Topic started by Iyappan (@ 203.200.61.1) on Tue Nov 5 08:05:33 .
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marathilirundhu muniyOdu
maram kondu maravuri thariththa oru
maram varak kandEnadi naanum
maramenavE ninRenadi– en thozi

yaarum aRindhadhillai adhan vayasu
adhan peyarO sivathanusu
adhuvalaikka vandhOrgal paladhinusu
vErArum valaikkathirukkavenni maRuguthadi enullam- uyir thozi

thottu parththu OdinAr palarundu
thookiduvEn ena solli thuvandOr silarundu
silai valaikka vallamal silai ena ninRaarai
kandu uLLam thAnE kaLikkuthadi – en thozi

“vil valaikka valleerO vendhargaal neevir
valai karam kondeero illai vambalakkavena vandheerO”
enapala kodum mozi ezuppiya vEndhan
janagan avar en thandhaiyadi – en thozi

muni sol kettu munivedam pugundhan
avan ezundhan silai eduththan
adhai valaiththaan en manam kavar kaLvan
adhai kanndu manam kalippathEn –kEladi thozi

kAr vannan malar kaivannamadhinaal achilaiYo
dhanusO illai uluththa marathinusOvena
udaisabtham oorellaam kEtkkuthadi – adhanaal
en ullam thullal poduthadi - en thozi

maram valaiththa maram thanakkE
maraththoduu marameduththu maadhargal
ethir ninru suRRugiraar - avanukkE
veRRi manamAlai soottiduvEn – en thozi
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Hey - i tried this poem..

aanaalum neengal thaan solla vEndum

few hints to understand this poem better
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maram = arasu, vil( maraththal seithathinaal), kanagam ena porul koLLavum.
marththodu maram = (aal, aththi - alaththi ).

thavariruppin sollungal thiruththi koLgiren..

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Iyappan

Responses:

• From: Kajan (@ wc05.ym.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com) on: Thu Nov 7 01:09:15
  
  Iyappan, got feelings and shared with thozi ?
  
  Good imagination and very good work. How did it get Sivathanasu ? Any strong reason behind it ?
  
  
  
• From: Iyappan (@ 203.200.61.1) on: Thu Nov 7 02:38:31
  
  Hi Kajan,
  
  Ramayanathula seethai kalyaanam romba prasiththam.
  
  Ramar vil valaichu appuram thaan seethaiyai kalyaanam pannikkiraar. avar valaichca vil per sivathanusu. adhu sivanidamirundhathaagavum adhu pala kai maari janagaridam vandhadhagavum kathai.
  
  here i have just took kamban's view.. annalum nokkinaal avalum nokkinal.... but what after that.. that is what made this poem.
  
  Thanks for your comments..
  Anbudan iyappan
  
  

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