Topic started by Ramki (@ ws35.honovi.com) on Wed Mar 28 08:32:19 .
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'pesanum vaa sollitu , ippidi gammunu utkarndhitturndha innaiya artham.....'naangavathu muraiyaaga
ketkiraaL thamizhselvi.

alaigal karaiyil vandhu modhum sabdham ..angangae maaLai iruttil medhuvaaga pesikoLLum manidhargaLin kisukisuppaana kuralgal. Indha osaigaLil avaL ketpadhu kaadhil vizhadhadhu pol sattai paiyilirundhu oru cigaratteai eduthu patra vaikkiraan Sekar.
Marina beachin kaathu villainaaga maari theekuchiyai eriyavidamal thaduikkiradhu.

'murukku murukku soodana murukku..sir murukku sir sooda irukku sir 'murukku virkkum paiyan ivargaL amarndhirukkum idathirkku varugiraan

'murukku saappuriya tamizhu..'

'murukkum venaam onyum venaam naan vootukku poren dhinaakkum late-a pona amma sandhega padudhu.. nee ippidiye pugai vandi madhiri pugai vittuniru naan kilambren'
ezha muyarchithavaLai sekarin varthaigaL silaiyaaga amara vaikkiradhu

'vootle kalyanam mudivu pannirkkaanga taamizhu'engo paarthabadi koorugiraan Sekar

'innaaiya..innaaiya solre..innaiya ippidi gunda thooki podure...nee nammai pathi sonniyaa..'

'solli parthittenen tamizhu..kekka mattengiraanga....periya idam..ponnukku 50 savaran poduvaangaLaam..ponnoda appa factoryle...'

'enna innaaaya panna pore?'tamizh kuralil azhugai etti parkkiradhu

'naan romba solli parthen tamizhu..appa adikka varraaaru..naan innaa pannuven sollu'

'inna pannuviyaa..ennaiya ippidi pesure'etti partha azhugai ippodhu vedikka aarambikkaradhu.
'unne ennaikku marakka matten tamizhunuu sathyam panniyeya....unnai nambi..unnai nambi...naa enniye kodukkalaiya...ippo ippidi..'

avan kaigaLai etti patri koLgiraal

'vittruadhaiyayaaa enne vitturadhe...ammaavukku therinja ennai vetti potturum onnuyai nambi irukken
vittu poiradheya''

avan cigarette nuniyai mannil posukkikonde pesugiraan

'theriyalai tamizhu...naan mudinja aLvu pesi pathutten...avanga amma vazhi sondhakkaaranga....sothu pathellaam vere irukku...inime ennalae onyum panna mudiyadhu..'
avaL piditha karangaLai viduvithapadiye thodargiraan
'idhe paaru nee nadandhelaam ketta kanava ninaichu marandhuru....un nalla manasukku nichayama nalla mappilaiya..'

'eppidiyaa eppidiya mudiyum. en manasodu serthu udambaiyum unkitte koduthittu naan eppidiya innoruthanukku..'
azhugiraaL thamizh.

'ippo enne innathaan panna solre tamizhu'

'engaiyavadhu odi poiyuralaam ..aedhavadhu koville kalyanam pannikalaam..nee sarinna naan vara thayaara irukken' avan mugathai keLvikuriyodu parkkiraaL

'odi pogudha..appa thalaiyai seevidum tamizhu..unakkuthan engappavai pathi….'

'enne thodumpodhu engaiya pochu indha appa bayam..solllu enge pochu...'avaL kuralil lesaaga aavesam thalai thookugiradhu

'innanee eppo parthaalum naan thotten thottennnu pesikinu irukkire..naan thottappa nee thaLLiya pone..thotta udanae vizhndhutte...ennamo naan mathram thappu panna madhiri pesikitte pore..ennai madhiri ethanai peru onnuaa..'
avan sonnadhin muzhu artham viLanga

'deiiiiiiiiiiii ….niruthudaa.....paavi padupaavi ippidi pesadhe vaai azhugi poodum..'

'sarthaan podi periya pathini deivam nee saabam kodutha ..balichudumaa.oru nalla selaikku kooda vakkilladha naayi enaai da pottu pesariyaa..unnoda paduthadhe periya vishyam unnai kalyanam vere kattikanumaa... '

'vidamattenda unnai summa vidamatten...'

'innaadi pannna mudiyum huh inna panna mudiyum unnalae...naan aambaLaidi naan aayiram peroda poven aayiram pera kannalam kaatuven unnalae ennadi panna mudiyum...pottai kazhudhai'

avan pechil surungi poi nindra tamizh melle ezhugiraaL

'enne kette …unne enne panna mudiyumaa'

'enne thalaiyai seevudiviyo ..adi podi'

avanaiye oru nodi parthukondirundhavaL than balamaana kuralil kathugiraal

'aiyoo aiyooo aiyooo indha aaLu en kaiyai pidichuttaam..yaravadhu vaangaLen'


avaL kathuvadhai kettu avan sudhaaripadharkkuL sutRiyindhavargaL ellam andha idathil koodugiraargaL

'innaamma inaa vishaym..'oru periyavar ketkirraar

'aiyaa indha aaL en kitte ennennmo pesiraan..kaiye pidikkiraan' kuralil azhugaiyai varavazhaithu koorugiraaL tamizh

'ille iva….'sekar vai thirakka muyala

' oru ponnu thaniyaa irundha unga velayai kaamichiruveengaLe…porukki payalungaLa'
andha periyavar avanai pidithu thaLLa meedhi kootamum avanai oru kai parkka thodangugiradhu



sogam manadhai aazhthinaaLum thannaal mudindha thandanaiyai avanukku kodutha sandhoshathudan ange iruttil karaigiraaL tamizhselvi

Responses:

• From: jn (@ 158.116.138.5) on: Wed Mar 28 09:32:59
  
  ramki: indha baashai unakku sariya varalai..eppavum polave ezhudhu..periya dhandanai nu edhir paarthen..ivvalavu thaana? konjam disappointed...
  
  
• From: Ramki (@ ws35.honovi.com) on: Wed Mar 28 09:35:36
  
  baby:))avaLaale seiya mudinjadhu ivvaLavuthaan vere enne madhiri dhandanai irundhaa nallarkkum?
  
  
• From: v (@ gateway.sms.siemens.com) on: Wed Mar 28 15:54:13
  
  Ramki: kathai-ku mudivu seri-yaa amaiyalaiyaa or nadaila thappa or kathai seriyaa amaiyalainaanu theriyalai, kathiayoda konjam ottuthal vaalai! May be mudivu konjam vidhyaasamaa irunthiurkalaamnu thonuthu.
  
  
• From: v (@ gateway.sms.siemens.com) on: Wed Mar 28 15:58:27
  
  Ramki, missing the feeling of reading a good story!! may be mudivu konjam vidhyasamaa irunthirunthaa nalla irunthirukumnu thonuthu..
  
  
• From: Ramki (@ ppp3.honovi.net) on: Wed Mar 28 19:25:36
  
  v thanks for the opinions. Mudivu endha madhiri irundha nallarkumnnu ninaikireenga?I mean indha madhiri oru situationle?
  Sekar, as u might have observed is a pakka porukki.
  He just wanted to have fun.
  Tamizh indha nilamaile verene seidhirukka mudiyum?
  
  Dont think that im defending my story but will like to know others views
  
  
• From: v (@ gateway.sms.siemens.com) on: Thu Mar 29 10:28:30
  
  Ramki: ;-) I know you take critics in right spirit and you are interested in them:-)) mudivu eppadi irunthiruntha nalla irukumnu yosika mudiyalai, but generally thamizh intha thandanai-la 1% kooda satisfy aagi iruka maataanu mattum theriyuthu..
  
  oru velai avaloda iyalaamaiya solli, ava thannoda future pathi enna yosichaa'nu konjam continue panni irunthirukalaamo ennavo.
  
  
• From: rags (@ tibco-5.tibco.com) on: Mon Apr 2 15:45:10
  
  ramki :-) tamizh pakkathula irukara padagoda thudupeduthu ongi sekar mandaiya polandhu irukanum. Andha adi athirchila avanukku ninaivu illama poidanum.Appo andha amma appa paatha kalyanam ninnu poi irukum.
  
  
• From: Ramki (@ ws35.honovi.com) on: Mon Apr 2 16:22:45
  
  rags:))neenga solradhu ketka nallarkku but nadaimurai konjam kashtamnnu ninaikkiren what dou say??naan konjam realisticaa irukatumennu ninaichen
  
  v probably i could have continued on the lines you mentioned.
  
  Naan ninaicha impact kadhai create pannalennu theriyudhu:))
  
  
• From: jn (@ spider-wl044.proxy.aol.com) on: Mon Apr 2 16:35:03
  
  ramki: kadhai realistic a irukkanum nu nee ninaikkire..naan idhaiye unmaiyaa ninaichchittu ippadi mudivu irukkanum nu virumbaren..idhu nija vaazhkkaiyile nadakkuma nu theriyalai..aana ippadi thaan nadakkanum..ippadi thappu seyyara aaNgal eppo thaan manam thirundharadhu? avan thirundhi indha pennai kalyaanam seidhukkanum...appuram sila paer ippadi ninaippaanga..andha ponnukku ivanoda vaazha eppadi manasu varumnu...but compromise pannittu poradhu thane vaazhkkai?
  
  
• From: rags (@ tibco-5.tibco.com) on: Mon Apr 2 17:04:26
  
  Pengalna ilakaramavum,anubhavichutu thimira pesravarukellam puthu paadam kathukodukanumna andha ponnu avana konnalum parava illa.
  
  
• From: Billa (@ 129.253.193.144) on: Mon Apr 2 19:34:56
  
  Guys,
  "en manasodu serthu udambaiyum unkitte koduthittu naan eppidiya innoruthanukku..." azuvara peNgaL ellaam, have to face their own consequences, since it was their decision to give manasu or udambu. The punishment should be for both, if at all.
  
  
• From: Ramki (@ ppp14.honovi.net) on: Mon Apr 2 20:24:18
  
  jn avanai kalyanam pannikardhaa...its a shame to womanhood illaiya??rags solra madhiri kolai venaa pannalam but never kalyanam
  
  Billa good point but she is already punished by him illaiya?
  
  
• From: Komalavalli (@ valmiki.kshema.com) on: Mon Apr 30 05:04:29
  
  Billa,
  
  Entha aanum, oru ponnu manasai mattum kudutha pothumnu ninaikarathu illai, Eppo ava udampaiyum kudukkaralo, appo thaan ava thannudaiya kathalai yethukittatha avan ninaikiran, Athanala thaan pengal thangaloda karpai kaathalukku panayam vaikirarkal.
  
  Oru poonu oruthanai ninachitta avannukku karpodu serthu uyiraiyum kodukka thayanga mattal... ponnugaloda intha unarvai sariya purinchikama, avarkalai thangaludaiya kolaithanathirkku payanpaduthikollum aaangalai yarum thatti ketpathu illai, pathila intha sekar ketta mathiri kelvi kettu avarkalai uyirodu kollukirathu intha ulagam,
  
  Endru Thirunthuvargal ippadi pali podupavargal?
  
  Neengal ungal alavil mara muyarchi seiyungal..
  
  Nandriyudan
  Komala
  
  
• From: Ganesh (@ 192.237.114.65) on: Mon Apr 30 11:27:54
  
  Komalavalli,
  Muthalil neengal ondrai purinthukolluga. ellaa angalum oru mathiri illai. Aanaal, intha pondugala thaan nammba mudivathillai. ithu naan kannaal, en sontha anubavaththil kanda unmai. Oruvanai pidikkavillai endraal udane veru oruvanodu selvathu thaan inthe pengal - ithu nyayama?. Ella kathalangalum 'udambai' mattume nesippathu illai. Oru silarukku 'manasum' irukkindrathu.
  
  
  
• From: Marie-France (@ cf1-e3.nan.libertysurf.net) on: Sun May 20 14:10:23
  
  Hello Ramki
  How are-you ?
  I'am Marie, I live in France
  I speak english a little
  In 1998, I meat you in your house with my grand-mother.
  Do-you remenber me ?
  
  
• From: nvcncgh (@ 210.186.101.126) on: Wed May 23 00:30:51
  
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  please . This is new channel for malaysian Indian.
  
  Everything is there.
  
  Have a look plaese
  
  
• From: hare krishna mani (@ wc05.mtnk.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com) on: Sat Dec 15 17:48:39
  
  15 dec 2001 sat ottawa
  Raamki,
  nalla kadhai! mudivu eppadi irukkanam? irandu pErum nalla ennaththodu aandavanidam muthaliL aatma samarpanam pannanam aatmaavin kattalaippadi ellam nallaakave nadakkum. daiveeha snEham ottrumai-yai kodukkum.
  
  nalla kadai
  
  ippadikku
  
  hare krishna mani (ottawa, canada)
  
  
  
• From: Aum - Om (@ 203.200.97.212) on: Tue Dec 18 04:24:22
  
  Dear Mr. Ramki
  The story is a very realistic one with no cinematic ending which i think is the best part of ur work.
  
  I think that all the readers should understand that feelings are not just meant for oneself but it is a matter of your companion. I take this oppurtunity to convey that a girl should remain as a ? mark, she should never be a open book to anybody. she should build a castle (ofhigh walls of confidence and strength to fight against distrust) around her. No matter a girl should confine herself and never allow even her companion to enter her morale even he is the one who would be her future husband.
  
  your story is a very realistic one and a practical one, as Tamizh can never become a Vyjayanthi IPS to avenge her past. One has to be cautious, if u have had failed, then learn from the mistakes inspite of deciding the end of ur life.
  
  "CLEAR STREAMS OF REASON NEED TO BE CONCIOUSLY KEPT FROM MEANDERING INTO THE DREARY SANDS OF DEAD HABIT-------an adaptation from a poem by R.Tagore"
  
  
• From: hare krishna mani (@ ) on: Wed Nov 5 17:39:45
  
  ottawa 5th november 2003
  
  tamishil eshutha www.azhagi.com poy paarungal
  nalla tamil eshuthalaam kashtame illai
  
  hare krishn mani
  
  
• From: rajeshrs_tvm (@ 61.1.226.127) on: Wed Nov 12 12:43:26 EST 2003
  
  good one.
  i liked the story.
  
  
  

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