Topic started by Iyappan (@ lan-202-144-73-10.maa.sify.net) on Mon Aug 5 14:00:00 .
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melliya un poovasam
unakkum munnadhaga!!
thendralodu serndhu varum

un varugayaiyai sollum munnarivippu
adhanaale manathil oru kuru kuruppu

thoorathil un naanu parththadhundu
arugil un vasam unardhadhundu..
aarugil nee varumbothellam - penne

unmugam kaana manam eno marukkuthadi
vetkkama illai thayakkama theriyadhu

thayakkam enRal thalli selvayO
vetkkam enRaal vilagi selvAyO
puriyaveillaiye en pethai manadhukku

aanal aanukkum vekkam undenil
adhai thavrenRu solvaayuO sol??

naan irukkum idathinile nee varum velaiyile..
Jal jal jal ena salangai oli - maRRorai
satru thal thal thal ena sollumadi -aanalum

enai mattum pogamal nil nil nil ena sollumadi
un salangaikkum theriyumodi en kaadhal


parpadhuvo illayo ena
thalai kaviznhu yosikkaiyil
kadandhirundhaay veguthooram

kannimaikkum avvelaithannai naan
sabithirundheen palakaalam

adhikaalai kanavonRu
nichayam palithamenNru en
aacchi solla kettathundu -en

kanavil vandha kadhaliye
unaikkandu kaipidippatheppodhu
----
LoL
kadhal kavithai ezuthalamnu try pannen..
:))
----
Iyappan

Responses:

• From: (@ lan-202-144-73-10.maa.sify.net) on: Tue Aug 6 12:14:57
  
  
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ bangdp-33-16.mantraonline.com) on: Thu Aug 8 03:30:26
  
  Nalla kadhal kavidai daan!
  
  anaal kaadhalai vida BHAYAM terigiradu
  
  (First experience enbadala?)
  
  Kadhalicha Sollidanam
  
  Illaina.....Idulai adu kanavu kaadhal
  
  but
  
  sollalaina.....
  
  KaadhalE kanava poidum
  
  :)
  
  "unmugam kaana manam eno marukkuthadi
  vetkkama illai thayakkama theriyadhu
  
  thayakkam enRal thalli selvayO
  vetkkam enRaal vilagi selvAyO
  puriyaveillaiye en pethai manadhukku "<<<<<
  
  Portrays a young, naive, teenger mind.
  
  I enjoyed those lines
  
  
• From: Iyappan (@ lan-202-144-73-10.maa.sify.net) on: Thu Aug 8 06:37:29
  
  Shakthi,
  Kadhal nijama irundha sari sollidalaam.. kadhali yarunne mugam theriyatha podhu yaarkitta poi solli mudhugula "TIN" kattikkitu varathu.. LoL
  
  Yes in real love.. seekkirama solRathu nallathu thaan.
  
  THanks shakthi for your comments.
  Iyappan
  
  
• From: Govin (@ 203.129.195.100) on: Thu Aug 8 07:34:25
  
  Good one Iyappan, I enjoyed it! Rombe kuru kuruppu thaan ;-)
  
  
• From: Iyappan (@ lan-202-144-73-10.maa.sify.net) on: Thu Aug 8 09:38:21
  
  Govin..
  Romba kurukuruppa irundha thalai nimirndhu parthidunga unga kaadhalaiye.. ennoda kavithai nayagan maadhiri mounama irukkadheeenga LoL
  ;-)
  and Thnx for your comments
  Iyappan
  
  
• From: ec (@ bryant.rz-berlin.mpg.de) on: Thu Aug 8 09:39:02
  
  "naan irukkum idathinile nee varum velaiyile..
  Jal jal jal ena salangai oli - maRRorai
  satru thal thal thal ena sollumadi -aanalum
  enai mattum pogamal nil nil nil ena sollumadi"
  
  kanavuk kaadhalitta kooda ivLavu possessivenessa? Lol!
  mudhal kaadhal anubavathil varum kurukuruppu, thayakkam pOndravatrai azhagaagach cholli irukkireergaL.
  
  
• From: Iyappan (@ 203.200.61.1) on: Thu Aug 8 12:59:52
  
  EC
  pinne mudhal kaadhalna summava .. adhuvum en kavithai naayagan ippathaan kadhalikkave aarambichi irukkar. pakkalam eppadi ellam avastha padapporaro theriyala,..
  
  LoL
  
  thnx for your comments EC
  Iyappan
  
  
• From: kurankaatti (@ sf-proxy1.montgomery.com) on: Thu Aug 8 18:16:28
  
  muthaRk kaathal kavithaiyaa? illai kaathalukkaana muthal kavithaiyaa ?
  muthal kavithai pOla theriyavillai.nalla irukku.
  
  (jal jal jal, jil jil jil pOnRa vaarthaikaL Romance il irundhu kavithaiyai vilakki kontu selkirathu, thavithirunthaal innum nanRaai irunthirukkum )
  
  kaathal kavithai ezhuthuvOrukku ezhuthaaLar Sujatha sonna oru yOsanai,
  "anbE, kaNNe enRu pala laksham kavithaikal irukkiraathu, >>>athu pOnRa vaarththikaLai thavirthitunkaL"
  
  
  
• From: Iyappan (@ 203.200.61.1) on: Fri Aug 9 09:23:26
  
  
  Kurankatti sir
  
  >>"anbE, kaNNe enRu pala laksham kavithaikal irukkiraathu, >>>athu pOnRa vaarththikaLai thavirthitunkaL" <<
  
  Mudindha varai indha madhiri varthaigalai use pannamal thavirthirukkiren..
  and thanks for your suggession and comments.
  
  Iyappan
  
  
• From: "kavidhai" (@ cache5-1.ruh.isu.net.sa) on: Sat Aug 10 11:30:44
  
  Hi Iyappan
  
  nEram kidaikavillai seridhu thamadhamAi thAan
  ungalin ek kavitaiyai vAsikka nErndhadhu
  
  kunguk kooli than sinna alahinAal
  nellu manihalai kongam kongamAAi
  kotthuvadhu poola thayangi tayangi
  veli varum ungal vArtthaihalil oru thani alahu
  terihiradhu...oru sennakkulandhaien kurummpt thanam poola...
  
  ennum kongam alahAha vAartthaihal suvAasikkappattirukkalAam
  
  >>>>unmugam kaana manam eno marukkuthadi
  vetkkama illai thayakkama theriyadhu
  
  thayakkam enRal thalli selvayO
  vetkkam enRaal vilagi selvAyO
  puriyaveillaiye en pethai manadhukku <<<<<
  
  nAan rasittha alahiya varihal
  
  enrum anpudan
  
  "kavidhai"
  
  
  
  
• From: FlowerGuy (@ 202.95.127.5) on: Sun Aug 11 02:02:35
  
  mudhal murai thirudum kaaranathaal,
  muzhuvathum thiruda maranthuvitten.
  jal..jal..jal ena salangai oli.
  sala sala salavena saalaiyile..
  
  vaav..Zen swamiyin romance amarkkalamaaga irukku... :-) good one iyappan.
  
  
• From: Iyappan (@ lan-202-144-73-10.maa.sify.net) on: Mon Aug 12 11:54:49
  
  Kavithai..
  Mikka nanRi.
  " ookkuvithal yaar oruvar uyaratharo thoza "
  Ungalin ookkam kavithaigalai melum semmai padutha udhavum.
  
  Flowerguy
  "Jal jal jal ena salangai oli - maRRorai
  satru thal thal thal ena sollumadi"
  
  indha motha kavithai uruvaga karanamay irundha variye ivaigal thaan. THnx to valampuri John
  Avaruthan indha naal iniya naalla explain pannaru..
  " pengal aniyum kaar chadhangai ezuppum oli
  adhu jal jal jal enbathu, ethir varuvorai saRRe andha pakkam thal thal thal enRu sollum. " ( he was explaining about some indian practices and meaning).
  
  
  >>Zen swamiyin romance amarkkalamaaga irukku... :-) <<
  
  :-)) nalla velai.. kavi kuduthu mottaiyadikkama vittingale adhuvaraikkum santhosam thaan LoL.
  
  thnx flower guy
  
  Iyappan
  
  
• From: srini (@ 203.199.165.146) on: Tue Aug 13 09:26:55
  
  manam irupavan kathalipadhu illai, kanavil varupavalai unmaiyil kathalikamudhiyathu,
  srini
  
  
• From: iyappan (@ ) on: Tue Sep 24 11:26:44
  
  thanks Srini
  
  Ammam anubavam edhum undo ungalukku ;)
  
  Kidding you
  
  Iyappan
  
  

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