Topic started by AGALYAN (@ 61.11.84.57) on Thu Nov 20 02:24:29 EST 2003.
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Naatkall niramba aayutru--en
nenjirikiniya pirantha mannirkku
naan sendru!

"naalaikku vaayen poeitu varuvoem"!-endral amma
nenju neraya santhosa megangal
nizhalaada pooripodu "poivaralaame"-endraen naan!

milegal sila thaandi thondai naatu
maerkku ulla en kramathirkku silaagippodu
sendraen!

kramam innum maaravillai-maaravae illai!
kaintha kalathu maedum, varunanin
karunai indri vaadum payirgalum,athanodae
kallamindri vaazhum pala uyirgalum endru
konjamum vithyasamindri appadiyae irunthathu!

"etta ulla nadaar kada, pakkathapla irukkra drawing master veedu, inthapla ulla raj moeliyaar veedu"....

ninaivugal siraggu virikku naan "VAAZHNTHAA"
antha ohovoru idamum ennakaana-"NINAIVU CHINNANGAL"
enbathai mattum ul manasu pesiyathu...

"moettu veetu paati sethu p..oeeiyu..." endru
managkamazhum thann thamizhilil izuthu pesinaan
ennai thooki valartha, soga enum chinnapayan...!

Manithargalum athaey paasangilla parivodu
nagarathu naagareega komalithanagal illamaal
"thamb...e...e, r..a...a..s..aa, mo.e..laliyae"
endru raagathodu isaithanar ennai!

ellam paarthagivitthathu;
elloriyum paarthagivittathu;

aanal aetho ondru kuraiyuthae endru manasu
alaipayum poethu sadakendru "antha aathu"
nyabagam vantuchuu- virainthaen aatrirkku!

thannerindri vatri poi....-innum aethey
sul endra sootoedu irunthathu.....

kaalaangal pala thaandi,
kaatchigal pala paarthu
konjam salanamindri appadiyae irunthathu!

ethaniyoe paatha suvadugal,
aeraalamaana payanangal,
ekkachakka kanner kathaigal,
aedakooda kaathal kisukisugal...endru

antha aathukkul ethanaiyoe varalaarugal!
sannamaai ragasiyangal.....

en muppaatan, paatan,appan,...endru
engal vamsathu manithargalaiparthu ullathu
avargalodu vaazhnthum ullathu...

athannalaeyae angu sellum pothu nenju ganakirathu
en thaatha ukkaantha idam ithuvaa athuvaa;
ingayae angayae endru thaedi thaedi ennail tholaippathil thaan enna sugam...kannerae varum
sila samayam!
oru vagaiyil intha
aathum engalin niranthara kundumba uruppinarae

nalai en varalaatraiyum intha aathu manal
en peranukku sollum.....intha kramathukku irukkum
vaasam azhinthaalum, manithargal panam thaedi
engu kudi peyarnthaalum, intha mann mattum pesum

engalin aasaigalai, kovangalai,
veruppagalai,viruppugalai,
kanavugalai, nijangalai.....endru

ellam manithanin varalaatraiyum ithun mattumae
pesum, samanyaargalin ezhuthaalanaga!

Responses:

• From: Surya (@ 61.11.79.137) on: Fri Nov 21 02:52:27 EST 2003
  
  Nanba-- neeyum naanum arugarugae irunthaalum
  ithanai naalaga nee sollamalae oru kariyam
  seithu ullai! athu- intha maiyathil
  un kavidhaigali veliyidugiraai enbathai
  thaan kurikkum enbathai nee nangu arivai!
  oray aluvalagathil irunthu kondu
  ithai ithanai naalaaga sollaamal
  indru solgiraye naayamaa?, irunthaalum
  un kavidhaigal nandraaga ullathu
  ini naanum ingu adikkadi varuvaen!
  
  Keep up ur good work!!
  
  apparum aen nee inimael agalyan endrae
  azhaikkapadakoodathu????nalla peyar,
  namma pasangaloda itha discuss panna p
  poeren, varta! all the best!
  
  
• From: Shakthi priya (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Fri Nov 21 14:19:20 EST 2003
  
  romba negizhchiya irukku
  
  great!
  
  "en iniya tamizh makkalE ....gramthu mann"
  
  ena bharathiraja intha kavithaikku kural koduththa romba poruththama irukkum.
  
  Wow is the word. good
  
  
• From: malligai (@ 65-102-231-164.dnvr.qwest.net) on: Fri Nov 21 14:55:24 EST 2003
  
  Agalyan,
  
  this makes me sooo nostalgic...though i have never 'lived' in a village, enoda dream athuthaan...that one day when i am old, and get relieved from all worldly duties, that i will live in my father's beautiful village, in a small thatched house..(ofcourse with a/c, 32'' tv, hi-fi etc - haha)
  mmmm..let me see!!
  
  ungaloda intha work pathi: though it is beautiful, this is more prose style than a poem...maybe u must make the sentences a little short, and give it a little more poetic touch...i am no expert myself, but i have a feeling that something is missing as a kavithai...
  
  otherwise, rompa nala iruku..post more and more!!
  
  
  
• From: AGALYAN (@ 61.11.77.146) on: Mon Nov 24 00:25:16 EST 2003
  
  Nandri SHAKTHI PRIYA & MALLIGAI,
  
  Meendum Meendum azhagiya vimarsanangal
  ezhuthi ennai ookappaduthum ungal IRUVARAIyum kathiraiyum endrum maravaen!
  
  apparum SHAKTHI PRIYA, HOW TO USE
  TAMIL FONTS ENBATHAI THELIVAAGA
  SOLLA VAENDUGIRAEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  
  

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