THE DRESSING ROOM

[Surya]

Holy Mother Of God!!

WOW!!! I love reading and writing creepy stuff, I've also written a couple so-called wierd short stories in this section a couple years ago...but this is just....

Ok...I've got a million things rushing into my head right now...i'll write one by one.



Excellent JOB!! This is so far, THE BEST piece of writing that I've read in this section! The story is REALLY thrilling!!! Even though we don't know anything abt Preethi, her past, her death and her thurst for blood...I was creeped out since the beggining for some reason....maybe because it's 12:54 AM here and all the lights in the house are switched off, and i'm in my dark room reading....but I seriously think that the way you narrate the story is mindblowing!! I'm unable.....to pinpoint what it is that gave me a creepish feeling...something in the way you narrated though...expicially the CHATTING part... The way you've presented the series of unfortunate events (:P) is excellent! PLEASE DO WRITE OTHER STORIES!

Now...Lemme see if I got the ending right..:P

*Vinodh is outside..he starts towards the dressing room when we hear of him last.

*Suresh, who is aware of the ghost, wants to save his brother.

*Now...the ending is left to the imagination of the reader! (Excellent idea btw!!!)

-------*Vinodh could've gone in and gotten murdered.

OR

------*Vinodh might've given up, and turned back, and Suresh might've barged into the Dressing Room in hopes to save his brother.


Any of those things might have happend...or maybe it was neither Vinodh or Suresh who was mudered...

The ending is left with a very good "?" to keep the noodle of the reader going. :P That was really awesome!

Also:

I really like how you describe Chennai and the other minute (Please do excuse my spelling ) details which make a big difference.

*The Weather.
*The Gurkha with the Pan Stained Teeth.
*Traffic.

NICELY DONE!!

My shot @ the Moral: You Never Know What's On The Other Side Of The Keyboard...So make smart decisions when interacting with e-pals?

[Surya]

Holy Mother Of God!!

WOW!!! I love reading and writing creepy stuff, I've also written a couple so-called wierd short stories in this section a couple years ago...but this is just....

Ok...I've got a million things rushing into my head right now...i'll write one by one.



Excellent JOB!! This is so far, THE BEST piece of writing that I've read in this section! The story is REALLY thrilling!!! Even though we don't know anything abt Preethi, her past, her death and her thurst for blood...I was creeped out since the beggining for some reason....maybe because it's 12:54 AM here and all the lights in the house are switched off, and i'm in my dark room reading....but I seriously think that the way you narrate the story is mindblowing!! I'm unable.....to pinpoint what it is that gave me a creepish feeling...something in the way you narrated though...expicially the CHATTING part... The way you've presented the series of unfortunate events (:P) is excellent! PLEASE DO WRITE OTHER STORIES!

Now...Lemme see if I got the ending right..:P

*Vinodh is outside..he starts towards the dressing room when we hear of him last.

*Suresh, who is aware of the ghost, wants to save his brother.

*Now...the ending is left to the imagination of the reader! (Excellent idea btw!!!)

-------*Vinodh could've gone in and gotten murdered.

OR

------*Vinodh might've given up, and turned back, and Suresh might've barged into the Dressing Room in hopes to save his brother.


Any of those things might have happend...or maybe it was neither Vinodh or Suresh who was mudered...Maybe NO ONE got murdered..and the mess was really made by the girls...

The ending is left with a very good "?" to keep the noodle of the reader going. :P That was really awesome!

Also:

I really like how you describe Chennai and the other minute (Please do excuse my spelling ) details which make a big difference.

*The Weather.
*The Gurkha with the Pan Stained Teeth.
*Traffic.

NICELY DONE!!

My shot @ the Moral: You Never Know What's On The Other Side Of The Keyboard...So make smart decisions when interacting with e-pals?

[crazy]

chevy: ur message is good

surya

[chevy]

huh .. this thread was missing yesterday .. som messag kept cumin ... so i kept postin .. then realised it got posted 3 times .. tried deletin n the whole thread disappreared ...we shall continue the new one only ....

[Surya]

Naan oru thadava sonna...5 thadava sonna maathiri.