Topic started by Pavalamani Pragasam (@ dialpool-210-214-9-29.maa.sify.net) on Tue Sep 10 08:33:10 .
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Thollai
Paasaththoda paakkuRaa,
Nesaththoda nerunguRaa,
Aasaiyoda alaiyaRaa,
Arukil vara thudikkiRaa,
Pakalil odi oLiyaRaa,
Pakkam vara vekkamo?
Iruttu vara kaaththirunthu
Ishtam pola kadikkiRaa-
Entha ethirppum palikkalaiye,
Kosuth thollai thaangkalaiye!

Responses:

• From: kurankaatti (@ sf-proxy4.montgomery.com) on: Tue Sep 10 14:51:04
  
  nalla nakaichuvai paatal, kuzhadhaikalukku sollum arumaiyaana thamizh rhyme.
  sEmiththu vaiyunkal indhu pOla kavithaikaLai. naaLai kuzhanthaikaLukku oru puththakamaaka veLiyitalaam.
  
  
• From: "kavithai" (@ cache2-2.ruh.isu.net.sa) on: Thu Sep 12 01:58:56
  
  hah hah...haa...
  
  nalla Irukku Pavalamani
  
  enrum anpudan
  
  "kavithai"
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ bangdp-36-196.mantraonline.com) on: Thu Sep 12 05:10:18
  
  lol nice one!
  
  *********
  
  "Oru pakkam paarkiraal
  oru kannai saikiraal"
  
  endru oru tamizh pada paadal undu.
  tangal kavidai nadai anda paadalai ninaivu padutugiradu.
  
  I hate that song! Idulai kosuvukkaga anda pattai
  yosichaa! Tharkolai pannikalaam pola irukku!
  
  lol.
  
  *****
  
  Ur kavidai is good.
  
  
• From: Govin (@ 203.129.195.100) on: Fri Sep 13 06:49:33
  
  haha, good one pragasam!!
  
  
  
• From: KANTHA (@ 202.187.80.126) on: Sun Sep 22 03:25:35
  
  PRAGASAM SIR,ETHE ENGLISHLE ENAKKU SMS VANTHECE O.K
  
  
• From: fainas (@ montreal-ppp3535577.sympatico.ca) on: Tue Oct 1 18:13:54
  
  realy creative but i wish u would have changed the end....but had good laugh anyway...nice poem,hee hee..
  
  

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