Pichaikkaaran
Topic started by Thiagarajan (@ 203.90.90.45) on Wed Apr 24 00:49:09 .
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Ivvulagil picchai
Eduppavargalai parthu
Naam yaelanmaaga
Ninaikiroam
Oru vagaiyil parthaal
Namum ivvulagil
Picchaikaarargalthan
Iraivan namakkaaga
Koduthathu uyir picchai
Thaai than pillaikku
Kodupathu anbu picchai
Thanthai than maganukkku
Ootuvathu arivu picchai
Aasiriyar than maanavanukku
Pugattuvadhu kalvi picchai
Arasiyalvadhi makkalidam
Vaenduvathu oattu picchai
Kadhalan than kadhaliyidam
Vaendikkolvadhu
Kadhal picchai
Penn veetaaridam
Mappillai vanguvathu
Varadhatchanai picchai
Vaelaiyilla pattadharigal
Kaetpadhu vaelai picchai
Than thunaivan
Irakkum tharuvayil
Manaivi kaetpadhu
Thaali picchai
Ippadiyellam
Maraimugamaaga naam
Picchai eduppadhu
Namakkae therindhum
Theriyaadhadhu pol
Naagareegamaanavargal pol
Nadanthu kolgiroam
Aanal than vayitrupasiyai
Poakka picchai eduppavargalai
Thootruvathuthan
Ivvulagam
Vaarungal anaivarum ondru saernthu
Picchai eduppoam
Iraivanidam
Yaetrathazhvilla
Samudhaayam undaakka!
Responses:
- From: Thinker (@ bangdp-40-238.mantraonline.com)
on: Wed Apr 24 06:58:06
Revolutionary talk!
"Kadhalan than kadhaliyidam
Vaendikkolvadhu
Kadhal picchai "<<<<<
vice versa also possible.
"Penn veetaaridam
Mappillai vanguvathu
Varadhatchanai picchai "<<<<
Very well said. Its worse than pichai!
"Arasiyalvadhi makkalidam
Vaenduvathu oattu picchai "<<<<<
hehe!
:))
Iraivanidam Kaiyendungal...
Avan Illai endru solluvadillai
Porumaiyudan Ketuparungal...
Avan Pokkishatai mooduvadillai
La ilaaa ha illallah!
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Vinnukku tandai avane
MAnnukku vendan avane
vinnukku Avane ellai
Avan indri yarum illai
Alla petra pillai daaane yaarum!
la ila illal allah!
:)
"Yaetrathazhvilla
Samudhaayam undaakka!"<<<<
Amen! So be It! Tathastu!
- From: Thaya. (@ 192.30.226.29)
on: Wed Apr 24 19:52:14
will see later.
- From: Thiagarajan (@ 203.90.90.91)
on: Fri Apr 26 00:40:55
Thanks thinker, since i don't know ur name, thanks for ur valuable response which makes me to write more. thanks a lot
- From: Thaya. (@ 206-47-144-49.ip.tor.radiant.net)
on: Sat Apr 27 12:16:54
Thiyagarajan....kavithai form'la yen ezhuthalai?
if you conect all the sentances you would see a paragraph of a good thought.
when you structure in kavithai pattern,you shouldn't use the "conecting" words/meanings between lines.and should tell things in posible new way.
EX:
by vairamuththu,
Otrai kaalile
Pookkal nirppathu
Un koonthalil
paavaaha thaan.
when someone read a line,shouldn't guess the next line because of a repeated style of forming sentances for years and years.thats what makes a kavithai tastes better than a kaddurai i guess.
what you think?
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