Topic started by Shakthi (@ bangdp-36-218.mantraonline.com) on Thu Jun 13 09:35:10 .
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Azhagaal unnai
Elanam seiden.
Azhagaal unnai
etti udaiten.

Azhagaal unnai
azha vaithu paarten
Odungi vidaamal
Odi than vandaai.

Perumidham kondu
Aati padaiten
En kaaladiyil
idamittu, ekkaalithen.

Kaalam unnai
vilakki vittadu
ennidam irundu
tanithu vittadu.

Azhagai pugazha
pala per indru
ahamkaaram kolla
aasai daan illai.

Azhagai un vizhiyil vaangi
azhugaiyai ennakku vittu ponaayO

en azhagu azhugiradu.
Nee rasikka villai endru..
Vandu viden!

Azhagai indru
Agathilum Etri,

Kaarthirukkiren unnakkaga
Kaalan ennai vendraal
Aduta piraviyilaavadu..
vandu viden!

.....

En azhagai rasikka.

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• From: Iyappan (@ lan-202-144-73-10.maa.sify.net) on: Tue Jul 23 11:25:59
  
  HI ..
  whats going on here?? I couldnt understand..
  
  and mr skandhavelu natarjah.. do you have any poem posted in this forum.. and ( i have read your tamil knowledge is ameture, in one of thread called karunamayee.. written by you and dont ever call that is the poem.. please.. it is horrible).
  
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  Unarndhu nagaithal uthamarkkazagu -matror manam
  arindhu nagaithal manidharkku azagu
  karuthugal thanum karuthinil indri
  arthamatradhaay sirithidum maakkal
  uraithida vendumO.. unarndhu kolveerO ..
  -----
  Iyappan
  
  
• From: t (@ 167.218.158.70) on: Tue Jul 23 12:53:00
  
  test
  
  
• From: Skanthavelu Nadarajah (@ edtntnt7-port-152.dial.telus.net) on: Tue Jul 23 19:09:57
  
  I wrote a much better poem than the other one.
  It is in a different website.
  
  It is titled "Oh, Karunamayi Amma! I know you are with me."
  
  Oh, Karunamayi Amma,
  I know You are always with me.
  In my heart,
  In my prayers,
  In my shrine,
  In my dreams.
  Oh Karunamayi!
  Please never take leave from me.
  You blessed me when I called You,
  You heard me when I glorified You,
  You protected me when I was scared.
  Please always stay with me
  Sending me Your Blessings,
  Always smiling upon me,
  Always granting me mental darshan of Yourself.
  Thank you so much for calling me to You.
  I love You from the bottom of my wee heart.
  I pray that one day,
  I will have the privelage of meeting You!
  Thank you!
  
  
  
• From: Skanthavelu Nadarajah (@ edtntnt7-port-152.dial.telus.net) on: Tue Jul 23 19:18:14
  
  Iyyapan,
  Please note that the above poem reflects my deep devotion I have for Amma. She is very dear to me.
  Not only is Amma my spiritual Mother, but also my good friend. And could you suggest as to how I should write my other "poem" in order for it to be more like a real poem. Change some parts, drop others and put new lines in their place?
  
  
• From: Skanthavelu Nadarajah (@ edtntnt1-port-170.dial.telus.net) on: Wed Jul 24 18:31:11
  
  Iyyappan,
  Please suggest how I can make my other poem "Karunamayee" into a real poem. Otherwise, do not post your two cents about someones writing on this manRa maiyam!
  
  
• From: Iyappan (@ lan-202-144-73-10.maa.sify.net) on: Thu Jul 25 02:58:37
  
  Skanthavelu Natarajah,
  
  Fine..
  1. if you are writing any poem .. before posting read it, think can it be posted, does it carries the value. Ungalai neengale kelvi kelungal. neengal padithu parkumbothe theriyum idhu kavithaiya illalaya enRu. This is my suggession. because your poem is your product. i have no rights to drop or modify any lines in that. you decide what do you want to convey thru your poem. and make sure that it conveys that.. thats all
  
  2. ennudaya karuthu, ungaludaya mundhaya thread poem paRRiyadhu. Neengal adhai orumurai padithu parungal appuramai ennudaya karuthai padithu parunga.
  
  3.Try avoiding mixing up with two diff language in the name of poem. again it is my suggession
  
  4. Ullathil iruppadhu thaan kavithaiyaay varum. i respect your sentiments and devotion towards Karunamaayee. Hope i havent hurt your sentiments by any chance. but adhai verum varthaigala kottamal innum nidhanamaga sindhitu ezuthinaal palar viyandhu parattum alavil irukkum
  
  5. I remember you have posted in one thread to shakthi " if you want to show your anger show it to me". To show you that what ever we say we may not able to follow all the time. see here i have told some thing abt your poem and you have got angry.
  
  6. Dont take any thing as personal.. it is all abt improving ourself.
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  Here goes one small zen story for you
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  The Prime Minister of the Tang Dynasty was a national hero for his success as both a statesman and military leader. But despite his fame, power, and wealth, he considered himself a humble and devout Buddhist. Often he visited his favorite Zen master to study under him, and they seemed to get along very well. The fact that he was prime minister apparently had no effect on their relationship, which seemed to be simply one of a revered master and respectful student.
  
  One day, during his usual visit, the Prime Minister asked the master, "Your Reverence, what is egotism according to Buddhism?" The master's face turned red, and in a very condescending and insulting tone of voice, he shot back, "What kind of stupid question is that!?"
  
  This unexpected response so shocked the Prime Minister that he became sullen and angry. The Zen master then smiled and said, "THIS, Your Excellency, is egotism."
  ---
  
  Vazthukkaludan
  
  Iyappan
  
  
• From: Skanthavelu Nadarajah (@ edtntnt5-port-100.dial.telus.net) on: Thu Jul 25 09:12:08
  
  Iyyappan,
  Very nice. Did you like my poem, "Karunamayi Amma!
  I know you are always with me."? Very well written
  and very beautiful. Please could you translate it into Tamil for me? I may post the Tamil version of
  the poem on the website I posted the original English on. nanRi!
  
  
• From: Skanthavelu Nadarajah (@ edtntnt4-port-207.dial.telus.net) on: Thu Jul 25 22:29:42
  
  Iyyappan,
  Thank you for sending me that beautiful poem. Can I sing it in the form of a song? Jai Karunamayi!
  
  
• From: Skanthavelu Nadarajah (@ edtntnt4-port-207.dial.telus.net) on: Thu Jul 25 22:35:37
  
  By the way, Iyyappan. That zen story was quite humorous. I understand how the Minister must of felt when that monk screamed at him! Also, I am sorry I got mad at you.
  
  

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