Topic started by Thendral! (@ 61.11.73.12) on Fri Mar 29 02:47:18 .
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urathu solla oru kodi aasai
unnai serndhaval naan ena!

unmaiyil nijam adhuvallavey!
vizhigalukkul vidhaithu ponai
aruvadai seyya mattum
aalilladhu sendru vittai!

En vaasam naasi thaakkuvadhu
vinodhamalla, nee tholaindhu
ponadhu than vinodham!

Vidai theriyaa vinaakkal earalam
en vaazhvil; therindhu kollum
aasai iruppinum
ettadha thooram nirkkiradhu
vidaigal anaitthum - un nesam ulpada.

Pudhirgalai thaan pogum naalellam
padargiradhu enmeedhu!
Kaikettum thoorathil nee nirkkirai
ena kanithu vitten thavarai
kadavul veru vidhamai enniyadhai
kavaniyamal!

Therindhu kondum theiliyamal
nirkiren; meen piditha pinnum
theliyadha kalangiya neer kuttaiyai!

Udhadugalukku uvarpppai iruppinum
idhayathirkku inippai thaan irukkiradhu
un nesam - Eppodhavadhu!

Responses:

• From: Thaya (@ toronto-ppp3537455.sympatico.ca) on: Fri Mar 29 17:39:51
  
  
  "meen piditha pinnum
  theliyadha kalangiya neer kuttaiyai! "
  
  hmmmm.....
  
  "Udhadugalukku uvarpppai iruppinum
  idhayathirkku inippai thaan irukkiradhu "
  Very nice.....
  
  oh by the way,
  can i sugest something pls?:)
  just an opinion...
  
  "meen piditha pinnum
  theliyadha kalangiya neer kuttaiyai! "
  
  Meen pidiththa pinnum
  Theliyaatha kuttayaai..
  
  "Kalangiya neer"....this repeats already excisted meaning.that is "Theliyaatha kuttai"
  
  oru vishayam thirumba sollum pothu,pothu'mnnu aayidum illiyaa.....freshnes poyidum:)
  
  inga Ryhm vara aarambikkum:)
  
  sorry,sollanumpola irunthuthu...
  
  :)
  
  
• From: deepa (@ 61.11.73.12) on: Fri Mar 29 23:46:56
  
  thiruthi kolgiren ini varum kavithaigalil!
  
  Nandri thaya ungaladhu vimarsanathirkku!
  
  
• From: Thaya (@ orchid.tpl.toronto.on.ca) on: Sat Mar 30 11:39:47
  
  
  oh Deepa oru Thenralaa?oh i see:)
  
  Thanks deepa.
  
  

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