Topic started by "kavitai" (@ cache5-1.ruh.isu.net.sa) on Sun Aug 4 13:55:03 .
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pudithAi oru kadavul vEndum
pUmiel avan pirakka vEndum
saamiyAr pool ellAmal
oru saha manitanAi avn vAla vEndum

pasikkAha alum manitarhalin
pattanihal avan pArkka vEndum
rusikkAha alium manitharhalium
avan nOkka vEndum

ulaipAli viyarvaiyai
unara vEndum
muthalAli kodumaihal
avanai vadhikka vEndum

varumai in vakkirangal
avan kAna vEndum
vathangiyE vEdhanai
kollal vEndum

kAyam patta kanni-erai
aaha vEndum
kAlamellAm vAlvinri
thavikka vEndum

ena veriyar ki halil
avan sikka vEndum
edamillAmal tEEkAyangalil
avn vEha vEndum

yArumilla anAtaiyAi
avan Aha vEndum
nAdiyatru nadu vEdiel
nitka vEndum

puyal adithu avn vEdu
norunga vEndum
pUhambam onril avn tehaitthu
kathara vEndum

nOOi kondu avn tEham
aluha vEndum
maruntinri avn ulahil
vAda vEndum

ali moodum katpanaihalil
tilaikka vEndum
avi onrum kidaikkAmal
avan Enga vEndum

kAdhalitthu avn pAril
thOtka vEndum
thOtka vaittha manithanaium
avan pArka vEndum

uttham onril avn sikki
tinara vEndum
nondhu madinthu
udamaihalai avan elakka vEndum

thunbangalil thuyarangalil avan
thuvala vEndum
adhil sEtthu madinthu "kadavulAi"
avan mEndum pirakka vEndum

"kavitai"

Responses:

• From: Nilaaa (@ spider-loh-te012.proxy.aol.com) on: Sun Aug 4 14:42:01
  
  Manithaney!
  
  Thunbam enru onru iravidil
  nanbaa neeyennai ninaippaya!
  
  Thunbam onru iravidil arivayo
  Inbam enru ULLthen pathaye!
  
  Naan ULLane Ovoruvan ULLum
  OonuL ULLey Ullathu athama!-athu naney!
  ..........
  
  Nalla katpanai!......munnukku pin sila mranpadukaL.....sha manithani......in first para........in last para .....Irakka vendum...ena....Sinthippeera nanba!
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ bangdp-34-119.mantraonline.com) on: Mon Aug 5 02:41:23
  
  Pudidaai dinam doram neengal koorum kadavulgal pirakindraargal.
  
  Kavithai,
  
  Nalla kavidai...
  
  "Kadavul manidanaanga pirankka vendum "
  kannadaasan andre koorinaar!
  
  :)
  
  
• From: "kavitai" (@ cache5-1.ruh.isu.net.sa) on: Mon Aug 5 11:47:27
  
  yes Nilaaa
  
  ungalin pArvai parappuhalil
  terindha andha waira vAkkiyangal
  
  << nanbaa neeyennai ninaippaya!
  
  Thunbam onru iravidil arivayo
  Inbam enru ULLthen pathaye!
  
  Naan ULLane Ovoruvan ULLum
  OonuL ULLey Ullathu athama!-athu naney!<<<<
  
  marukka mudiyAdha unmaihal
  koodittu kAttiyamaiku nanrihal
  
  >>munnukku pin sila mranpadukaL.....sha manithani......in first para........in last para .....Irakka vendum...ena....Sinthippeera nanba!<< avasiyam sindikka vaikkiradhu Nilaaa
  
  mAnulahil mAnidar padum vEdhanaihalai
  oru vitthiyAsamAha kadavulukku sollappArttEn
  adhan velaivE ikkavitai
  
  ungal karutthukkalukku manamArntha
  NANRIHAL Nilaaa
  
  NANRI Shakthi
  
  "kavitai"
  
  
  
• From: Iyappan (@ lan-202-144-73-10.maa.sify.net) on: Mon Aug 5 12:33:00
  
  Kavithai..
  ore variyila surukkama
  " kadavul kujarathle pirakkanum" appadinnu solli irukkalaame..
  
  any way kavithai nanRu.
  
  and there is one small suggesion.. the way you write tamil in English.. I couldnt read it .. you have good talent and wrote so many. But you know when ever i read it.. i guessd so may words. ( this is my personal opinion.. Please ) and hesitate to post commentsbecause my guess may be correct or not
  
  for example
  >>ali moodum katpanaihalil <<
  alli enbathu sariya ?? illai ali enbathu sariya..
  illai aalai enbathu sariya puriyavillai. ( i guessed alli is it correct) :(
  
  >>rusikkAha alium manitharhalium <<
  alaiyum or aziyum edhuvenRu kolla..
  
  NOM..
  
  all over the theme is good and also the poem.
  
  Good "Kavithai" in "kavithai"
  :)
  Iyappan
  
  
  
• From: Iyappan (@ lan-202-144-73-10.maa.sify.net) on: Mon Aug 5 12:33:40
  
  typo...
  kujarath illai Gujarath
  
  Sorry
  Iyappan
  
  
• From: "kavitai" (@ cache5-1.ruh.isu.net.sa) on: Tue Aug 6 14:13:01
  
  Dear Iyappan
  
  muthalil ungal vimarsanattukku
  enadhu manamArntha nanrihal
  :)))
  
  >>>" kadavul Gujarathile pirakkanum">>
  sariyAhatthaan erukkiradhu - appadi kooda
  surukkama solli irukkalaam
  
  >>and there is one small suggesion.. the way you write tamil in English.. I couldnt read it .. <<<<
  
  Sorry Iyappan sir, PPl
  naan Edhoo oru utchahattil tamiz kavitaigal
  eludi varinum avatril neengal kAnpathu poola
  elutthu pilaihalum sila karutthu mayakkangalum
  eruppadai naanum kooda arihinrEn...
  
  mannikavum
  
  enadhu sutrAdal moli allatdu pEhchu moli
  tamiz aaha eruppinum naan muraiyAha katrathu
  mAtru moli onril thaan
  adhan kAranamAha pEhchu valakkil tamiz moli
  ennakku arimuhamAyinum adhan yAAppu ezakkana
  vazi muraihalai naan terindhu vaittirukkavillai
  
  thamiz varttaihali arindhu vaitthiruppinum athan utcharippukkal
  atilum veetru moli onril naan thamizi eludhum poodhu satru siramatthai vaasipavrukku kodukkinradhu (edhu patri Mrs. Shakthi avrhalum oru murai koori erundhar)
  
  ppl, Iyappan sir
  edhatkAha
  mudhalil ennaium enadhu kavitaihalium mannikkumAru vEnduvathudan thodarnthum
  siramamAha eruppinum ungal vimarsanaggalai
  nAn eludhum tamiz kavitaihalukku
  endha manra miyattin moolam tharuvErhal
  enra nambikkaiudanum
  
  thamiz moli mEdhu kondha tEEradha
  Asien kaaranamaaha muraiyAha tamiz moliyai
  katru varuhirEn enum nat-saidhi udanum
  meendum mannippu vEndi...
  
  :)):)))
  
  enrum anpudan
  
  "kavitai"
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
• From: ec (@ bryant.rz-berlin.mpg.de) on: Wed Aug 7 08:11:03
  
  Kavitai, ellaa tharappu makkaLin ottu motha kObathaiyum kaatti vitteergaLe. nalla kavithai. Ithai kadavuLum padithu ingu vimarsanam ezhuthinaal nandraaga irukkum :-)
  
  "ali moodum katpanaihalil
  tilaikka vEndum
  avi onrum kidaikkAmal
  avan Enga vEndum "
  
  naan migavum rasitha varigaL!
  
  KaNNadhasan kooda, kadavuL manidhanaagap piRakka vENdum...endru saabam koduthirukkiRAr! :-)
  
  
• From: "kavidhai" (@ cache5-1.ruh.isu.net.sa) on: Sat Aug 10 12:59:30
  
  Dear ec
  
  Nanri ungalin amaidiyaana alahaana vimarsanatthukku
  >>>>Idhai kadavuLum padithu ingu vimarsanam ezhuthinaal nandraaga irukkum <<<<<
  nanrAahattAan erukkum enge avanukku nEram erukkappOhiradhu Inter-net paarkka
  
  Thx ec
  
  enrum anpudan
  
  "kavidhai"
  
  
  
• From: iyappan (@ lan-202-144-73-10.maa.sify.net) on: Mon Aug 12 04:55:22
  
  EC
  >> Ithai kadavuLum padithu ingu vimarsanam ezhuthinaal nandraaga irukkum <<
  
  kadavulin vimarsanam " naan romba busyeeeee "
  
  LoL
  
  Kavithai
  Goodluck. Ungal muyarchi veRRi adaiya vaazthukkal ( 99% aayidichi .. enna innum 1% thaane :) ). ethenum uthavi thevai enil sollungal. we will try our level best to help on this regards. u can also use softwares like murasu editor and e-kalappai.. for practising.. good one. and you can use e-kalappai in any software. ( word, excell, any messenger like yahoo, msn, rediff any thing)
  
  Ungal thamizarvarthiRkku engal siram thaazndha vanakkangal.
  
  NanRi
  Iyappan
  
  
• From: "kavithai" (@ cache5-1.ruh.isu.net.sa) on: Mon Aug 12 11:55:41
  
  nanri Iyappan sir
  
  ungalin udhavum karangal neendamaikku
  
  aahttum ungalAl oru udhavi
  ariyattarungal "murasu editor","e-kalappai" aahiya enaiyatthalangalin mugavarihalai
  
  purindunarviRkku meel nanrihal
  
  "kavithai"
  
  
  
• From: Iyappan (@ lan-202-144-73-10.maa.sify.net) on: Mon Aug 12 12:01:20
  
  Few tamil software link
  http://www.tavultesoft.com/keyman/downloads/
  http://www.murasu.com
  http://www.tamil.net/newtamil/ekalappai_1.html
  http://www7.brinkster.com/tamil/suvadi2.htm
  
  Iyappan
  
  

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