Topic started by Shakthi (@ bangdp-36-242.mantraonline.com) on Tue Jun 4 13:39:53 .
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Naaatkal urundOda,
Maadangal Kadandagala,
Varudangal varuthi sella,

MaNithuliyai maalaiyakki,
Kaathirukiren maalaiyida!

Pirandu, Valarndu, Irandu,
Pin meendum pirandu,

Kaathirukiren, unakkaga.

Kaalavaraiyatru..
Janma Janmamaai!
Yuga Yugamaai!

Kathirukiren ..
En Iniyavane, Unakkaga.

Responses:

• From: Vaanmathi (@ 203-195-198-213.now-india.net.in) on: Tue Jun 4 14:26:29
  
  hi Shakthi
  
  Kaathiruppathum oru sugam thaanae
  >>> "Kathirunthaal ethir Parthirunthaal
  Oru nimishamum varushamthaan" <<<<<
  
  Ungalukku eppati...
  
  
• From: Maaran .S (@ 203-195-198-213.now-india.net.in) on: Tue Jun 4 14:35:35
  
  >>>>Pirandu, Valarndu, Irandu,
  Pin meendum pirandu,
  
  Kaathirukiren, unakkaga. <<<<
  
  Naan Migavum Rasitha varikal ivai Simply Superb.
  
  
• From: Ram (@ mm124.mme.wsu.edu) on: Tue Jun 4 16:35:56
  
  Shakthi,
  Ur theme is good but execution la Ungalukku theinja Untis of Time ellathaiyum Kotti theerthuttaa maathiri oru feeling IMHO
  
  
• From: Ram (@ mm124.mme.wsu.edu) on: Tue Jun 4 16:36:43
  
  typo,
  Untis====UNITS
  
  
• From: Oru Thamizhan (@ h216-170-142-235.dsl.tds.net) on: Tue Jun 4 18:00:51
  
  Shakthi,
  
  Nalla kavidhai. Paaraattukkal. Innum konjam nayam tharum santhamudan sindhu paadungal sindhai inikkum kavidhai piRakkum.
  
  But only one question?
  
  Kaadhal POyin Kaadhal Kittum - Orey Janmaththil.
  Janmam POyin Janmam KittuMO - Orey Kaadhalil?
  
  Oru Thamizhan
  
  
  
• From: Ram (@ mm124.mme.wsu.edu) on: Tue Jun 4 18:06:24
  
  DeepavaLi annikku pongal saapda mdiyum,
  pOngal annikku DeepvaLi saapda mudiyumO?
  
  
• From: Thaya (@ toronto-ppp3537633.sympatico.ca) on: Tue Jun 4 18:29:02
  
  Pirandu,Valarndu,Irandu,pirandu,
  Kaathirukiren,unakkaga.
  
  Puthusu!
  
  
• From: Ram (@ 63.161.26.234) on: Tue Jun 4 19:00:03
  
  Porandu Porandu Morandu pudichaalum,
  kaathikitte iruka vEndithaan,enakkaaga.
  I'm in such a bad mood today,athuthaan ippadi ovvoruthar solrathukkum ethaavathu edakku mudakka solla veikkathu....No offence meant
  
  
• From: Ram (@ 63.161.26.234) on: Tue Jun 4 23:36:29
  
  Shakthi,
  Did u get my mail?
  
  
• From: Vaanmathi (@ 203-195-198-213.now-india.net.in) on: Wed Jun 5 02:34:20
  
  Sakthi,
  
  >>> kidaipatharkaaka kaathirukalaam
  Kathirupatharkaaka kidaikkalaam <<<
  kathiruthalai mattumae kathurukkaatheer
  kidaipatharkkaaka muyarchiyungal
  Muyantraal mudiyum muthal janmathilae...
  
  Thotarum Natputan
  Vaanmathi .A
  
  
• From: j (@ 164.100.220.157) on: Wed Jun 5 02:38:00
  
  Shakthi, did u want my comments, i'm very weak in
  commenting.
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ bangdp-36-205.mantraonline.com) on: Wed Jun 5 05:55:38
  
  Maaran and Vaanmathi,
  
  Thanks a tonne!
  
  Ram,
  :-)
  
  Ennakku terinja units of time eh? Okei I got the point! Sure I accept ur criticism
  and remember not to do it again.
  
  "DeepavaLi annikku pongal saapda mdiyum,
  pOngal annikku DeepvaLi saapda mudiyumO?<<<<<<<<
  
  Haiyoooo Kadavulee!!! Ippdilaam Arukkanama?
  
  :))
  
  " Porandu Porandu Morandu pudichaalum,
  kaathikitte iruka vEndithaan,enakkaaga. "<<<<<<
  
  Romba bad mood pola irukku! Tamizh is being murdered and hanged brutally!
  Adu sari, Yaar kathirukaangalo, paavam kaal vali vanda odi poiduvanga
  Apram neenga daan kaakkanam! romba over ego kooodadu! Read my poem
  Faith Vs ego, the subject of that poem has leart her lesson!
  
  Ego...go..gooo.....!
  
  (Hey I was just jokin k...plz dont mistake me)
  
  
  " Shakthi,
  Did u get my mail? "<<<<
  
  Yup ram, You sure have a wonderful sense of humour! I am reading it and would
  send my feed back soon! Congrats once again.
  
  
  J,
  
  " Shakthi, did u want my comments, i'm very weak in
  commenting."<<<<<
  
  Weak in commenting or weak in commenting on bad poems!
  
  lol
  
  anyway, go ahead and thrash my poem or criticise it to any extent.
  I dont mind learning!
  
  Vaanmathi,
  
  "idaipatharkaaka kaathirukalaam
  Kathirupatharkaaka kidaikkalaam <<<
  kathiruthalai mattumae kathurukkaatheer
  kidaipatharkkaaka muyarchiyungal
  Muyantraal mudiyum muthal janmathilae."<<<<<<<
  
  Nice messege, muyarchiyudan kaathirukka solgiren en kavidai nayagiyidam.
  
  Tamizhan,
  
  Thangal vaarthaikku nandri. Muyarchikkiren innum merugu serka!
  
  "
  Kaadhal POyin Kaadhal Kittum - Orey Janmaththil.
  Janmam POyin Janmam KittuMO - Orey Kaadhalil? "<<<<<
  
  Kaadhal poyin kadhal kittum!
  eninum..
  mudhal kadhaalin
  mayakkam,
  maanidaraal vella mudiyada
  Kirakkam.
  
  Marainde ponaalum
  marakka mudiyada
  Thayakkam.
  
  
  
  Janmam poyin janmam kitumo? ore kaadhalil?
  yup very much possible.
  Have not u heard of soul partners?
  Janmam poyinum janmam poyinum, kaadhal ondre!
  
  (I guess I blabbered a lot! :-)
  
  
  
  Thaya!,
  
  "Puthusu"<<<<<
  
  I remmeber something thaya.. I am not sure, if u happen to watch SUN TV, or if u receive the
  transmission of tamizh programs at ur place.
  
  But there is a program called "top 10 movies" which gives u the feed back on recent movies.
  
  The comperer, after he says a lot about any movie would finally end with one word, to sum up
  the crux of what the movie is!
  
  He would neither say its good, nor bad, but would say something neutrally
  
  for example,
  
  "Thamizh" inda vaaram irandaam indatil.....
  
  Tamizh------"Pudhumai"
  
  And alas! that would be the end of his comment. You would neither know whether its good
  enough to watch or bad enough to throw! "Pudhumai!" now what would a viewer understand from
  that?
  
  Thaya,
  
  Did u get what I am tryin to say?...:-)
  
  
• From: Ram (@ 63.161.26.234) on: Wed Jun 5 06:11:49
  
  Shakthi,
  I was in such a bad mood and I used this thread to vent my "Kadi"...i dint mean any offence...sorry if nebody is hurt(Including THamizh thaai)
  
  
• From: iyappan (@ lan-202-144-73-10.maa.sify.net) on: Wed Jun 5 09:27:00
  
  Shakthi azhagiya kavidhai..
  
  
  
  >>Pirandu,Valarndu,Irandu,pirandu,
  Kaathirukiren,unakkaga. <<
  arumaiyaga kaiyandu irukkeenga
  
  Ungaloda karuthai thirudi naan ezuthi irkkiren
  mannipeergalaga !!
  ------------
  " ethanai thayin vayitrile
  pirandhu naanum irundheno
  
  appan ethanai appano
  indha jenmam varaiyilum
  
  munnil irundhadhu ethanai
  meendu ethanai jenmamo,
  
  unnai ninaithu naanume
  innum kaathu kidakkiren
  
  unnai naanum kaanum varai
  ulagil meendum pirakkiren
  --------
  
  ( sariya thavara theriyala .. just ennavo thonichi ezuthi irukken thappa irundhal mannippergal endra nambikkaiyudan)
  
  Iyappan
  
  
• From: Ram (@ mm124.mme.wsu.edu) on: Wed Jun 5 15:22:45
  
  tnx for ur encouraging words Shakthi...eagertly waiting for ur feedback
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ bangdp-33-5.mantraonline.com) on: Thu Jun 6 02:10:29
  
  Iyappan,
  
  Siram taazhnda nandri tangal paaratukku.
  
  Neengalum Arumaiyaaga ezhudiyirukireergal.
  
  "unnai ninaithu naanume
  innum kaathu kidakkiren
  
  unnai naanum kaanum varai
  ulagil meendum pirakkiren "<<<<<<<<<
  
  Mandil nindra varigal. Azhagu.
  
  Ninaituparungal.
  
  Kaadhalan, kaadhaliyai vida, idu Kadavul ennum "parabrahma" tukku porundum.
  
  Avanai / Avalai / Adanai kaanum varai, adanodu naam Aikyam aagum varai
  
  meendum meendum pirakindrom.
  
  "Piravamai vendum. Pirandalum unnai maravamai vendum"
  
  Ethanai arpudamana varigal !
  
  Janmathin palanai aadi andamilla Iraivanai Thudittu Uivomaaga
  
  sincerely,
  Shakthi
  
  
• From: Ram (@ 63.161.26.234) on: Thu Jun 6 02:20:46
  
  Shakthi,
  unga mail innum varalai:-(
  
  
• From: Sudha (@ lan-202-144-79-225.maa.sify.net) on: Mon Jul 1 06:06:07
  
  Hi Shakthi, This is the first time Iam visiting this site.... Ur kavidhai was good.... Manasil irukaradhai appadiye sonna maadiri iruku.... and Iyappan, urs was also nice....
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ 202.56.248.63) on: Mon Jul 1 13:47:46
  
  Sudha,
  
  thx a tonne
  
  
• From: Thaya. (@ toronto-ppp3537505.sympatico.ca) on: Mon Jul 1 16:22:26
  
  yes I did Shakthi:)
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ bangdp-36-239.mantraonline.com) on: Mon Jul 1 23:56:43
  
  :)
  
  
• From: Skanthavelu Nadarajah (@ edtntnt6-port-170.dial.telus.net) on: Sat Jul 27 11:57:56
  
  Shakthi,
  You have such beautiful Tamil poems. Please e-mail
  some of them to me.
  
  
• From: "kavitai" (@ cache5-1.ruh.isu.net.sa) on: Mon Jul 29 11:43:58
  
  Dear Shakthi,
  
  "uham uhamAi vedinduhondirukkum
  eravuhalin vediyalhal poola..."
  
  ahalappadutthappatta vrihalil
  ennum konjam Alam erundAl...
  enitterukkum innamum
  
  enrum anpudan
  
  "kavitai"
  
  
  
  
  

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