Topic started by Shakthi priya (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on Tue Dec 16 11:45:28 EST 2003.
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hi all, just thought would try a

''villager dialect''

I am not too good at it..I would want suggestions to improve....in places I went wrong.



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¦Áö¡֧Á Á§É ¦Áö¡֧Á!

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meyyAlumA maChaAnE meyyAlumA?
pukaivaNdi kaNdathE
vavuththukuLLa serikkalai

vAnaththula veLLaiyA
paRavai oNNu paRakkuthu
sakkaraththai kANalai
iRakkaiyaiyum kANala
manusanungka Eththikiddu
thUraththula sErkkuthu
meyyAlumA massAnE meyyAlumA?

manakkaNakku pOda ingka
manusanukku vakkilla
sathura sathura poddikuLLa
kaNakku pOddu pArkkuRAn
tharaiyilayum sevuththulayum
varaipadangkaLa kANala
athu mUnjsiyila padam varainjsu
pAddu pOddu rasikkiRAn
meyyAlumA machaAnE meyyAlumA?

innAnamO vinjnjAnamAm
kaNdupudissu mALAla
sAmiyAka pArkkuRAn
karuvila veLayAduRAn
meyyAlumA machaAnE meyyalumA?

manasu purinjsa mesinu oNNu
yArum kaNdu pudikkala
sAmiyAka mudiyumA?
savadAl thAn n-adakkumA?
eththanai thAn vasathi van-thum
n-immathu thAn pOssuthE
vinjnjAnaththil vaLarssiya silar
pAvi mULaiyum vakuththussE
raththa veLLAmAka ingka
pUmiyaithAn mAththissE
sAmi illa pUtham illa
ellAm manusan vEla thAn
meyyAlumE machaAnE meyyAlumE!

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Responses:

• From: malligai (@ 65-102-252-246.dnvr.qwest.net) on: Tue Dec 16 19:07:07 EST 2003
  
  Shakthi,
  
  mmm...nalathaan iruku...but not that very impressive as ur usual works...u have a lott of room to improve in this 'naatupura' style...
  
  i think if u cut out the repetitive '¦Áö¡ÖÁ¡ Á§É ¦Áö¡ÖÁ¡? ' it wwould be much better...:)
  
  
• From: Shakthi priya (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Tue Dec 16 23:02:29 EST 2003
  
  malligai,
  
  hmm........sari....
  
  nattupura stylukku innum niraiya maaranam i guess!
  
  :))
  
  okei noted ur point bout repetition of meyyaluma.
  
  thx malligai, Shakthipriya need all ur feedbacks, to express herself better
  
  :)
  
  
• From: Agalyan (@ 61.11.78.98) on: Wed Dec 17 03:02:58 EST 2003
  
  „ì¾¢ ôâ¡ ¦Ã¡õÀ ¦Ã¡õÀ ¦Ã¡õÀ ¿øÄ¡ þÕìÌ!
  ÒÐ ÓÂüº¢-º¢ó¾¨É¢ý ±Ø!!!
  
  ¿¡ðÎôÒÈ ¿¨¼Â¢ø Á¢¸×õ «Æ¸¡¸ ¯ûÇÐ.
  
  
  wonderful style please continue similar patterns
  in your forthcoming works! Keep it up!!
  
  

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