tragic flaws of humanity and my despair
Topic started by shaun cartwright (@ toronto-hse-ppp3630639.sympatico.ca) on Tue Sep 2 14:25:40 .
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LATELY
been waiting and staring
thinking of my future
not caring
reasons why i shouldn't die
pondering and stumbling
thoughts comming out dry
sitting between these four walls contained
i see myself on the inside
feelings and emotion drain
trying my best to stay sane
not knowing what to do with this pain
so i pick up this pad and pen
hoping if i write these thoughts
they won't come back again
Responses:
- From: Pavalamani Pragasam (@ dialpool-210-214-8-160.maa.sify.net)
on: Wed Sep 3 01:29:48 EDT 2003
Come out of the four walls
Then your gloomy shroud falls
Listen! the wide world calls!
Happiness is not sold in malls
Its recipe is not a secret-
Charity is its main ingredient.
- From: Hemant Trivedi (@ 203.195.208.26)
on: Wed Sep 3 06:49:40 EDT 2003
Hello Shaun,
I just composed the reply.
Shaun , my unknown friend
Waiting for future
Is a worthless task.
It'll come whether you wait or not.
Death and future
Are not what you control.
The fear of unknown
Rises in heart and forces
You to lock within four walls
Seeking safety. But safety from what ?
Fear arises from within
And your pain increases.
Unlock yourself
Open your doors wide.
Watch the sun rise
Hear the birds chirp.
Chase a small pup
Gather smiling baby in arms.
I am sure God would help you ,
To forget pain
And teach you how to smile.
For you have miles to Go.
Better go in all smiles. !!!
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