Topic started by Maran S (@ 203.106.63.35) on Fri Aug 2 00:43:14 .
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Read the story here:

http://pesona.mmu.edu.my/~maran/story5.html

Responses:

• From: vazhippokkan (@ cc2-24.217.119.158.charter-stl.com) on: Sun Aug 4 13:07:23
  
  The initial build-up was good. The ambience selected was also good. Towards the end it became melodramatic. The last line is a bummer.
  
  
• From: Maran S (@ 203.106.63.104) on: Sun Aug 4 21:55:40
  
  Thanks for the tip and constructive critisism. Last line removed :).
  
  
• From: shasikumar (@ 61.1.211.226) on: Sat Aug 17 11:32:37
  
  please send a book
  
  
• From: Maran (@ 203.106.63.74) on: Thu Aug 22 04:28:30
  
  Send a book? What do you mean?
  
  

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