Uyir
Topic started by udhayan (@ 203.199.100.9) on Mon Jul 15 02:39:32 .
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Uyir vazha
unnugiraen
ennuyiraga
nee irupadhanaal
ennuyiraga
enakullae
nee
irupadhanaal
Responses:
- From: "kavitai" (@ cache5-1.ruh.isu.net.sa)
on: Wed Jul 17 13:55:10
Dear Udhayan
Karutthukkalil thanippaadu
tereheradhu
paarattukkal
aayenum assainthadum layam
kavitaikku thani sugam
appadittanee Mr Udhayan
Enrum anpudan
"kavitai"
- From: Shakthi (@ bangdp-34-106.mantraonline.com)
on: Wed Jul 17 14:24:13
right on point!
good going udayan
kavithai,
just a suggestion...
tappa ninaikadeenga!
neenga paavam ella kavidaigalaiyum vimarsanam panreenga.
kavidai vera azhaha ezhudareenga
anaaal ennai maadiri tamizh lai weak aaga irukkara ppl kku,
unga language romba kashtamaaga irukku kavidai!
plz...konjam appo appo puriyara maadiri pesa try pannungalen!
I dont know how many ppl share this view.
Idulai paavam ennanna....neenga vera...romba azhaha, long comments with poetic sense...kudukareenga..
I respect ur comments, its so poetic.
but ennai maadiri paaamara janangal purinjukara maadiri ezhuda try panunga kavidai.
plz
thx,
urs friendly,
Shakthi
:)
- From: kajan (@ wc05.ym.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com)
on: Thu Jul 18 03:03:46
udhayan
well done.
mayangatha uyir maddum vendum
manithanaka vazha.
Shakthi,
..ennai maadiri paaamara janangal ..
mmmmmh what can we say ?
- From: "kavitai" (@ cache5-1.ruh.isu.net.sa)
on: Thu Jul 18 14:05:52
Dear Shakthi
Anpudan vanakkam
Point - 1
Mutalil ungal puriyamaikku
en Allntha anudapangal
Point - 2
Iya Shakthi Iyaa..!
Edu ungalaippol "paaamara janangal" lukku
puriyala..?
En "kavitai" or "vimarsanam" kalil varum
1) Vaarthaihala..?
2) Artthangala..?
3) "English"(Aangelam) el elutappadum "Tamil"la..?
(evai anaitthum "Moli" (language) el adakkam enil)
Point - 3
Atu eppadinga..
en "language" puriyalla engerenga..
kashtam engerenga.., en kavithai vera azhaha erukku engureenga.. kulappamai erukku
konjam puriyara maadiri sollungalen!Plz..
Point - 4
ennagga neenga kavita ezhuzunga adutthwar kavitaya vemarsanam pannugga
En ellA kavitaiyaium vemarsanam pannugga
aduthavar vemarsanam ungalukku pedikkallEnna
maruthu vemarsanam pannugga (atha neegga sanguttu
thanE erukkenga) ennavum sainga
etila pooi ennagga paavamum punniyamum...!!!???
(ungala pakkatthne paavamai erukku - kovikkatinga)
Point - 5
Athu sari nannaa kavitai ellaam eluturengalE
naan kuda vemarchcherukkEn terumbap pooi
"...ennai maadiri tamizh lai weak aaga irukkara ppl kku" nu solluringalE
Poi kuuda solluvingalO.. apattham! apattham!!
"I dont know how many ppl share this view."
Point - 6
Athu erukkattum
Iyaa enda kuraiyai sonnathatku romba nanrEnga
ungalla Entha kopamum kuda ella.
Anaa teruttikka vanum engerathanaala thaan
neegga eluteya "Advice" kku madippukkoduthu
entha kAlve(?) ellaam kEkka vEndi ayeduthu.
Mannikkonum
Ethavatu ungalukku puriya vEnum endu meendum
meendum ungal "Advice" kku nanri kuuri
megavum panivudan vedai peruherEn Iyaa
Nanri vanakkam
Enrum anpudan
"kavitai
- From: Shakthi (@ bangdp-36-200.mantraonline.com)
on: Fri Jul 19 01:23:40
Dear mr/ms kavidai,
"Mutalil ungal puriyamaikku
en Allntha anudapangal "<<<<<<
Sorry! I do not need it. If I dont understand ur style, it does not mean
I need ur sympathy. I can live without it.
"Iya Shakthi Iyaa..! "<<<<<
I am Mrs.Shakthi, Though its not important here, I Just mentioned it. I hate
gender confusions. thx.
"En "kavitai" or "vimarsanam" kalil varum
1) Vaarthaihala..?
2) Artthangala..?
3) "English"(Aangelam) el elutappadum "Tamil"la..?
(evai anaitthum "Moli" (language) el adakkam enil) "<<<<<
The third point. Ur way of expressing tamizh in english.
"kashtam engerenga.., en kavithai vera azhaha erukku engureenga.. "<<<<<<<<<
Yeah I need to read ur poems twice to understand the meaning which u try to
convey. Anything which is difficult to comprehend, need not be ignored.
One can try it twice.
"aduthavar vemarsanam ungalukku pedikkallEnna
maruthu vemarsanam pannugga (atha neegga sanguttu
thanE erukkenga)"<<<<<<<
I guess this forum hub is also for debating and arguing on issues. I find NOTHING
wrong in doing it. If the concerned person whom I argue upon find it as a problem
he or she can say so. AND I WOULD NEVER AGAIN PASS CONTROVERSIAL COMMENT ON HIM
OR HER.
"etila pooi ennagga paavamum punniyamum...!!!??? "<<<<<
I AM SORRY! I TAKE BACK THAT WORD.
"(ungala pakkatthne paavamai erukku - kovikkatinga) "<<<<
No thx. I dont need it.
"Athu sari nannaa kavitai ellaam eluturengalE
naan kuda vemarchcherukkEn terumbap pooi
"...ennai maadiri tamizh lai weak aaga irukkara ppl kku" nu solluringalE
Poi kuuda solluvingalO.. apattham! apattham!! "<<<<<<<
Ms. or mr kavithai, what one finds as a good poem, need not be good for the
other person. Beauty, appreciation, views, intelligence, knowledge etc are
relative concepts. I FIND I AM NOT UP TO THE MARK. THERE IT ENDS.
apatham!? what is apatham? My goal is different. My aims and marks are far high.
So I say I have long way to go. You CANNOT CALL THAT APPATHAM!
"Iyaa enda kuraiyai sonnathatku romba nanrEnga
ungalla Entha kopamum kuda ella.
Anaa teruttikka vanum engerathanaala thaan "<<<<<
I DID NOT MEAN IT AS AN ADVICE. I MEANT IT AS A COMPLIMENT. I wanted to say,
ur vocabulary and way of communicating is too good. (relatively and comparatively
again). I felt u are in a grade higher than most of us here, so just wanted u to
come down to normal level and comment. So that the messege reaches all.
Guess that answered most of it. I again stress, I meant it as a compliment.
I do not wish to continue this argument and cause more bruises and scars
in our minds.
I guess I had hurt u. I am extremely sorry for the same.
Best Wishes,
Friendly,
Shakthi.
- From: "kavitai" (@ cache5-1.ruh.isu.net.sa)
on: Sat Jul 20 11:43:27
Dear Mrs. Shakthi
Ones I should be answer to you but..!
<<<<<<"I do not wish to continue this argument and cause more bruises and scars
in our minds.">>>>>>>
Yes I can avoid all cracks madam because I will respect your last word that "Friendly"
Sorry
Natpudan
"kavitai"
- From: Udhayan (@ 203.199.100.90)
on: Mon Jul 22 02:37:51
Thanx for everything
- From: Udhayan (@ 203.199.100.90)
on: Mon Jul 22 02:38:02
Thanx for "everything"
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