UNAKKAAGAVE..hmmmmmmm...!!!
Topic started by Shravan (@ 202.88.154.206) on Wed Dec 3 02:06:08 EST 2003.
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Hi ******* ponne.....
As u wish... my tamil kavaithais for public..hmmm..paaru..starts here..first stanza..according to the response..i will continue to next stanza of this nedungkavithai..hmmmm..! But idont want response from u...hahaha..let others to do that..if my kavithai is good...lol..!
ok..padi..latest one i wrote..
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Unnai naan paarthiruntha
Nimishangalai vida..
Unakkaai naan kaathiruntha
Nimishangal Inimai..!
Unnudan naan pesikodiruntha
Nimishangalai vida...
(hmmm..mele irukra stanzakku response varattum..i will continue then..hehehe)
------Plzz yaaravathu response panni maanaththa kaappaathirunga..oooops..!---
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Responses:
- From: shylaja (@ 203-195-196-66.now-india.net.in)
on: Wed Dec 3 02:29:47 EST 2003
ahaha.. asathittinga kavinjare....pothuma response ? shy
- From: Agalyan (@ 61.11.85.199)
on: Wed Dec 3 02:31:18 EST 2003
Nallaa thaan irukku shravan, ithu kooda
puthu technic maari irukku, suspense vaithu ezhuthuvathu!!!!
good try yaar!
- From: Shravan (@ 202.88.154.206)
on: Thu Dec 4 05:45:21 EST 2003
Thanx shyla.agalyan...!
hmmmm....next stanzas..
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Unnai naan paarthiruntha
Nimishangalai vida..
Unakkaai naan kaathiruntha
Nimishangal Inimai..!
Unnudan naan pesikodiruntha
Nimishangalai vida..
Uneethire amarnthu
pesaamaleye unmugam
paarthu kondirukkum
Nimishangal Inimai..!
Nijathinil paarkkum
unnuruvaththai vida..
Naan kanmoodinaal
Kanavinile varum
Unnuruvam Azhagu..!
Koodal kolgaiyil
Vetkaththil naanipogum
Unmugaththai vida..
Oodal kolgaiyil
Gobaththil konippogum
Unmugam Azhagu..!
---to be continued...
Meet u tomoorrow..!
- From: malligai (@ 67-40-44-159.dnvr.qwest.net)
on: Thu Dec 4 13:30:06 EST 2003
Shravan,
nala iruku unga kavithai..simple and nice...
ithu ena 'installment' kavithaiya?? :)
- From: Kaadhal kirukkan (@ und-as2p20.und.nodak.edu)
on: Fri Dec 5 03:02:18 EST 2003
shravan
Pirindhu kidakkum indh akavidhai manigalai ondru saerkka indha manidha sangilyin thunai thedigireer polum!!
padhara vendaam...!!
sikki kidakkirom MALLIGAIyin kadaiysee kavidhai vaasatthil!!
Veli varuvom vezzi noolaaga indha manigalukku azhagu searpadharkku...!!!
Enna malligai avargale naan solvadhu seriyaaa....!!
Kaadhal Kirukkan
- From: shylaja (@ 203-195-202-97.now-india.net.in)
on: Fri Dec 5 04:45:21 EST 2003
shravan....innum merukerralam..aanalum kavidhai azaguthan...shy
- From: Shravan (@ 202.88.154.206)
on: Fri Dec 5 06:56:48 EST 2003
Yes..Shylaja..yenakkum appdi oru feelingthaan..something short in taste..appdinnu..! I think Vaarththai korpil thadumaarugiren yendru ninaikkiren..!Anyway VIMARSANAM yenbathu azhntha kavanippu & Akkaraiyin prathipalippu..athu paaraattaagavum irukkalaam..kuraiyaagavumirukkalaam..! Urs is a nice advice..! Mr.Kirukkan sir, Malligai..ans shailja..thanx for all ur vimarsanangal.
Hidaa Sidhaarth..
Thanx for nice friendship day forwarded quote in my personel mail box..
Anbu Thambi..
Alai yenbathu kaatru irukkum varai..
vaanam yenbathu paarvai irukkum varai..
kavithai yenbathu karppanai irukkum varai..
Aasai yenbathu thevai irukkum varai..
Adhikaaram yenbathu panam irukkum varai..
Aanaal..
Sagotharathuvam yenbathu..
Saagumvarai mattumalla
Aduththa sandhadhiyilum thodarum..!
My friendshipday wishes to u & All our forumhub visitors..!
-Shrav
- From: JJ (@ 220.226.14.180)
on: Mon Dec 8 00:21:28 EST 2003
Nanbanay
Unathu kavithai azhagu
***Nengal nijathai vida nizhal ai ay adigam virumbugirirgal***
NIZHAL AI VIDA NIJAM ENIMAI
NIJATHAI UNARUNGAL...ANUBAVINGAL
---KAVITHAIGAL PADAIUNGHAL---
Intha thavanai murai...
... kavithai veliyudu seivathil mattum irukatum ;)
- From: Shrav (@ 202.88.152.206)
on: Mon Dec 8 11:25:13 EST 2003
hmmm...JJ
Nijangal Elaguvaanavai..
Ninaivugal ganamaanavai..!
Ninaiththu paarkiren..
Yeno Valikkurathu
Yenthan Idhayam..!
-shravan
- From: -R- (@ 202.71.146.145)
on: Tue Dec 9 13:01:31 EST 2003
hellow..
Yenna romba pulambara madri iruku..!Cool down..!Kavitha romba nalle irukkudu.
-R
- From: jacky (@ ppp-219.65.121.20.chn.vsnl.net.in)
on: Wed Dec 17 01:15:13 EST 2003
nice da...yapadi shrav...unga manasula kuda...ethu mariyallm vithiyasama thonuthu...keep it up...jjacky_121
- From: Shakthi priya (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in)
on: Wed Dec 17 02:55:34 EST 2003
hello shrav,
Why dont u continue it?
"Nijangal Elaguvaanavai..
Ninaivugal ganamaanavai..!
Ninaiththu paarkiren..
Yeno Valikkurathu
Yenthan Idhayam..! "<<<
emotional! nice!
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