Dream Girl
Topic started by Sweetie (@ webcachew04b.cache.pol.co.uk) on Mon Nov 4 13:55:55 .
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He looked at his watch. It was only 07.20. Her bus wouldn't come for another 10 mins. He smiled softly to himself, remembering when he had first seen her. He hadn't really noticed her that time. Just another girl.
That was until that party, when he had seen her dancing, her smile, her eyes. Her eyes. It was her eyes that had made him notice her. Like two almonds, bright, never cold.
He spent hours at night just thinking about her. His love, Shivani.
Many girls were in love with him. He was tall, muscular, sporty and handsome. But he had eyes for no one else but Shivani.
He looked at his watch again. Time seemed to have slowed down. She had agreed to meet up with him at that bus stop. It had been a year now since they had been going out.
Before he went and told her he had gprayed to Ganapathy that he got a favourable answer. And that was exactly what he got. His Dream Girl.
As he stood there he saw a figure coming towards him. It was his friend, Arun. His heart went cold. He had heard rumours of there being something between Shivani and Arun but had refused to believe them. All the same....
" Hey Shiva! How are you?" shouted Arun coming and givin him a jolly punch.
" Naan nalla irukaraen daa. Dey, antha 63 bus kandaneeya?" Shiva asked.
Just as he spoke it came. Hoards of girls came out until finally SHE came out. Smiling, he went to greet her.
" Hey Arun!" she said smiling and without so much as a glance at Shiva went over to him.
Slowly, Shiva retreated into a corner and as he watched them walking away, hand in hand, he knew that he had lost his dream girl, forever.
Responses:
- From: msn (@ web.waldorf.edu)
on: Mon Nov 4 19:22:43
Usually the guy cheats on the girl... anyways, looks like he didn't know his "Shivani" that well after all!
- From: Sweetie (@ webcacheh07a.cache.pol.co.uk)
on: Tue Nov 5 13:24:21
OK, u got admit it's pretty c***p. But it's only a first attempt. I'm gonna try and improve my style.
- From: fridge (@ netcache6.is.co.za)
on: Wed Nov 6 09:31:24
sweetie
Do you think that guys really feel that way about woman, Noticing the dance, the eyes etc, and spend nights thinking about the girl.
Nice passage.
About the girl, Very very loose:-)
- From: Sweetie (@ webcachew04b.cache.pol.co.uk)
on: Wed Nov 6 12:41:45
Yes I know it's loose but this is based on a true story involving some1 close to me and a girl he was (and still is) in love with.
- From: fridge (@ netcache6.is.co.za)
on: Thu Nov 7 09:57:05
Sweetie
Oh it is a sad true story, hope the guy gets over it soon and gets on with his life
- From: P (@ lib-ws-2022.lib.asu.edu)
on: Sun Dec 8 13:35:57
Interesting story.. I kinda like the style.. tells a lot in one paragraph :-) Do I know you sweetie?
- From: Sweetie (@ webcachew05b.cache.pol.co.uk)
on: Mon Dec 9 12:20:39
Maybe, maybe not;)
- From: ....... (@ host62-7-23-242.in-addr.btopenworld.com)
on: Mon Dec 9 13:44:43
aaaaaaaahhhhh thats sad......some cases can be tru......man that feelin' must be so wierd....
- From: P (that's just a letter) (@ lib-ws-2021.lib.asu.edu)
on: Tue Dec 10 00:17:31
hehh sweetie.. maybe I think you are someone I know, and you think I'm someone you know... the world's such a small place.. it seems every sixth person you meet is like someone you've already met.. okay, I just made that up, but that's pretty much true
- From: Sri (@ j17.rwg20.jaring.my)
on: Fri Jan 24 22:52:48
Nice story,only if it just a story.
A guy just like the girl who is only preety, shining eyes and dancing well is not a true love. and if there is any response from the girl site the love wont be last longer. A true love is the love where only consider about the individaual persons charactor, feelings and heart not the fizical look.
- From: Sooriya (@ j17.rwg20.jaring.my)
on: Fri Jan 24 22:53:58
Nice story,only if it just a story.
A guy just like the girl who is only preety, shining eyes and dancing well is not a true love. and if there is any response from the girl site the love wont be last longer. A true love is the love where only consider about the individaual persons charactor, feelings and heart not the fizical look.
- From: Nick K. (@ c168-p139.advertisnet.com)
on: Tue Mar 4 13:59:07
hey you girls are cute and but true love is when someone knows that you won't play them and if you know that they won't play you and if another person said lets do something and if that person says that what they don't know it won't hurt them well that happened to me yesterday and I am hurting and I don't know what I should do about her she played me for a fool I just think now she was just using me for sex cause that was all she wanted and I know now make sure from them now on that they won't play you or use you by anyways so that is what I think true love is and true love is when you have a lot of trust with one another and it hurts if that one you love plays you....
- From: prabeesh (@ 61.1.222.71)
on: Sat Apr 5 00:20:57
love desprates anything .dont get upset with is life is not only to love but also to achieve try to achieve something to thing that what others want .
if my words r confusing con sult sycologist
- From: Hariharan (@ 61.11.81.140)
on: Sat Apr 5 03:40:09
Nice trailer Sweetie. 2/10.
- From: alrightman (@ adsl-67-66-22-173.dsl.rcsntx.swbell.net)
on: Sun May 11 13:14:07 EDT 2003
okay
- From: Cristal G (@ cache-rb06.proxy.aol.com)
on: Thu Nov 13 00:59:14
Actially I thought that the guy had to know the girl better so that they would it went out but sometimes peolpe think that their in love just because that person is real cute without even knowing the person and thats why allot of people get hurt in the end.
- From: amresh vashisht (@ 202.131.128.154)
on: Sat Dec 20 02:11:19 EST 2003
Love, is a book, with a million different pages,
Worn, and written, in a language of the ages,
Torn, and scorned, carrying so many scars,
And leaving, so many hearts, behind unbendable bars,
Hate, is the state, of so many hearts,
For lovers, that thought, that they could never be torn apart,
Secrets and lies, her unforgettable eyes, the ways it's all one big surprise,
But it's to late, your in the state of hate, your fate will not wait,
And then, one day, you'll be sitting down,
And love, will make, it's way around,
It will come up to you, and sit right down, and sneak into your arms,
Smiling, and loving you, she'll push away, all alarm,
Until the day, that hate makes it's way, back into your arms to stay,
You'll hold her tight, and pretend it's alright, but your lover will simply fade. . . away,
~Kemet
- From: Amresh Vashisht (@ 202.131.128.154)
on: Sat Dec 20 02:12:48 EST 2003
"Truly loving another means letting go of all expectations. It means full acceptance, even celebration of another's personhood."
- From: tigerboy (@ d40a7d32.rev.stofanet.dk)
on: Sat Dec 20 19:50:23 EST 2003
I like this story. This show that everybody can be betrayed by love, but that's how love is. Isn't true?
- From: Savi (@ 213.42.2.29)
on: Fri Feb 6 06:37:41 EST 2004
It's sad to know that this Shiva hasn't forgotten this cheat.
- From: rodo (@ nat-7.cat.com)
on: Thu Feb 19 17:18:41 EST 2004
hello sweetie
I never gave copyrights to write my story.
- From: bharath (@ 202.9.189.30)
on: Wed Mar 10 09:52:41 EST 2004
my name is bharath . i say there is no real love nowdays yhey are loving onlu in the name of yk=he timepass
- From: bharath (@ 202.9.189.30)
on: Wed Mar 10 09:52:58 EST 2004
my name is bharath . i say there is no real love nowdays yhey are loving onlu in the name of yk=he timepass
- From: bharath (@ 202.9.189.30)
on: Wed Mar 10 09:53:03 EST 2004
my name is bharath . i say there is no real love nowdays yhey are loving onlu in the name of yk=he timepass
- From: sify (@ 203.88.139.236)
on: Sat Apr 3 07:57:38 EST 2004
hi
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