Love feelings II
Topic started by Push (@ bras1-vr0-ip1-71.access.batelco.com.bh) on Tue Jul 29 03:58:07 .
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over and over i look in your eyes
you're all i desire
you have captured me
i want to hold you
i want to be close you
i never want to let go
i never ...
to forget you completely i cannot
to say i never love you i will not
to give you any chance i dare not
cause you've broke my heart that you should not...
-Push
Responses:
- From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in)
on: Tue Jul 29 06:29:18 EDT 2003
ur eagerness to write poems is amazing
keep it up!
how ever, plz be ware of grammatical errors atleast while presenting poetries
"i want to be close you "<<<
what happened to prepositions???/
"cause you've broke my heart that you should not... "<<<<
be sure of present continous usages
however,.....
somehow i liked the following lines..inspite of mistakes
"to give you any chance i dare not
cause you've broke my heart that you should not... "<<<
good one...kinda emotional!
"i want to be close you
i never want to let go
i never ... "<<<
what happened? u never what????
guess words chocked and stopped cause of emotion??
nevertheless i liked this better than the
"love feelings I"
- From: Push (@ bras1-vr0-ip1-71.access.batelco.com.bh)
on: Wed Jul 30 01:52:13 EDT 2003
Thanks shakthi
cila kavidhai tamil to english panumpothu athan artham marakoodathu enru appadi paniNnean
- From: banu (@ 210.48.200.6)
on: Thu Aug 28 00:24:25 EDT 2003
amazing because nanum attai polethan. nan oruwenai luv panenai annal awan ennai luv pannavillai................ but i still luv him. his name is............................................................................................................
- From: Push (@ 61.1.205.144)
on: Thu Aug 28 03:56:57 EDT 2003
................ but i still luv him. his name is............................................................................................................
yaru athu appadiyae vitu viteerkal
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