naan irantha pinnum ...
Topic started by Renga (@ 61.11.72.222) on Tue Feb 24 05:03:04 EST 2004.
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" naan irantha pinnum
en kangal paarvaiku engum
aval dharisanathirku ..
en karangal uyir pera thudikum
avalai anaipatharku ...
en ithalgal pesa thudikum
aval peyar solvatharku ..
en udal erintha pinnum kaatraaven
aval swaasamavatharku ...."
friends do comment abt this ..
Responses:
- From: malligai (@ rdsl120.dnvr.uswest.net)
on: Tue Feb 24 12:58:26 EST 2004
very nice Renga...she is lucky..
- From: Renga (@ 61.11.72.222)
on: Wed Feb 25 04:23:58 EST 2004
thankz malligai ,
- From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in)
on: Wed Feb 25 05:23:27 EST 2004
nice one. keep writing more.
- From: Renga (@ 61.11.72.222)
on: Wed Feb 25 05:50:10 EST 2004
thankz shakthi
- From: Malavika Nair (@ 61.2.225.228)
on: Wed Feb 25 07:18:36 EST 2004
aiyoooooooooo.
wonderful renga.
hats off 2 u
- From: Renga (@ ppp-219.65.110.97.chn.vsnl.net.in)
on: Wed Feb 25 09:14:43 EST 2004
thank u malavika ,
thankz a lot
- From: Thanga (@ 203.199.171.2)
on: Wed Feb 25 09:58:15 EST 2004
Kadhal virus thakivittathooooooooooo.....
If u have to propose her, do that soon....
- From: Thanga (@ 203.199.171.2)
on: Wed Feb 25 09:58:32 EST 2004
Kadhal virus thakivittathooooooooooo.....
If u have to propose her, do that soon....
anbudan,
Thanga
- From: Renga (@ 61.11.72.222)
on: Wed Mar 3 06:59:45 EST 2004
thanga .., dont assume things .,
he he
Renga
- From: shumugapriyan (@ 202.131.130.3)
on: Sat Mar 6 06:41:39 EST 2004
nee irantha pinn aval aathistram iruthal ithai(kavithai) padippal..
aathuvae onakku , mattrum kavithaiyen vetri yaam
- From: Renga (@ ppp-219.65.110.186.chn.vsnl.net.in)
on: Sun Mar 7 02:47:52 EST 2004
hi shanmuga priyan
naan uyirodu irukum pothe
aval intha kavithaiyai padithaal
athu en adhirshtam ..
:-)
Renga
- From: misai karan (@ )
on: Sun May 23 01:38:43
machi pothu takku
- From: Renga (@ 61.11.72.222)
on: Mon May 24 01:43:57 EDT 2004
thankz a lot sankaran,
Renga
- From: Tirupattooraan (@ 203.129.236.225)
on: Mon May 24 07:58:47 EDT 2004
Nallaa irukku Renga..
Yaaraiyaavathu luv panreengalaa?? illaatti ivvalavu unarchchi mayamaa oru kavithai uruvaagi irukkaadhu?? am I right??
Anyway.. good one.. keep it up.. write more..
-Tirupattooraan
- From: Renga (@ 61.2.224.151)
on: Tue May 25 02:12:45 EDT 2004
dear tirupattooran ,
ur guess is only half right. hope u understood. anyways thankz 4 ur feedback
Renga
- From: Yatchani (@ 202.138.120.37)
on: Tue May 25 04:12:05 EDT 2004
" naan irantha pinnum
en kangal paarvaiku engum
aval dharisanathirku ..
(''en kangal avalai tharisikka engum'' enru thaan irukka vendum. tharisiththal enraale paarppathu enruthaan porul)
en karangal uyir pera thudikum
avalai anaipatharku ...
(unnai anaithe uyir perum en karangal ' enru irunthaal nalam )
en ithalgal pesa thudikum
aval peyar solvatharku ..
('aval peyar solla thudikkum en ithal' enruthaan irukka vendum. ithal pesa thudikkuthaa solla thudikkuthaa? thelivaaga ezhuthungal. pesuvathu veru sovathu veru. )
en udal erintha pinnum kaatraaven
aval swaasamavatharku ...."
( udal erinthu kaatraagi, aval suvaasamaagum' enru iruthaal nalam, 'en udal erintha pinnum' enru ezhuthi ulleergal, appadiyaanaal eriyaamalum kaatraaga mudiyumaa? erintha pinnum kaatraagaathu aanaal 'saambal'' kaatril kalanthu viduvathaaga kollalaam''
mozhiyai nanraaga payan paduthungal, muthaalil niraiya padiyungal.
anbudan,
YATCHANI.
- From: Yatchani (@ 202.138.120.37)
on: Tue May 25 04:12:44 EDT 2004
Ungal kavithai ippadi irukkalam
''en kangal avalai tharisikka engum''
'aval peyar solla thudikkum en ithal'
unnai anaithe uyir perum en karangal
udal erinthu kaatraagi, aval suvaasamaagum'
- From: Yatchani (@ 202.138.120.37)
on: Tue May 25 04:34:42 EDT 2004
IGNORE THE PERIVIOUS ONE
Ungal kavithai ippadi irukkalam
''en kangal unnai tharisikka engum''
'un peyar solla thudikkum en ithal'
unnai anaithe uyir perum en karangal
udal erinthu kaatraagi, un suvaasamaagum'
- From: Renga (@ 61.2.224.103)
on: Tue May 25 04:46:00 EDT 2004
hello yatchani..,
thankz 4 ur feedback. , i cant accept ur suggestions in few places .because the context and feelings frm which i have written is different and how u have percieved is different. anyways thank u . ,
and at the end , u have written 1 kavithai , do u want a feedback 4 that . . , its not at all in the form of kavithai . one main thing was missing in tht - no expression s in that. let us c further comments. till then .. take care ,
Renga
- From: Yatchani (@ 202.138.120.37)
on: Tue May 25 04:58:05 EDT 2004
Anbu Renga,
I tried to coreect your kavithai, your kavithai has language mistake, Please read it again, puthuk kavithai has no form, if so just inform me.
Feel free to send the feed back.
Ennappa seyya tamila yaaraavathu thappaa payan paduththina kobam varuthu.
It is not necessary to accept my suugestion but you read your kavithai again. Then you will came to Know.
kobam vendaam,
Niraiya Anbudan,
Yatchani.
- From: jesee (@ 203.200.30.4)
on: Tue May 25 06:33:32 EDT 2004
Hi ,
The corrections are too good. But a poem is some thing like one's own . Even though others can read and like it, they cannot understand the damn feeling the poet would have had at those moments .
I will say Ranga has Expressed ( Just Expressed ) and Yatchani has Polished .
Go ahead with ur own ways as u r the one who knows the Destinations .
- From: Sharan.M (@ 61.247.240.25)
on: Tue May 25 07:53:08 EDT 2004
Renga u have done a great job.. ur poem is really very good... but u Yatchani.. as Renga said the poem differs in expression in the way Renga said and as well as u saidd.. okiee... nothing wrong in ur correction but as per Renga's expression his wording is right... First feel and then read it.. u ll get the right pointt....
- From: sugus (@ 219.93.174.100)
on: Tue May 25 08:47:52 EDT 2004
hi renga.. udal illai yendru aagivitte pinnum... uyir nirainthu kaanepadum unggal kavithai mige-mige arputham... keep it up.. innum niraiye yeluthungge...
- From: Renga (@ 61.1.202.103)
on: Tue May 25 15:12:01 EDT 2004
thankz a lot yatchani, sugus, sharan and jesse.
Sharan as u said ,, i also felt the same way . ,
sugus and jesse .. thankz once again 4 ur comments., i'll keep posting new ones . .
take care , bye
- From: jeya (@ 219.92.206.40)
on: Thu Jun 3 04:32:24 EDT 2004
very nice.
- From: Renga (@ 61.2.224.200)
on: Thu Jun 3 17:03:03 EDT 2004
thankz jeya
- From: mira (@ 210.187.111.86)
on: Thu Jun 10 09:23:07 EDT 2004
hi !
Rengga
Unggal kavithai Padithen miga miga arumai
un kavithai veeda athan varigal super.
10 Q
- From: mira (@ 210.187.111.86)
on: Thu Jun 10 09:23:13 EDT 2004
hi !
Rengga
Unggal kavithai Padithen miga miga arumai
un kavithai veeda athan varigal super.
10 Q
- From: Vallavan Nallavan (@ 203.129.236.225)
on: Fri Jun 11 05:24:38 EDT 2004
nanbargale
Yen innum yethukkum uthavatha Kadhal , katharikkai (Sorry Katharikkai sambarukku use pannalam) yendru pesukirigal.
Ippadi Yeluthi Irukkalam neengal :
"Irantha pinnum
naan parka vendum unnai
athanal yen kangalai thanam
seigiren."
Yeluthuvatthu mattum illamal,
pls, ellorum Kan Thanam seiya
mayarchi seivom
- From: Renga (@ 61.11.72.222)
on: Fri Jun 11 10:16:29 EDT 2004
thank u mira,
Renga
- From: Renga (@ 61.11.72.222)
on: Sat Jun 12 07:03:01 EDT 2004
nee nallavaru vallavaru,
neenga solrathu correct thaan,
Renga
- From: Th|ruda (@ 219.95.10.95)
on: Mon Jun 14 20:25:32 EDT 2004
Renga,
ur poem simply superb ...
nice effort ...
keep on coming Renga ...
Unggeh vazhi thani vazhi ... n i like ur vazhi
the way ur poem is
SUPERB ... ;D
- From: Renga (@ 61.11.72.222)
on: Tue Jun 15 03:35:49 EDT 2004
hi thiruda ,
thankz 4 the comments
Renga
- From: Renga (@ stat72-222.dsl-chen.eth.net)
on: Wed Sep 15 05:28:58
The poem which i like the most . ,
Renga
- From: godfather (@ ip68-104-58-219.lv.lv.cox.net)
on: Thu Sep 16 00:42:04 EDT 2004
aaawesome
- From: Kaadhal Kirukkan (@ ip68-104-58-219.lv.lv.cox.net)
on: Tue Sep 21 00:50:54 EDT 2004
Rengaa,
Nee potthi vaitha Rojaa malaril udhirntha oru edhazai rasikka ithanai Kangalaa!!
Magizhchi!!
Viravil muzhu MALARAYUM Kaana imai moodamal kaathirukkum..en kangazh..
"...en udal erintha pinnum kaatraaven
aval swaasamavatharku ...."
enakkoru santhegam...???
SHARJAH varai pogumaa indha kaaatru......
hehhehehehehee!!
Vidaiyai aavaludan edhir Paarkum .....
Kaadhal Kirukkan
- From: Renga (@ stat72-222.dsl-chen.eth.net)
on: Fri Sep 24 07:56:50 EDT 2004
Thank u Mr. Kaadhal kirukaan .,
sharjah matter ellam edukaatheenga ..
Thanks again 4 the feed back.
Renga
- From: prabha (@ 202.185.32.191)
on: Mon Sep 27 22:47:39 EDT 2004
hi
iranthe pinnum kathal sollelam
marainthe pinnum kathal sollelam
ninaivugal valum varai...
very nice
- From: Renga (@ 61.2.33.182)
on: Tue Sep 28 10:53:15 EDT 2004
thankz a lot prabha 4 the feedback
Renga
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