Topic started by thenchittu (@ ool-182ce12a.dyn.optonline.net) on Wed Jan 16 12:28:41 .
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enn veetarukae
kallarai thodam ...

kaalai veyilil minidum,
paniyil kuzhithidum
azhakana kalaraikal ...

enn nenjin
ninaivu chinnam aathalal
uraiadukirean ivarkalidam
unmaiaka ...
manasara nesikiren imm
mandu ponna manitharkalai!

enakkum oru idam
kaali inke ..
inba boomiye , unnai
iruthiyaka parkiren
oru thadavai ...
ennul eano
eakka perrumoochu ...

mukavurai thantha karuvaraiye!
mudivurai inthe kallaraiya?
mukam izhanthu,
mukavari izhanthu,
iruthiyil enn kaladikal,
unnai naadithaney?
ayako ..
viduviden
ennai madum ...

ennul eano
eakka perumoochu,
orey mounemengum ...
maranna mozhi puriyuma?
manitharkku?

ulaga vazhvil
unnmaikaz urankipokirathu,
manasatchikalo enrum,
mounamakirathu,enralum
maravamal senru varuven
kalarai thodathirku,
enn thavarukal inke,
thirutha paduvathal ....

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Responses:

• From: thilaga (@ ool-182ce12a.dyn.optonline.net) on: Fri Jan 18 12:23:51
  
  thenchittu,
  
  very nice poem.
  forum hub la kaathal athu, ithu enru suma vambadichidrukumbothu, vazhvin unnmai unnarthi ellarudaya thalayil kuttu vakkirar polla kallaraiyai pathi azhana kavithai ezhuthi irukireerkal.
  manithanin marannathai patri urukamana kavithai ithu.
  ungaluku en manamarntha paratukal.
  
  -thilaga-
  
  

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