Topic started by Iyappan (@ lan-202-144-73-10.maa.sify.net) on Wed Jul 17 12:18:59 .
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sutrangal pala iruka
sondhangal soozndhirukka
panam thinnum kazugugalai
thinam thorum sutri varum

en thalai saythu aza
oru tholum thunaiyillai
en kanneer thudaithu vida
oru kaiyum varavillai

thalavillai sumaiendral
thangi kolla yarum illai
theerthu vai thunbamendren -ange
kurai theerkkum kadavulum illai

anaithum petru irundhum
anadhai enbadhu idhanal thano ??


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Iyappan
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Responses:

• From: Shakthi (@ bangdp-34-106.mantraonline.com) on: Wed Jul 17 14:02:28
  
  "anaithum petru irundhum
  anadhai enbadhu idhanal thano ?? "<<<<
  
  
  
  My version of finishing the same poem....
  
  "anaithum petru irundum,
  anaadai endru aanadenna?
  agaraadhiyil aanadaikku
  artham daan viLanga villai!"
  
  I hope u take it in right sense.
  My sentences may not impress u, but still I wanted to mention, the ending could have been lil better.
  
  on the whole, poem...is touchy!
  how true it is in this world, that most of us are orphans!
  
  thx.
  
  
• From: Iyappan (@ 203.200.61.1) on: Fri Jul 19 11:36:50
  
  thnx shakthi
  
  
  neengal ezuthiya mudivum nadragave irukkiradhu..
  shall i leave it with that.. or do you want me to post my own on that??
  
  and thnx for your comments on this poem
  
  Iyappan
  
  
• From: Ram (@ 63.161.25.156) on: Sat Jul 20 04:28:56
  
  sila kaNgaLil neer thudaikka,
  kaNa neram ninaiththup paaru.
  un kaNNil dhoosu vizha,
  oor muzhuthum kaN kalangum.
  
  oru thalaikku idam kodukka
  un thgOlukku kattaLai idu.
  un thalaikku baaram varaamal
  iRai unakku vazhi vagukkum
  
  piRappaLiththa sonthamathai
  suRramenakkoNdathu kuRRam.
  kadavul padaiththa ulagathile
  anaivarumE sOthararthaan.
  
  sOtharane...
  inRu naan sonna vaarthaigaL
  naali enakkum thevaipadum
  anru vanthu marakkaamal
  un thOlgaLil idam kodu..
  
  
• From: FlowerGuy (@ 202.95.127.5) on: Sat Jul 20 08:05:16
  
  superb iyappan.
  urukkamaana kavithai.
  negizha vaikkum kavithai.
  jeevanulla kavithai.
  
  Ram...ungal kavithiayum arumai.(naduvil sila naatkal aalai kaanom? enge poiteenga?)
  
  adithu pidithu ticket vaangi...cinema paarthu kazhikkum nerangal.....
  'internet'-il nuzhaindhu...iravu pagalaaga selavidum mani-thuligal..
  one-day cricket endraal....oru naal muzukka veenaagum pozuthugal..
  library,kovil,beach,club,arattai endru ..pala vidhamaaga kazhiyum nimishangal...
  
  vaaram oru murai, atleast maatham oru murai
  arugil irukkum Anaathai Ashram sendru oru kuzhandhaiyudan 30 nimisham pesungal.
  adhan mugathil pongum sandhoshathai paarthuvittaal...kaadhal,kavithai,kadavul anaithum puriyum...
  adutha murai neengal eppothu varuveergal endru avargal aavaludan kaathiruppaargal.
  
  anaadhaiyaai vaazhnthathu....adadaa andru..
  ippothu naam vaazhvome....nanbargal endru..
  
  kannodu kannaana.. en kanna ..unnai evar adithaar kanna?
  annai unnai adithaaalo saami?
  pinju nenju valikkaatho saami?
  
  un annaiyum naanthaane...
  un appanum naanthaane...(aiyo ..nee.. aambalai :-)
  
  
• From: Ram (@ 63.161.25.156) on: Sat Jul 20 09:38:38
  
  Flower Guy,
  Visaritharakku romba nanri...ada namma madichu oruthar post paNNi irukkaare nu romba santhoshama irukku...ur thoughts are excellent....aniyaayam sir intha oorula...colege pasangala padikka solraanga:-(((...athanaalathan adikkadi vara mudiyalai...will try to be in touch
  
  
• From: iyappan (@ 203.200.61.1) on: Sat Jul 20 09:51:55
  
  Flowerguy..
  
  Thnx for your comments..
  and ofcource i have the same thought and in our office we are making the arrangement for that..
  to visit CRY.. and we are donating some thing for their educatiuon and health..
  
  Hey ram
  Nallathoru kavidhai.. padhilaga thandhadhirkku..
  (enge odipoiduveengappa .. parandhaalum vidamattom )..
  LoL.. inga college pasangalukku attendance edukka teacher cinema theatre poratha kelvi chennaila ..
  
  and thnx a lot
  Iyappan
  
  
• From: "kavitai" (@ cache5-1.ruh.isu.net.sa) on: Sat Jul 20 13:02:49
  
  Dear Iyappan
  
  Ungal kavitai
  
  "EnO ennum manatai kolherathE"
  
  Marvelous
  
  Enrum anpudan
  
  "kavitai"
  
  
• From: "kavitai" (@ cache5-1.ruh.isu.net.sa) on: Sat Jul 20 13:06:22
  
  Dear Iyappan
  
  Ungal kavitai
  
  "EnO ennum manatai kolherathE"
  
  Marvelous
  
  Enrum anpudan
  
  "kavitai"
  
  
• From: Iyappan (@ 203.200.61.1) on: Mon Jul 22 02:44:34
  
  
  kavithai
  
  Ungaludaya vimarsanathirkku siram panindha nanRi
  
  Iyappan
  
  

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