Topic started by anita (@ 203.106.162.218) on Mon Aug 25 02:45:33 .
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Kadigaarathin sutru payanathil
Naam santhippathu
23-aam niruthathil

tuungga vendiya
vasantha kaalathai thirudi

avasaramaai arai vanthu
kanippori eluppi

inaiyathitku ambeithum
antha nodiyil . . .

‘hang’ aagiya kaniniyin
maruvaalvitkaai kaathirunthu
marupadiyum ‘line’ inaithu

inaiyathil kaalpathithathum…

en anjal pettiyil
valinthu kidakkum kaduthaasigal
muulgadikkum

antha vilambarak kuppaigalin naduve
un ottrai anjalthaan
enakku swaasam koduthathu

athai,
tirakkum bothu silirpil
padikkum bothu negilvil
bathil eluthiyathum…tiruptiyil

ellaam iru nimida vaettaithaan

aanaalum,
annerathil nee ‘log-in’ pannuvaaye
appothuthaan - en
uthadugal punnagaiyai prasavikkum
‘saxophone’ isai ithayathil olikkum

nammai inaitha inayathai vida
nam vaarthaigalai adukki
alagu paarkum
intha ‘messenger’
punithamaanathu allavaa?

Vanakkathil todanggi
Nalangalai kadanthu
Nam natpu varigal
Aniserum idaivelaiyil

Marainthu pogum
Minsaaram
Nitchayam
Tuukku tandanaikkuriyathu !

Viraktiyodu talaiyanai naadinen
Maraintathu minsaaramum neeyum
Un ninaivugal allave !

Enna araiyil
Oru sinna uuduruval

Nee , naan
Nammai inaitha tolamai
Nijama?nizhala?

Ethanai valakkugal
Veetilum naatilum

Ada . . .
Natpu enna kolaikkutramaa?

Aan , pen palaginal
Athu kaathalukkaana
Sibaarisaagividuma?

Sattathil
Ethanaiyaavathu ‘section’ ithu?

Vaa nanba

Naam kaikorthe
Mulakkamiduvom
Ithu kaathalar thottam alla
Nanbargal nanthavanam endru

Naam kaipidithe
Korikkaiyiduvom
Ithu kaathalar thinam alla
Nanbargal yugam endru !!!

-anita-

Responses:

• From: Jaque (@ acbf84b7.ipt.aol.com) on: Mon Aug 25 03:51:30 EDT 2003
  
  Hi anita
  ninga sollurethellaam saridhaan, vaarungal
  
  Naam kaikorthe
  Mulakkamiduvom
  Ithu kaathalar thottam alla
  Nanbargal nanthavanam endru
  
  Naam kaipidithe
  Korikkaiyiduvom
  Ithu kaathalar thinam alla
  Nanbargal yugam endru !!!
  
  aana vonnu mattum yenaku puriyala, yenna adhu----->>
  Viraktiyodu talaiyanai naadinen
  Maraintathu minsaaramum neeyum
  Un ninaivugal allave !
  
  -----------> idharkaana vilakkam
  
  apparam, naan yen kanipori anjal pottigalil vilambarangaluku idam koduppathillai
  
  ENDRENDUM ANBUDAN
  Jaque
  
  
• From: yeah (@ 65.110.6.34) on: Mon Aug 25 04:31:25 EDT 2003
  
  yeah
  
  
• From: flowerguy (@ balance2.baplc.com) on: Mon Sep 1 08:58:53 EDT 2003
  
  kavithai nandraaga irukku.
  but the poem talks about only Email/Chat/SMS kind of friendship.
  
  Internet vasathi illaatha idathilum...nalla nanbargal irukkiraargal.
  technology vEru....natpu vEru.
  tomorrow a new technology can replace all these existing technologies.
  
  thozilnutpathai thaandi endha oru natpu nilaikkiratho...adhuve miga sirandha natpu.
  thodarnthu ezhutha vaazhthukkal.
  
  
• From: Surathi (@ cache10-5.ruh.isu.net.sa) on: Mon Sep 1 09:54:13 EDT 2003
  
  ANITA, azhagana varigal. friendship-day andru veliyittirukkalame !
  
  "Vanakkathil todanggi
  Nalangalai kadanthu
  Nam natpu varigal
  Aniserum idaivelaiyil
  
  Marainthu pogum
  Minsaaram
  Nitchayam
  Tuukku tandanaikkuriyathu !"
  
  
• From: anita (@ 203.106.162.205) on: Sun Sep 7 11:47:04 EDT 2003
  
  vanakkam jaque
  
  ninggal kettathatkaana vilakkam
  
  "Viraktiyodu talaiyanai naadinen"
  -kavithaiyin muthal muundru varigalil ullathu pol ithatkaana situation iravil amaikappattulathu..."23-aam niruthathil"...11.00pm - so minsaaram illatha nilaiyil paduthapadi sinthanai seivathai oru sinna katpanai(somemore its time to sleep illaiya)....minsaaram nam sakthikku appaatpattu maraiyalaam aanal ninaivugal appadi allave....
  did i answer ur question???
  
  flowerguy,
  
  unggal karuttugalai mathikkiren..mikka nandri
  
  >>>technology vEru....natpu vEru.>>>
  
  tech n f/ship ondru endru nan kuura villaiye!!!
  
  kavithaikku oru karuvaaga inaiya tholamaiyai payanpaduthinen..avvalave!!!
  
  surathi,
  
  thanks!!!
  
  en kavithaikaaga f/ship day kaathirukalaam aanal f/ship day'kaaga en kavithai kaathirukalaamo???
  (just kidding)
  
  
  

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