Topic started by Thiagarajan (@ 203.90.90.45) on Wed Apr 24 00:49:09 .
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Ivvulagil picchai
Eduppavargalai parthu
Naam yaelanmaaga
Ninaikiroam

Oru vagaiyil parthaal
Namum ivvulagil
Picchaikaarargalthan

Iraivan namakkaaga
Koduthathu uyir picchai

Thaai than pillaikku
Kodupathu anbu picchai

Thanthai than maganukkku
Ootuvathu arivu picchai

Aasiriyar than maanavanukku
Pugattuvadhu kalvi picchai

Arasiyalvadhi makkalidam
Vaenduvathu oattu picchai

Kadhalan than kadhaliyidam
Vaendikkolvadhu
Kadhal picchai

Penn veetaaridam
Mappillai vanguvathu
Varadhatchanai picchai

Vaelaiyilla pattadharigal
Kaetpadhu vaelai picchai

Than thunaivan
Irakkum tharuvayil
Manaivi kaetpadhu
Thaali picchai

Ippadiyellam
Maraimugamaaga naam
Picchai eduppadhu
Namakkae therindhum
Theriyaadhadhu pol
Naagareegamaanavargal pol
Nadanthu kolgiroam

Aanal than vayitrupasiyai
Poakka picchai eduppavargalai
Thootruvathuthan
Ivvulagam

Vaarungal anaivarum ondru saernthu
Picchai eduppoam
Iraivanidam
Yaetrathazhvilla
Samudhaayam undaakka!

Responses:

• From: Thinker (@ bangdp-40-238.mantraonline.com) on: Wed Apr 24 06:58:06
  
  Revolutionary talk!
  
  
  "Kadhalan than kadhaliyidam
  Vaendikkolvadhu
  Kadhal picchai "<<<<<
  
  vice versa also possible.
  
  "Penn veetaaridam
  Mappillai vanguvathu
  Varadhatchanai picchai "<<<<
  
  Very well said. Its worse than pichai!
  
  "Arasiyalvadhi makkalidam
  Vaenduvathu oattu picchai "<<<<<
  
  hehe!
  
  :))
  
  
  
  
  Iraivanidam Kaiyendungal...
  Avan Illai endru solluvadillai
  
  Porumaiyudan Ketuparungal...
  Avan Pokkishatai mooduvadillai
  
  La ilaaa ha illallah!
  
  _____________________________
  
  Vinnukku tandai avane
  MAnnukku vendan avane
  
  vinnukku Avane ellai
  Avan indri yarum illai
  
  Alla petra pillai daaane yaarum!
  
  la ila illal allah!
  
  :)
  
  "Yaetrathazhvilla
  Samudhaayam undaakka!"<<<<
  
  Amen! So be It! Tathastu!
  
  
• From: Thaya. (@ 192.30.226.29) on: Wed Apr 24 19:52:14
  
  will see later.
  
  
• From: Thiagarajan (@ 203.90.90.91) on: Fri Apr 26 00:40:55
  
  Thanks thinker, since i don't know ur name, thanks for ur valuable response which makes me to write more. thanks a lot
  
  
• From: Thaya. (@ 206-47-144-49.ip.tor.radiant.net) on: Sat Apr 27 12:16:54
  
  Thiyagarajan....kavithai form'la yen ezhuthalai?
  if you conect all the sentances you would see a paragraph of a good thought.
  
  when you structure in kavithai pattern,you shouldn't use the "conecting" words/meanings between lines.and should tell things in posible new way.
  
  EX:
  by vairamuththu,
  
  Otrai kaalile
  Pookkal nirppathu
  Un koonthalil
  paavaaha thaan.
  
  when someone read a line,shouldn't guess the next line because of a repeated style of forming sentances for years and years.thats what makes a kavithai tastes better than a kaddurai i guess.
  what you think?
  
  

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