Innum Sollatuma?
Topic started by krish (@ ppp-219-65-149-136.bng.vsnl.net.in) on Tue Sep 16 19:54:43 .
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Kangalai Moodinal...
Kanvaga nee vendum !!
Kangalai Thiranthal.....
Nijamaga nee vendum !!
En eera thalai thuvata,
Mundhanaiyudan un karangal vendum !!
Un azhagai kavidhai vadikum bodhu
nee vetkapada vendum
nee vetkapadum bodhu
en maar meedhu thalai saaika vendum
adikadi naan muthamida
enakku un kannangal vendum
en idhazh vatri pogumbodhu
eerapadham oota un udhadugalum vendum
en vidiyalgal adhigaalai
un muthathil vidiya vendum
en iravugal un thazhugalil
thudanga vendum
innum naan ezhuthatha
en aasaigal aayiram
un kaadhodu sollatuma?
Responses:
- From: shylaja (@ 203-195-196-66.now-india.net.in)
on: Tue Sep 16 20:54:51 EDT 2003
ROMBBBBBBBA anubavithu ezhudharinga.....amaaa, kaadhodu unga kavidhai ketkapokum andha kaadhalidhaan yaaro?:) shylaja
- From: tiruttakkan (@ nhpc.nic.in)
on: Tue Sep 16 23:01:19 EDT 2003
hi krish,
45
tiruttakkan
- From: malligai (@ 0-1pool85-213.nas31.thornton1.co.us.da.qwest.net)
on: Thu Sep 18 13:27:53 EDT 2003
Krish,
wow..alagaana aasaighal!!...best wishes on this one too...
Do u also post as 'Sonia'??
- From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in)
on: Thu Sep 18 14:22:53 EDT 2003
:)
very romantic!
chinna chinna azhaagana asaigaL
vaazhtukkaL, ungaLukkum, kaathodu kEtkapogiravargaLukkum
:)
- From: rasigan (@ 217.161.117.35)
on: Thu Sep 18 14:50:45 EDT 2003
Krish,
Inimaiyaana kavithai. Athilum,
-- Un azhagai kavidhai vadikum bodhu
-- nee vetkapada vendum
-- nee vetkapadum bodhu
-- en maar meedhu thalai saaika vendum
rasanai mikka varikal. Ungal aasaigalai kekka pogum kaathali romba athirshtasaali.
paaraattukkal.
- From: krish (@ 203.200.30.4)
on: Fri Sep 19 11:36:59 EDT 2003
Hai Malligai, shakthi & Rasigan !
Thank you all a lot for such nice comments.. its really encouraging to read your comments..hope i can give u a lot more like these.
Thank you once again for your encouragement
- From: tiruttakkan (@ 210.7.76.174)
on: Fri Sep 19 23:48:52 EDT 2003
enna krish? tiruttakkanumdhaanE vimarsittaan?
tiruttakkan
- From: srikutty (@ 219.65.111.184)
on: Sat Sep 20 00:59:04 EDT 2003
Krish
ungal innum sollatuma kavithai, neengal innum innum sollamaateergala endru yenga veikkum kavidhai...
expecting ur next romantic poem soon!!!!
- From: Amsa (@ alyon-209-1-10-153.w193-251.abo.wanadoo.fr)
on: Sat Sep 20 09:12:00 EDT 2003
Romba azhagana kavidhai, azhagunu solluradha vidda adhukum mellana kavidhai...............
vovoru varigalum romba azhagu srikutty solluramaari neengal innum innum sollamaateergala endru yenga veikkum kavidhai...
"nee vetkapadum bodhu
en maar meedhu thalai saaika vendum "........ennaku romba pudicha varigal
romba arumaiyana kavidhai!!!!!!!!!
- From: krish (@ ppp-219-65-135-78.bng.vsnl.net.in)
on: Sat Sep 20 12:26:11 EDT 2003
Iam really sorry tirutakan,
i dont know how is missed ur score...now a days when i start to write a poem i think about what score u will give. a very special thanks to u too
- From: krish (@ ppp-219-65-135-78.bng.vsnl.net.in)
on: Sat Sep 20 12:27:21 EDT 2003
Hai srikutty & amsa
Thank your for your nice response...hope to give a lot more like this..let me try
- From: Nilaa (@ 202.9.164.80)
on: Wed Sep 24 04:13:01 EDT 2003
Hi! krish
Kaadhaliyei kavidhaiyaai vaditha ungal kavidhai sorry kaaviyam SUPERBBBBBBBB
- From: krish (@ ausisapc101-dmz.aus.amer.dell.com)
on: Wed Sep 24 14:02:00 EDT 2003
hai nila,
romba pugaznthuteenga...oru nalla kaadhali kidaithal yaarum ippadi oru kavidhai ezhuthalam...
Thank you so much for your comments nila
- From: Deepa (@ 165.189.7.2)
on: Wed Sep 24 15:48:40 EDT 2003
Hi Krish,
That was a nice one. But I wonder whether you will be willing to write something realistic. Most of the poets give others an illusion that life is going to be so poetic, but it is mostly the otherway. I really want to see more poems that are not about romance, or some frustration in life. Life is not too good and not too bad. Try something different next time. I am sure everyone will appreciate it.
Thanks
Deepa
- From: krish (@ ausisapc102-dmz.aus.amer.dell.com)
on: Thu Sep 25 10:24:30 EDT 2003
Hi Deepa !
I welcome ur comments..but iam not sure what kind of stuff ur looking for...but please do read my other poetries like pasi, manthiram, vazhkai & tell me if thats what ur looking for
- From: Deepa Swamy (@ 165.189.7.2)
on: Sat Sep 27 19:20:08 EDT 2003
Hi Krish,
You have written about a perfect married life. I know that is the dream of everyone. Why dont you write about 'couple who dont get along because of their ego' , or 'couple who have entirely different tastes, but got married because of parents', or 'couple who fight over money' etc instead of romance. It will be different. There are lots of romantic poems, and it is so difficult to associate them with reality. This is my comment only for this topic, romance. I will read your other poems and reply to you. Thanks for considering my comments with a positive mind.
Deepa
- From: ambigai (@ 210.186.88.141)
on: Wed Oct 1 08:12:19 EDT 2003
ithu kavithaiya,kaaviyemaa,really superb. keep it up.
- From: krish (@ ausisapc103-dmz.aus.amer.dell.com)
on: Wed Oct 1 14:28:10 EDT 2003
Hai ambigai !
Thank you for that excellent comment...its really encouraging...thank you once again
- From: senthil (@ )
on: Wed Nov 5 05:52:25
eppadi solradhunnu puriyalai... but manasukku romba idhamaa feel pannumbadiyaaga kavidhai irukkudhu.. simple, yet sollamudiyaatha andha yeakkam pole irukkudhu. almost everyone who is in love WILL feel these within themselves..
keep up the work. pl do keep me informed of ur next love poem
regards,
senthil
- From: krish (@ 203.200.30.4)
on: Wed Nov 5 11:56:16 EST 2003
Senthil,
Thank your for that lovely comment...its really encouraging...kavidhaigal oru manidhanin pradhibalipu thaan...avan unarvugalin pradhibalipu...so it will naturally touch your heart if ur also in the same wave length...its not my effort...iam just an instrument
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