Enakku-20 Unakku-18
Topic started by rasikow Nihmathulla (@ 202.131.132.177) on Fri Dec 12 08:02:51 EST 2003.
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Un niniaivugalai
konjam thooramaahavea
vaithullean
yen meethu
yenakku bayam...
Un gnabahach chumaigal
thaanga mudiyaamal
yen kanavugal
udainthupovathu
unakkuth theriyaathu...
Mehath thuhalinil
thanneer olinthaal
mazaiyay poziyum
yen ithayath thuhalinil
nee olinthathaal
pizaiyay nirtkirean...
Yen vayathin
thavippu
yennodu pohattum
unakkul kuzappam
inimealum maattean...
Thanimayil
irunthu vittupohirean
vittuvidu ithayamea...
Responses:
- From: Amsa (@ alyon-209-1-11-141.w193-253.abo.wanadoo.fr)
on: Fri Dec 12 11:19:45 EST 2003
vovoru varigalam azhaga irruku aana ninaichi pakka kachtama irruku
- From: rasikow Nihmathull (@ 202.131.132.177)
on: Sat Dec 13 06:50:26 EST 2003
thanks amsa.
- From: Shakthi Seshadri (@ 202.9.149.208)
on: Mon Dec 22 13:07:42 EST 2003
Its a beautiful poem. A very matured decision unlikely for the age mentioned. Why pizhaiyay? As if the thought of the girl is a sin? But the poem makes a lyrical and good reading. Hope to get more such poems from you Nihmathull
- From: malligai (@ 65-102-252-246.dnvr.qwest.net)
on: Tue Dec 23 19:51:10 EST 2003
RH,
kavidhai is very nice...aana 20 vayasulaye kaadhal vendamnu soliteengaley??..sad!! :))
just kidding... :)
- From: rasikow Nihmathulla (@ 202.131.132.177)
on: Sun Dec 28 01:24:44 EST 2003
thanks sakthi and malligai
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