Topic started by Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on Sun Feb 2 06:20:17 .
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Enge pOgiren?
Ilakillaamal,
Disaiyillaamal,
Kaadalillaamal
Enge POgiren?

Tavarum paadaiyil
Mutkal naduvil
ratham vazhiya
Tappena terindum..
Endaan pOgiren?

EnnaiyE azhithu
KaruthugaL turandu
marabugaL marandu
ellaigaL meeri

EnO pOgiren??

yaaradu unnai
ennidam sErthadu?
kalyanam ennum
inipu pOrvaiyil
yaaaradu unnai
SErthu iNaithadu?

un nizhal vEndam
kaadhal vEndam
engo pOgiren
tappena terindum
tunindu pOgiren

tholainda kaadhalai
thedi thedi
tavithu pOgiren
Endro nigazhnda
kaadhal kadaiyai
ninaithu pOgiren

Kayil irukkum
thEnai turandu
kilaiyil irukkum
kootirkku alaigiren.

tavarin seetram
nenjil paaya
tadumaarum ennai
tooka iru kaiyaai

raNamaana ullathil
thuyar theerkum marundaai
siru pillai tavarena
mannikkum manadaai

avadaaaram pala eduthu
kadavulaaai, guruvaai
nanbanaaai, kanavanaai

meendum kaadhalikiren
kaadhalin aazham purindu kondu
kaadhalin artham terindu kondu
meendum kaadhalikiren
unarvinilE azhiyaa kaadhalanaai

En KaNavanE Neeee!

Responses:

• From: Kajan (@ wc05.ym.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com) on: Sun Feb 2 13:04:23
  
  Vazhthukkal.
  
  
• From: Vennila (@ 195.224.105.243) on: Sun Feb 2 23:32:18
  
  Superb Poem. "Unfaithful" movie is also like this only.
  
  
• From: Iyappan (@ lan-202-144-73-10.maa.sify.net) on: Mon Feb 3 02:45:32
  
  Shakthi,
  excellent poem. thavaru seithal manitha iyalbu ... adhai thiruththi kolvathu vegu silaraalE aagum.. appadi seithal magizchi maaraathu... idhai indha kavithaiyila nalla kamichiriukkinga.... ..
  
  Very good poem
  
  keep it up
  Anbudan
  Iya
  
  
• From: ec (@ bryant.rz-berlin.mpg.de) on: Mon Feb 3 15:49:45
  
  nalla irukku kavithai, shakthi! thavaRu senjavanga thirundha muyaRchithaalum, indha kavidhaila vara kaNavan maathiri, athai aatharikkiRavanga arithu! andha parandha manappaanmai vaLarndhathuna aarOgyamaana sandhOshamaana ulagam amaiyum!
  
  
• From: kurankaatti (@ sf-proxy2.montgomery.com) on: Mon Feb 3 19:28:25
  
  Shakthi,
  romba azhakaana, unarchi pUrvamaana kavithai. ithil nirayya uLaviyal unmaikaL puthainthu kitakkinRana.
  
  ithu pOl mElum kavithai ezhutha vaazhthukaL!
  
  
• From: karthik (@ 203.199.211.130) on: Tue Feb 4 01:46:29
  
  Excellent one Shakthi .. !!
  u touched the soul .. looking for MORE from u ..
  
  how much time it took for u to write this??
  
  
  
  
  
  
• From: Kajan (@ wc05.ym.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com) on: Tue Feb 4 10:53:34
  
  >>"Unfaithful" movie is also like this only<<
  
  I don't think so.
  
  
• From: Vennila (@ 195.224.105.243) on: Wed Feb 5 03:12:23
  
  Tavarum paadaiyil
  Mutkal naduvil
  ratham vazhiya
  Tappena terindum..
  Endaan pOgiren?
  
  EnnaiyE azhithu
  KaruthugaL turandu
  marabugaL marandu
  ellaigaL meeri
  
  EnO pOgiren??
  
  Kayil irukkum
  thEnai turandu
  kilaiyil irukkum
  kootirkku alaigiren.
  
  meendum kaadhalikiren
  kaadhalin aazham purindu kondu
  kaadhalin artham terindu kondu
  meendum kaadhalikiren
  unarvinilE azhiyaa kaadhalanaai
  
  En KaNavanE Neeee!
  
  LineByLine Of This Poem and SceneByScene of the Movie WillNot Match. U Shud Not Compare Like That. The Idea Behind ThisPoem Is SimilarTO "Unfaithful" Only. MovieLa Aval Tolainda Kaadalai TedaMaata. Irukum Uravai VituVitu Putusa Oru Uravai Tedi PoVaa. Piragu Tanatu Tavarai Unarntu Meendum Kanavanai Tedi Varuva. Kajan O.Kva?
  
  
• From: Kajan (@ wc05.ym.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com) on: Thu Feb 6 00:33:13
  
  Fiesr said >>"Unfaithful" movie is also like this only
  
  then >>The Idea Behind ThisPoem Is SimilarTO "Unfaithful" Only
  
  Major different....
  
  Kavithai... at the begining stage ( searching or hunting )
  Unfaithful movie.... made mistake continously.
  
  My first posting >>Vazhthukkal<< That does not mean good concept. I meant to give good wrok.
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Fri Feb 7 04:41:29
  
  kajan, iyappan, vennila, karthick, ec, Mr.kurankatti,
  
  thx all........
  
  ur encouragement is my tonic
  
  
• From: rathy (@ 219.93.202.118) on: Wed Mar 5 01:05:39
  
  vanakam,, uranginall than urakkatai unarah mudiyum,sumarthaltan baram athai unarah mudiyum,
  athe poll katalithal than kathalai unarah mudiyum katalin pirium athu kodukum anubavathai yetre kondall than athu unnmaiyanna kadal ,, unnakul irukum anthe kathal enndenrum valathum,, pirintal kuda oru vagaiyil sugammanathe karanam unn pirivill than unnake uriyavan unnulle vargiran atai nee unarvai,,,,,,
  siragu athil irukum paravai galai
  parakka vithe par unnidam atarke pasam
  irunthal unnidame vante serum,,,,
  tavare irunthal mannikaum,,,
  rathy
  
  
• From: Jules (@ dialup-209.245.13.59.dial1.denver1.level3.net) on: Sun Mar 16 16:32:44
  
  Good one Sakthi!
  
  
• From: shakthi (@ 203-195-199-246.now-india.net.in) on: Fri Apr 4 05:30:35
  
  "siragu athil irukum paravai galai
  parakka vithe par unnidam atarke pasam
  irunthal unnidame vante serum,,,, ""<<<<
  
  very true rathi...
  in english they say.
  
  If u love someone.......let him go
  if he is urs.. he would come back
  if he does not....
  he never was!
  
  thx....for ur response
  
  thd jules
  
  
• From: shila (@ 219.93.60.189) on: Wed Apr 30 03:01:05 EDT 2003
  
  very nice
  
  

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