Maranam
Topic started by prema (@ 164.100.220.157) on Thu Aug 8 02:29:53 .
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Kaattilil kaathirukkiren unakkaga
maranathin kadaisee nodigalil
Indrum enakkul mudangi poiirukkirathu
nee valartha siragugal
Thadumarumbothellam enai thookivittai
indru thalladum nerathil
vazhi anuppa varuvaya
Vanthavarellam sendruvittanara enaivittu
manamengum kangalaga vazhi paarththirukkiren
unn varuvukkaga
varuvaya vazhianuppa en nanba
Responses:
- From: Shakthi (@ bangdp-33-16.mantraonline.com)
on: Thu Aug 8 03:07:43
very nice prema.
Only certain poems has a womanly touch.Yours has it.
Ungal nanbar varuvaar..kavalai padadeenga
:)
- From: prema (@ 164.100.220.157)
on: Thu Aug 8 05:57:54
if u really feels the touch then it will make me
happy.
prema
- From: ec (@ bryant.rz-berlin.mpg.de)
on: Thu Aug 8 06:43:42
azhagaana karu, nandraaga ezhuthi irukkireergaL. naduvil natpin aazhathai patriyum, kadaisi nimidathil naNbarin arugaamai evLavu ethir paarkkap padugiRathu enbathyum satre virivaaga ezhuthi irundhaal kavidhai innum azhuthamaaga irukkum enbathu en karuthu. thavaRaaga ninaikka vENdaam :-)
- From: Govin (@ 203.129.195.100)
on: Thu Aug 8 07:25:29
Kavithaiyin karuththu azhagaaga irukkirathu! Aanaal yetho urainadai padiththa unarvu! You have potential to improve prema! Thanks and regards
- From: prema (@ 164.100.220.157)
on: Thu Aug 8 07:30:53
Thanks for both of u. I will try to improve my
writings.
- From: kurankaatti (@ sf-proxy1.montgomery.com)
on: Thu Aug 8 17:52:21
karu nanRu, Govin sollvathu pOl innum uNarchikaLin visumbal olithaal nanRaaka irukkum.
- From: "kavidhai" (@ cache5-1.ruh.isu.net.sa)
on: Sat Aug 10 12:22:46
Dear Prema
Ungal muthal thulik kavidhaiyelEye
ungalidam Aatral erukkiradhu enpadai
unarndhu kondEen
adhai unmai padutthi vitteer Prema
elloorum solvadhu poola neengal tEerndEduttha
karupporul unmaiyelEyE alagaanadhu
aaiyenum ennum muyatchi saidhAal ungal kavidai
siharangalai thottu vidum
enna prema muyatchi dhodarvEra ?
enrum anpudan
"kavidhai"
- From: prema (@ 164.100.220.157)
on: Mon Aug 12 01:05:13
Ungal Nambikai Poikammal irukka muyarchi seigiren.
Anbudan
Prema
- From: kantha (@ 202.161.129.58)
on: Tue Sep 10 23:08:58
hi prema so nice ur kavithai.keep it up and improve it.
- From: indramala (@ 202.161.129.58)
on: Tue Sep 10 23:11:23
hi i'm indramala here,how r u?kavalai padathe snegithy avar kandipa varuvar,nambikaiyude erungal
- From: m (@ casper.city.unisa.edu.au)
on: Wed Sep 11 01:18:10
Hello Prema...
It's a very beautiful kavithai...
Keep it up...All the best to u...:-)
- From: prema (@ 164.100.220.157)
on: Thu Sep 12 00:05:35
hello indramala - i'fine, where from u r?
m - thank u.
- From: limdin (@ cache10-2.ruh.isu.net.sa)
on: Wed Oct 9 08:45:23
Maranam.....athuthaan vazhkaiyin nijam
Prema....
nijathudan ondri vaazha
manitha matham marukkirathu...
yaarudanum yaarum vara maattargal...
veandam intha poliyaana ethir paarpu...
veandam intha kathiruppu kanavugal
poiyyana vazhkai....poliyanna meni...
hmmm....poga poga theriyum vazhvin vazhi.
kanavugalil sanjarikkum maanidaa...
nee kanda saathanaithaan enna???
- From: prema (@ 164.100.220.157)
on: Wed Oct 9 23:45:39
ok, i agrees with u. The reality will kill us
before the original comes.
- From: limdin (@ cache2-2.ruh.isu.net.sa)
on: Thu Oct 10 03:04:04
mmmmm.........thanks...Prema
- From: venugopal (@ 146.189.46.101)
on: Mon Oct 14 15:43:49
Prema,
nalla kavithai. valthukkal..
anbudan
venu
- From: prema (@ 164.100.220.157)
on: Wed Oct 16 00:02:19
Thank u
- From: P.Manikandan (@ rtrgva-1.temenos.com)
on: Wed Nov 13 07:48:46
Meendum "MUDHAL MARIYAADHAI" Paartha Anubavam.
Vaalthukkal
mani
- From: prema (@ 164.100.220.157)
on: Fri Nov 15 01:27:00
Thank u
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