Yours
  Sridharan
  
  
• From: Rajkumar (@ 202.71.149.182) on: Tue Oct 12 04:12:53 EDT 2004
  
  hi gautham,
  
  Really ur poems are good.
  
  Sindika vaikum oru kavithai.
  
  Keep it up.
  
  Urs Rajkumar
  
  
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• From: saravanan (@ 203.145.184.218) on: Tue Oct 12 05:13:36 EDT 2004
  
  Hai Gautham,
  Very Nice................
  
  
• From: anu (@ 203.145.184.218) on: Tue Oct 12 08:01:40 EDT 2004
  
  gautham i expect some more better poems from you. instead of putting raapichai and other things.
  
  
• From: R K SIVAKUMAR (@ 210.210.35.41) on: Tue Oct 12 09:40:00 EDT 2004
  
  Dai gauthama,
  MMMmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm!!!!! kalakku da.......
  
  
• From: Thiagu (@ 220.227.177.81) on: Tue Oct 12 10:23:57 EDT 2004
  
  Instead of saying nice poem, i can say nice thought about mid day meals that has been provided in schools! good! keep it up mr. gautham
  
  
• From: Srini (@ 202.21.134.11) on: Tue Oct 12 15:48:13 EDT 2004
  
  Expecting more creative from you, man!!
  
  
• From: Gautham (@ 203.145.184.218) on: Tue Oct 12 22:03:11 EDT 2004
  
  hi sridhar,
  nanri!
  
  
• From: Gautham (@ 203.145.184.218) on: Tue Oct 12 22:04:59 EDT 2004
  
  hi rajkumar,
  unmayil sinthikka vaithathaa?...unmayenil santhosam thaan!
  
  
• From: Gautham (@ 203.145.184.218) on: Tue Oct 12 22:06:57 EDT 2004
  
  thanks saravanan!
  Gautham
  
  
• From: Gautham (@ 203.145.184.218) on: Tue Oct 12 22:10:50 EDT 2004
  
  hi anu,
  naan sollaamalaeyae padithu pathil anuppiyathil mahilchi!
  kandippaa yelutharaen...intha verse pondichery matterai indirecta solrathukkaaga yeluthinathu thaan...but innum nallaa yeluthanum...
  Gautham
  
  
• From: Gautham (@ 203.145.184.218) on: Tue Oct 12 22:14:33 EDT 2004
  
  hida siva,
  thanksda, ithu yaerkkanavae yeluthinathu thaandaa...ini latestaa yoosichu yelutharaendaa...okva?
  paaraattuvatharkku nanbargal irukkumpothu kalakkaamal yeppadi?!!
  Gautham
  
  
• From: Gautham (@ 203.145.184.218) on: Tue Oct 12 22:18:10 EDT 2004
  
  Hi thiagu,
  thanks for ur appreciation...ungalathu paaraattukkalum vimarsanangalum thaan yennai sarippaduthikkolla sariyaana vazhi!...unmayil intha forum very good one!
  
  
• From: Gautham (@ 203.145.184.218) on: Tue Oct 12 22:20:11 EDT 2004
  
  paapunaayakkanpatti sriniyae!!!
  yes, innum niraya yelutharaen!...ithu thaan unnooda new IDya?..IDya paarkkarappavae romba santhosamaaga irukkirathu!
  
  
• From: Gautham (@ 203.145.184.218) on: Tue Oct 12 23:30:03 EDT 2004
  
  junitha,
  thanks for ur appreciation!
  
  
• From: Gokul Nagarajan (@ 203.145.184.218) on: Wed Oct 13 22:45:21 EDT 2004
  
  really nice Gautham,
  The verse will serve the purpose.
  the language and its simplicity shows ur
  'Akkarai' in making even the so called 'Aditthattu vargam' understand the essence.
  Understandability should be a strict criteria for poems -I beleive.
  The irony is good.
  A title would have added the beauty.
  A good theme for a hykoo and would have become one if the verse was precise.
  Though I told about this site to u, I am inspired to write only aftr seeing urs.
  -gokul
  
  
• From: Gautham (@ 203.145.184.218) on: Wed Oct 13 23:07:00 EDT 2004
  
  Hi gokul
  yenakku intha siteai kaattiya valikattiyae!
  yenathu kavithayin muthal vimarsanam unathu pathivaaga irukka vaendumena virumbinaen...vaendumenrae kaalamthaalthi vaendumalavu arumayaaga vimarsithatharkku nanri!
  manathai paathitha sambavangalaal velippadum yentha karuthum valimayaaga irukkum...athayae satru kavithayaaga maattrum pothu satru menmayaaha velippadum!...yenavae ikkavithayil sathunavin kuraipaattai vanmayaaga illaamal yelimayaagavae solli irukkiraen,...avvalavu thaan!
  
  
• From: Anna (@ 218.208.18.131) on: Thu Oct 14 20:27:30 EDT 2004
  
  Arputham...Toong'gik'kidakkum arivuk kuthirayei yaaroo thatti ezhuppi vittathu poal irukkirathu....
  
  vayiru niraikka unavaa...illei tharma aaspittal niraikkavaanu teriyale....
  
  manase illaatha sila manithargalukkum...ippo manasaatchi peasa aarambit'tirukkum.....
  
  ....Kumbakonam tee vibathum nenjei ulukkum oru sambavam...athei vaithum neenggal ezhutalaame...
  
  Todarnthu ezhutunggal...
  enathu vaazthu!
  
  
• From: Gautham (@ 203.145.184.218) on: Fri Oct 15 21:17:04 EDT 2004
  
  hi thozhiyae,
  unathu pathil hembaaga irukkirathu!!!
  
  
• From: tiruttakkan (@ rasharyana026.220.56.202.touchtelindia.net) on: Fri Oct 15 22:23:39 EDT 2004
  
  pl write more. this one was ok.
  
  tiruttakkan
  
  
• From: Gautham (@ 203.145.184.218) on: Sat Oct 16 00:00:37 EDT 2004
  
  hi thiru,
  ok, thodarnthu ungal vimarsanamum thaevai...yenakku fonts download seiya vaaippu illai..naan netcafeil irunthu kavithai anuppuhiraen..so, yenathu thaminglish style kavithaigalai yaetrukkollungal
  
  

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